Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEFKP4W2CEP617C8AWN8RP

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21.8s
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$0.001332
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Parasail

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The dense foliage parted with a gentle rustle as the group stepped into the hidden grove. A soft glow emanated from the wildflowers that carpeted the ground, their colors shifting and swirling in a mesmerizing dance. The air shimmered with an unnatural energy, prickling against their skin. Aurora Carter's eyes darted around, taking in the alien beauty that surrounded them. She twisted the fae-forged blade in her hands, feeling its cool metal against her palm. Nyx floated beside her, an amorphous black mass that seemed to melt into the shadows, faintly visible in the ethereal light. Isolde led their way, her silver hair streaming down her back. The ancient stones that bordered the grove seemed to pulse with power, and Aurora felt the faintest tug in her heartstone pendant. "I have never heard of such a place," Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible. "Few know of the secrets of the fae," Isolde replied, her lavender eyes darting about. Even though they were in an alien place, purely streaked with magic, Isolde's voice was calm and controlled. As they walked further into the grove, the scene around them seemed to change at every single step, as if bending around them. A babbling brook appeared and disappeared in moments, and the trees wavered their positions. Aurora and Nyx kept glancing at each other to check if they were seeing the same thing. The creatures in the bush twisted into stranger forms, with dazzling lumines, and spider-like limbs adorned in webs of their own light. "Have we entered a place from another time, or are we just used to what exists in our world right now?" Aurora whispered. "Perhaps both," Nyx intoned with a whisper beneath its words, "Or neither, existing in a place outside the confines of logic." "Fae magic is not that foreign to us, but there is something else here. Something only this place contains." Isolde nodded as if answering a question. "We do not know what that is yet, but we can attempt to find out." A deep unease settled over them at these words, and they moved forward, steps more hesitant and shorts. For some time, they walked through what looked like tunnels made of branches and flowers. Mauve light brown lights floated about, illuminating the tunnels with a sickly sweet scent. The trio could only guess what these lights were, but they knew they were powerful and that they did not wish to fall into them. The tunnels twisted and turned, creating a confusing sight for their eyes. Each side of the tunnel seemed to become the opposite wall, and they soon lost all sense of what separated the walls, the ground, and the ceiling. Aurora soon realized, while following Isolde and Nyx, that her sense of Self had gotten lost, and she was not sure where one started and the other ended, and she paused to keep herself from freaking out. "Aurora, we cannot stop, not now," Isolde called out, and Aurora continued to follow. Shapes and shadows began to emerge from the walls, and they seemed to be reaching out for them, hands with too many fingers, limbs without proper form. And yet, the path they took was clear, as if a guiding hand was leading them, down one path, and away from the other. Things became more and more confusing as they moved, some things even felt like they began to drill or flick through the top of their skulls, as if trying to break through, for a moment, it seemed as if Isolde was connecting with them somehow, as if the thoughts were being shared, but soon the move kept them from analyzing it, as they marched forward with firm resolve. The walls seemed to be closing in on them with every step, and the lights seemed to be brighter. Through the overlapping walls, they could see that the lights were forming a series of symbols, like some ancient runes. And then, the walls seemed to fade, leaving them open in a new space. Before their eyes, a name, Nox, glowed in the front, in some manner signaling the end of their journey. The room glowed, and the white light seemed to blind them. The walls now seemed lined with letters in the same style as Nox, and a strange and terrifying force seemed to emanate from them, something primordial, as if they were looking at the source of creation, the root of all that they were and all that they ever could be. And then, a set of teeth enclosed on Isolde, ripping her off, into the unknown. She screamed, and as she did, she smiled, as if she had gotten what she wanted, and everything had been complete. The letters blurred and disappeared, leaving the three, soon to be two, in a new and strange place, awaiting and wondering. Aurora stood transfixed, her breath caught in her throat. The sheer magnitude of the revelation was overwhelming. What haunts you once known, storms from within, A silent voice that whispers in the dark, its message barely thinned. As you stand there, here, Perfect, whole, without a tear. Love fascinates, then causes hate, If everything you wish, you can never debate.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:08:02.77Z" 5/27/2026, 10:08:02 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.857
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount868
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount868
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"dance"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"streaming"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count2
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"transfixed"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"dance"
1"shimmered"
2"streaming"
3"pulse"
4"wavered"
5"whisper"
6"sense of"
7"resolve"
8"transfixed"
9"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords868
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount778
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Aurora8
Isolde8
Nyx4
Self1
Shapes1
Nox2
Perfect1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Self"
5"Nox"
places(empty)
globalScore0.986
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"mass that seemed to melt into the shadows, faintly visible in the ethereal light"
1"as if bending around them"
2"as if answering a question"
3"looked like tunnels made of branches and"
4"as if trying to break through, for a moment, it seemed as if Isolde was connecting with them somehow, as if the thoughts were being shared, but soon the move kept them from analyzing it, as they marched forward with firm resolve"
5"felt like they began to drill or flick"
6"seemed lined with letters in the same style as Nox, and a strange and terrifying force seemed to emanate from them, something primordial, as if they were looking at the source of creation, the root of all that they were and all that they ever could be"
84.79% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.152
wordCount868
matches
0"not that foreign to us, but there is something else here"
90.91% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"see that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean34.72
std21.27
cv0.613
sampleLengths
047
149
233
314
433
554
622
723
821
941
1018
1154
1276
1314
1427
1592
1639
1714
1819
1961
2057
2117
2220
2310
2413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs143
matches
0"were seeing"
1"was leading"
2"was connecting"
3"were being"
4"were forming"
5"were looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences44
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"soon lost all sense"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03337612323491656
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007702182284980745
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean19.73
std10.45
cv0.53
sampleLengths
016
120
211
313
415
521
611
722
814
915
1018
1123
1214
1317
1422
1523
1621
1726
1815
1918
2015
2114
2225
2312
2427
2537
2614
2727
2824
2968
3019
3120
3214
3319
3411
3550
3615
3721
3821
399
408
4120
4210
4313
84.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5454545454545454
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"She twisted the fae-forged blade"
1"She screamed, and as she"
ratio0.048
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences42
matches
0"The dense foliage parted with"
1"A soft glow emanated from"
2"The air shimmered with an"
3"Aurora Carter's eyes darted around,"
4"She twisted the fae-forged blade"
5"Nyx floated beside her, an"
6"Isolde led their way, her"
7"The ancient stones that bordered"
8"Aurora whispered, her voice barely"
9"Isolde replied, her lavender eyes"
10"A babbling brook appeared and"
11"Aurora and Nyx kept glancing"
12"The creatures in the bush"
13"Nyx intoned with a whisper"
14"Isolde nodded as if answering"
15"A deep unease settled over"
16"Mauve light brown lights floated"
17"The trio could only guess"
18"The tunnels twisted and turned,"
19"Each side of the tunnel"
ratio0.762
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"Even though they were in"
1"Before their eyes, a name,"
ratio0.048
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A soft glow emanated from the wildflowers that carpeted the ground, their colors shifting and swirling in a mesmerizing dance."
1"Aurora Carter's eyes darted around, taking in the alien beauty that surrounded them."
2"Nyx floated beside her, an amorphous black mass that seemed to melt into the shadows, faintly visible in the ethereal light."
3"Things became more and more confusing as they moved, some things even felt like they began to drill or flick through the top of their skulls, as if trying to br…"
4"The walls now seemed lined with letters in the same style as Nox, and a strange and terrifying force seemed to emanate from them, something primordial, as if th…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible"
1"Isolde replied, her lavender eyes darting about"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.75
73.1209%