| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said carefully [carefully]" | | 1 | "the phoenix asked wryly [wryly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.511 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 77.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "carried the weight" | | 16 | "resonated" | | 17 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1767 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1366 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 25 | | Fae-forged | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Time | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Prince" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Time" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.585 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed stretched yet music – was that music" | | 1 | "windows that seemed to be made of captured lightning" | | 2 | "looked like ice but remained unfrozen" | | 3 | "felt like grass beneath her boots" | | 4 | "seemed woven from solidified light, was a creature Rory had never seen but somehow recognized: a phoenix made of fire and shadow, its form shifting between bird and something else entirely" | | 5 | "looked like pure magic – violet and gold" | | 6 | "as if answering her unspoken uncertainty" |
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| 30.22% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.698 | | wordCount | 1767 | | matches | | 0 | "not of metal but of what appeared to be frozen time itself" | | 1 | "not with the burst of flames she'd expected, but with an explosion of what looked like pure magic" | | 2 | "no longer birdlike but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 34.65 | | std | 19.28 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 73 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 68 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "She had heard stories, of course – benign rumors about a hidden place in Richmond Park where time moved differently, where the rules of the mundane world didn't apply." | | 1 | "Sounds seemed stretched, yet music – was that music?" | | 2 | "– seemed to flow simultaneously fast and slow." | | 3 | "In the center of the grove, where the trees thinned and the sky – an amber sky, Rory realized with a jolt – filtered through, stood a structure that defied explanation." | | 4 | "Memories that weren't hers flashed through her mind – grand feasts and competition between chefs, the sharp bite of an exotic fruit, the sight of powered beings lounging on thrones of crystal that looked like ice but remained unfrozen." | | 5 | "The phoenix's eyes – one burning like a star, the other as dark as empty space – fixed on them as they entered." | | 6 | "The phoenix burst free, not with the burst of flames she'd expected, but with an explosion of what looked like pure magic – violet and gold lights spiraling outward like a galaxy being born." |
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| 87.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1363 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.05062362435803375 | | lyAdverbCount | 32 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02347762289068232 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 15.64 | | std | 9.43 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 70.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.46017699115044247 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "More tree than building, but" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 1 | "She had heard stories, of" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "She pushed through the hanging" | | 4 | "They seemed almost to organize" | | 5 | "Her eyes darted from woodland" | | 6 | "It vibrated in Rory's bones," | | 7 | "She blinked, and the sensation" | | 8 | "she said carefully" | | 9 | "Her brilliant blue eyes scanned" | | 10 | "it said, and fire briefly" | | 11 | "She stepped closer, around the" | | 12 | "She carefully drew the Fae-forged" | | 13 | "She brought the blade down" | | 14 | "it said, its voice now" | | 15 | "She was just a girl" | | 16 | "She sheathed the Fae blade," |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 42.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 1 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 2 | "The air shimmered with an" | | 3 | "She had heard stories, of" | | 4 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 5 | "Rory nodded, hands absently brushing" | | 6 | "Nyx gave a sound that" | | 7 | "Rory's fingers automatically rose to" | | 8 | "The warmth it radiated had" | | 9 | "The Fae-forged blade's ice-cold presence" | | 10 | "She pushed through the hanging" | | 11 | "The sensation was disorienting." | | 12 | "Sounds seemed stretched, yet music" | | 13 | "The air carried scents of" | | 14 | "Wildflowers that had no right" | | 15 | "They seemed almost to organize" | | 16 | "The trees, ancient oaks the" | | 17 | "Rory whispered, stepping forward carefully" | | 18 | "Her eyes darted from woodland" | | 19 | "A dragonfly with wings that" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes, bright blue and watchful, scanned the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "Wildflowers that had no right to be blooming in autumn carpeted the forest floor in impossible patterns." | | 2 | "The trees, ancient oaks the size of small houses, bore leaves that shimmered with iridescent light and sent golden pollen into the air, creating tiny sparks of …" | | 3 | "A dragonfly with wings that caught light and fractured it into rainbow shards hovered nearby, and a family of rabbits with fur the color of starlight and tiny, …" | | 4 | "More tree than building, but crafted by something other than nature alone, with branches growing into perfect arches and windows that seemed to be made of captu…" | | 5 | "Memories that weren't hers flashed through her mind – grand feasts and competition between chefs, the sharp bite of an exotic fruit, the sight of powered beings…" | | 6 | "Nyx's shadowy fingers brushed against her shoulder, a brief point of contact that grounded her immediately." | | 7 | "In the center of the main chamber, a fountain didn't flow with water but with shadows that Fe&d5tformed into stars before dissipating into thin air." | | 8 | "Rory covered her eyes, feeling the enormous flush of power that crashed through the grove before settling again into a warm breeze." | | 9 | "The entity floating before them looked mysterious and powerful, and yet also tired, as if it had carried the weight of the worlds for far too long." | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, as if answering her unspoken uncertainty." |
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| 38.04% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "the creature said, its voice simultaneously unnervingly adolescent and ancient" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their voice surprisingly gentle considering their unsettling nature" | | 2 | "the phoenix said, and the name hung like a weight in the air" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, her voice steady now" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "they explained (explain)" | | 5 | "the phoenix snapped (snap)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |