| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "loosely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "dancing" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "predictable" | | 4 | "cascading" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "normalcy" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "resolved" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 20.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1227 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1002 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.8 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 18 | | London | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Suspected | 1 | | Hostel | 1 | | Dreams | 1 | | Evan | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.602 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed made of polished ivory rather than rotting wood" | | 1 | "looked like hanging silver bells but diss" | | 2 | "moss that seemed to cushion each step" | | 3 | "felt like passing through velvet" | | 4 | "looked like a ritual" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 9 | | per1kWords | 7.335 | | wordCount | 1227 | | matches | | 0 | "not your own but fitting to this place" | | 1 | "not just time,\" Isolde explained, approaching one of the spheres, \"but events" | | 2 | "not of Evan, but of a different place entirely" | | 3 | "not his present, perhaps, but a moment" | | 4 | "not Evan, not a person at all, but a creature of shimmering light with no discernible form but" | | 5 | "not a person at all, but a creature of shimmering light with no discernible form but" | | 6 | "no discernible form but" | | 7 | "not the sustenance but the experiences" | | 8 | "not just at a boundary between worlds, but at the edge of understanding something fundamental about exi" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 34.08 | | std | 20.1 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 90 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 71 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was bathed" | | 1 | "being consumed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora had delivered a package to the wrong address that morning – or so she thought." | | 1 | "It emanated from everything around them – the bioluminescent mushrooms clustering around ancient tree roots, the phospha-like mushrooms clustered around ancient tree roots, the phosphorescent flowers pulsing with gentle rhythm, even the individual blades of grass seemed to hum with contained light." | | 2 | "The instant her fingertips made contact, visions flooded her mind – not of Evan, but of a different place entirely." | | 3 | "With those words, a figure materialized between them – not Evan, not a person at all, but a creature of shimmering light with no discernible form but somehow conveying intent and hunger." | | 4 | "But this place was magical and dangerous, and her ex-partner – however monstrous he had been in life – was somehow still being consumed in this mystical liminal state." |
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| 96.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1001 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04395604395604396 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015984015984015984 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.96 | | std | 8.92 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 95.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5853658536585366 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of finding the elderly" | | 1 | "Suddenly, Isolde stopped, lifting a" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, stepping over a" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 2 | "It emanated from everything around" | | 3 | "they whispered, voice tinged with" | | 4 | "Her eyes seemed to drink" | | 5 | "she asked, crouching at the" | | 6 | "Their leaves shimmered in the" | | 7 | "Its branches formed a perfect" | | 8 | "They didn't appear decayed but" | | 9 | "He'd vanished months ago, and" | | 10 | "She saw amber skies, expansive" | | 11 | "She smelled exotic spices and" | | 12 | "she gasped, pulling her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.191 | |
| 99.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter squeezed her fist" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her" | | 2 | "Evening mist curled around their" | | 3 | "she murmured, stepping over a" | | 4 | "Nyx, the Shade, flickered at" | | 5 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 6 | "Isolde said without turning, her" | | 7 | "Aurora had delivered a package" | | 8 | "Time had behaved strangely within" | | 9 | "something else entirely." | | 10 | "Isolde beckoned, vanishing behind a" | | 11 | "The ground beneath Aurora's boots" | | 12 | "The entire grove was bathed" | | 13 | "It emanated from everything around" | | 14 | "Nyx reached out a hand" | | 15 | "they whispered, voice tinged with" | | 16 | "Isolde explained, finally turning to" | | 17 | "Her eyes seemed to drink" | | 18 | "Aurora nodded, careful to keep" | | 19 | "Each step felt like passing" |
| | ratio | 0.721 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Though her back was turned," | | 1 | "Before them, the grove opened" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Though her back was turned, Aurora could see the pale lavender of her eyes reflecting the orchid-colored sky that had replaced the familiar London dusk." | | 1 | "Instead of finding the elderly man who had ostensibly ordered fusion cuisine from Golden Empress, she'd discovered this mysterious grove hidden somewhere in the…" | | 2 | "The ground beneath Aurora's boots changed from familiar London earth to a soft, carpet-like moss that seemed to cushion each step." | | 3 | "Through breaks in the canopy, she could still see that unusual lavender hue of the atmosphere, with stars that didn't contract constellations she recognized." | | 4 | "The trees grew taller, their bark shifting from oak to something that resembled polished obsidian with veins of silver." | | 5 | "Their leaves shimmered in the ghost light, creating a pattern that made Aurora dizzy if she stared too long." | | 6 | "Suspected humanoid figures, suspended in transparent orbs that floated several feet above the ground." | | 7 | "The Hostel Dreams, her abusive ex-partner who had disappeared after she'd found him in their flat performing what looked like a ritual." | | 8 | "She saw amber skies, expansive banquets, and a prince with too many teeth who presided over an endless feast." | | 9 | "Ethereal light gathered around the seer, and she spoke words that were somehow both silent and deafening in Aurora's mind." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice tinged with wonder" | | 1 | "Aurora asked, her voice tight" | | 2 | "Nyx observed, their voice barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 8 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 9 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 10 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 11 | "Aurora shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |