| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 733 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 733 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "crystalline" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "pristine" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "foreboding" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "tapestry" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 737 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 668 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Rippled | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 3 | | Siege | 1 | | Morphic | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Shimmering | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.527 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "s the horizon, seemingly endless fields of f" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 737 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.33% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 40.94 | | std | 15.65 | | cv | 0.382 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 71 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's hand inadvertently brushed the gemstone pendant around her neck as they crossed the threshold — faint heartbeats escalated as she entered the unknown territory." | | 1 | "Vast charmed gardens sprawled across the horizon, seemingly endless fields of flora — some shimmery in hue, others glowing, their radiance danced across Aurora's delicate features." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 666 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.03153153153153153 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01951951951951952 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 15.35 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 |
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| 89.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5625 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers were barely an" | | 1 | "Her fingers traced runes in" | | 2 | "She could feel it in" | | 3 | "She had come this far," | | 4 | "She would not falter now," | | 5 | "Her mind wove a fantastical" | | 6 | "They were greeted with the" | | 7 | "It was cool to the" | | 8 | "She took a drink, the" |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmering portal Rippled, inviting" | | 1 | "Aurora's hand inadvertently brushed the" | | 2 | "The air here was heavy" | | 3 | "Her fingers were barely an" | | 4 | "Plants recalled Aurora of a" | | 5 | "Walls formed from organic, Morphic" | | 6 | "Aurora's eyes widened as Nyx" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 8 | "Isolde moved gracefully among the" | | 9 | "Her fingers traced runes in" | | 10 | "Aurora tentatively took a few" | | 11 | "The path narrowed, and the" | | 12 | "Aurora hesitated, feeling an inexplicable" | | 13 | "The beauty was intoxicating, but" | | 14 | "She could feel it in" | | 15 | "Nyx seemed to sense her" | | 16 | "Isolde nodded sagely." | | 17 | "Aurora squared her shoulders, steeling" | | 18 | "She had come this far," | | 19 | "She would not falter now," |
| | ratio | 0.674 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "To protect the mortal world" | | 1 | "To find answers about her" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was heavy with Siege of different scents and flora, a world that existed beyond her known reality." | | 1 | "Aurora tentatively took a few steps forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft, luminescent moss that carpeted the ground." | | 2 | "With each step, she felt a tingling sensation, as if the very earth beneath her feet was alive and welcoming her." | | 3 | "Seeing her friends behind her stoked her heart, as if they too felt the same magesty and call to adventure in this impossible world." | | 4 | "Biting down on her lip, closing her dark chocolate eyes, Aurora cupped her hands beneath the fountain, letting it dance between her fingertips." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on the breeze" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |