Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEH5FXYTMPJ2ETXTGRNXHJ

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26.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The relentless downpour obscured the London streets as Detective Quinn pursued her suspect through the labyrinthine alleys. Rain lashed her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, rivulets streaming down her stern face. She dodged a puddle, her boots splashing through the murky water as she rounded a corner. There in the distance she spotted him - Tomás Herrera, small and ducking into a nondescript doorway. She rushed forward, heart pounding with exertion and anticipation. This former paramedic with the short curly hair and warm brown eyes had evaded her too long. She would have him tonight. Quinn reached the door, but it slammed shut before her gloved hand could grasp the knob. The lock clicked ominously, sealing her out. She took a step back, peering up at the weathered brick building in the darkness. Finding no sign of life, she decided to circle the block, looking for another entrance. Raindrops hit the pavement like bullets as she rushed forward, scanning the terrain. The streetlights flickered then switched off one by one, submerging the neighborhood in shadows. Quinn narrowed her eyes, hand resting on the gun at her hip. A chill snaked down her spine - even for this seedy part of town, an escape of this magnitude took planning. Was it a trap? She inched forward, senses on high alert. All was eerily quiet, save for the splattering of rain. Quinn took a deep breath, steeling herself for whatever lay ahead. She had been tracking Herrera for weeks, unraveling his shadowy connections. Now, she was close - too close for him to stop. He would show his cards soon, one way or another. Quinn's flashlight beam darted over worn brick walls and crumbling architecture, the filtered light from windows, jammed with garments and brocaded tapestries reflected on slick, shimmering pavements as she moved forward. Finally, she spotted an unassuming door just past a pile of rusted barrels. She crept closer, listening. Static and whispers emerged that she couldn't quite make out, but it definitely sounded like voices discussing something in hushed tones. Quinn raised an eyebrow. What sort of clandestine operation was Herrera running from this dump? She had her suspicions about his ties to the supernatural underworld, but she needed hard evidence. Pulling her boots off and tying them around her waist, she climbed the rusted fire escape attached to the building, hoping to get a better look from above. The metal groaned under her weight as she hauled herself to the top floor. From a broken window, she could see the edge of a large, dimly lit space filled with makeshift market stalls and strange patrons. "Bargains on all manner of enchanted paraphernalia and alchemical concoctions," a booming voice called out. "Deals in souls and secrets on every corner. Find what you need at the Veil Market, where the extraordinary and the extraordinary collide." Quinn frowned, fright slicing through her. This was deeper than the city's criminal element. She was dealing with something truly otherworldly. She had two choices. Leave now and regroup to come back armed and reinforced, or go in. Against her training, she chose the latter. Adrenaline or insanity, she wasn't sure what she was following, welding her gun, she picked the lock and muscled the door open. Light winked on wells and her breath misted in the cold. Shadowy figures darted about, clutched items in defiant frontier. Gaslights flickered, and a pungent odor rose from the floor: minerals, meat, and something else she couldn't place that made her skin crawl. In the distance, a high, keening wail echoed. Quinn's nerves tensed. This was no ordinary black market. A short, wiry man with rotting teeth muttering something unintelligible approached her. Quinn waved her hand impatiently. She didn't need guff from this sleaze. She scanned the wares for Tomás’s telltale curls, but saw nothing resemblant of the man. Finally, the vendor scuttled away and Quinn moved forward. The floor was a mottled patchwork of stains, shredded merchandise strewn under worn shoes. Gold etiquette signs and plush drapes created a mere illusion of class around them. The real conversation - money changing hands, items being bartered - made sense but exchanged on the edge of her focus. Suddenly, a door slammed in the back. A pair of bloodshot eyes peeked out at her. Osaka's bloodshot eyes widened and Tomás, clean shaven, clean as a whistle, paced over, bright as if taken right from the bath. His eyes darted towards Quinn, then flashed to the vein bulging on his neck. He straightened his jacket and stepped toward her. "Well, hello there, detective. Shortcropped silver fox," he spread his arms, "to what do I owe this pleasure. Looking for a herbal remedy... or something else?" Quinn's eyes narrowed. She'd heard enough. This was neither the time nor the place for games. "Cut the crap, Tommy. We both know what this is. I saw you at Silas' dive, now here," she brandished her gun, "I'm not messing around. Either you come quietly or I drag you out of here. Your choice." Tomás's smile vanished and a flicker of fear crossed his face. Quinn's heart raced. She'd come this far, caught him off his game, vulnerable. If she could just get him in cuffs and out of here, she could get the confession she needed. But something held him in place. "No, Detective. I think it's time you come with me instead," Tomás gestured somewhere over her shoulder. "Me and the Raven, we have unfinished business to settle. An old friend of hers is hearing what you said, and she wants to come say hi." A chill raced through her body. Silently, the hulking figure of the Raven herself materialized at the back of the room. Shock tore at Harlow as she stared into Silas' curdled stare. His long, ebon hair spilled down his smooth skin, down his pointy ears, down and down over his skeletal pallor. Rotted teeth and sallow skin framed filthy, unkempt talons grasping at her throat. The Raven flew forward, raking Silva's throat. Quinn felt hazy, almost as if she wasn't there. "Come, get comfortable," Silas... Hensman... ? ...beamed at her as he tightened his lapels. "We've got lots to catch up on." As he closed in, Quinn felt her mind freeze on the icy look in her captor's eyes. Sick. Terrified. Simply terrified.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:08:53.768Z" 5/27/2026, 10:08:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás gestured somewhere [somewhere]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
90.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"chill"
count2
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"unraveling"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"clandestine"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"otherworldly"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"raced"
count2
16
word"hulking"
count1
17
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"pounding"
2"anticipation"
3"scanning"
4"flickered"
5"chill"
6"down her spine"
7"unraveling"
8"eyebrow"
9"clandestine"
10"weight"
11"otherworldly"
12"echoed"
13"scanned"
14"flicker"
15"raced"
16"hulking"
17"comfortable"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1055
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount913
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Detective1
Quinn15
Tomás5
Herrera3
Raven2
Harlow1
Silva1
Hensman1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Silva"
6"Hensman"
places
0"London"
1"Harlow"
globalScore0.679
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite make out, but it definitely sounded like voices discussing something in hushed tones"
1"sounded like voices discussing something i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.948
wordCount1055
matches
0"neither the time nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"emerged that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean37.68
std22.12
cv0.587
sampleLengths
046
148
253
364
460
569
631
765
838
921
1046
1160
1239
1358
1460
1526
1616
1739
1849
1944
2072
219
224
232
248
257
2617
274
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"being bartered "
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was dealing"
1"was following"
11.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences87
ratio0.046
matches
0"There in the distance she spotted him - Tomás Herrera, small and ducking into a nondescript doorway."
1"A chill snaked down her spine - even for this seedy part of town, an escape of this magnitude took planning."
2"Now, she was close - too close for him to stop."
3"The real conversation - money changing hands, items being bartered - made sense but exchanged on the edge of her focus."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.028708133971291867
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01555023923444976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.11
std7.28
cv0.601
sampleLengths
017
113
216
317
49
517
65
716
87
915
1015
1113
1214
1312
1421
154
167
1710
1811
1911
2011
2110
2231
2313
244
2521
264
2711
2816
2928
3014
3123
3215
3323
346
358
367
374
3813
397
4022
4111
429
4323
448
453
466
4712
485
497
91.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5632183908045977
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences79
matches
0"All was eerily quiet, save"
1"Finally, she spotted an unassuming"
2"Finally, the vendor scuttled away"
3"Suddenly, a door slammed in"
4"Silently, the hulking figure of"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences79
matches
0"She dodged a puddle, her"
1"She rushed forward, heart pounding"
2"She would have him tonight."
3"She took a step back,"
4"She inched forward, senses on"
5"She had been tracking Herrera"
6"He would show his cards"
7"She crept closer, listening."
8"She had her suspicions about"
9"She was dealing with something"
10"She had two choices."
11"She didn't need guff from"
12"She scanned the wares for"
13"His eyes darted towards Quinn,"
14"He straightened his jacket and"
15"he spread his arms"
16"She'd heard enough."
17"she brandished her gun"
18"She'd come this far, caught"
19"His long, ebon hair spilled"
ratio0.253
86.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences79
matches
0"The relentless downpour obscured the"
1"Rain lashed her closely cropped"
2"She dodged a puddle, her"
3"There in the distance she"
4"She rushed forward, heart pounding"
5"This former paramedic with the"
6"She would have him tonight."
7"Quinn reached the door, but"
8"The lock clicked ominously, sealing"
9"She took a step back,"
10"Raindrops hit the pavement like"
11"The streetlights flickered then switched"
12"Quinn narrowed her eyes, hand"
13"A chill snaked down her"
14"She inched forward, senses on"
15"Quinn took a deep breath,"
16"She had been tracking Herrera"
17"He would show his cards"
18"Quinn's flashlight beam darted over"
19"She crept closer, listening."
ratio0.747
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now, she was close -"
1"If she could just get"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Osaka's bloodshot eyes widened and Tomás, clean shaven, clean as a whistle, paced over, bright as if taken right from the bath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0434%