Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEJ1XXQ2HKESHB5RWHCKH5

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17.3s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering portal Rippled, inviting Aurora, Nyx and Isolde into the otherworldly realm. Aurora's hand inadvertently brushed the gemstone pendant around her neck as they crossed the threshold — faint heartbeats escalated as she entered the unknown territory. The air here was heavy with Siege of different scents and flora, a world that existed beyond her known reality. Vast charmed gardens sprawled across the horizon, seemingly endless fields of flora — some shimmery in hue, others glowing, their radiance danced across Aurora's delicate features. Elegant crystalline trees with iridescent, hand-sized blooms dotted the landscape, whilst vaporous giant mushrooms and vibrant mists created hidden trails. Curious, Aurora extended a hand, running her fingers along a petal as soft as silk. Her fingers were barely an inch away from the delicate flower when the petals suddenly vibrated ! Startled, Aurora rifled her hand but this only caused the flower to emit a symphony of crystalline chimes. Pristine dew dripped from petals, holding the sun's light. Biting into an iridescent fruit released a gush of pearly -soft essence. Plants recalled Aurora of a glorious opulent palace. Walls formed from organic, Morphic crystal and crystal spires creating a breathtaking panorama. Aurora's eyes widened as Nyx materialized from a nearby shadow, their form shifting between darkness and substance. "This place is...different from anything in the mortal realm," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on the breeze. Isolde moved gracefully among the exotic flora, her silver hair flowing behind her like a river of starlight. "Yes, here the boundaries between realms blur, and magic marinates in the very air we breathe. I am intoxicating by the exquisite beauty." Her fingers traced runes in the air, and dozens of tiny, glowing creatures swirled around her like dandelion seeds dancing on a summer wind. Aurora tentatively took a few steps forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft, luminescent moss that carpeted the ground. With each step, she felt a tingling sensation, as if the very earth beneath her feet was alive and welcoming her. As they ventured deeper, the garden changed. The path narrowed, and the trees grew denser, their branches interlacing overhead to form a bower-like canopy. Fae-forged lanterns hung from the branches, casting an otherworldly glow that danced and shimmered. Aurora hesitated, feeling an inexplicable sense of foreboding. The beauty was intoxicating, but there was something else here, something hidden. She could feel it in the prickle along her skin, the way the pendant around her neck grew faintly warm. Nyx seemed to sense her unease. "We should be cautious, Aurora. This place... it's not without its dangers." Isolde nodded sagely. "The path ahead is obscured, shrouded in riddles and half-truths. The forces at play here are ancient and powerful, their motives unfathomable to mortal minds." Aurora squared her shoulders, steeling herself. She had come this far, crossed realms and walks between shadows, because it was necessary. To protect the mortal world from the growing threat of Hel. To find answers about her own strange journey. She would not falter now, not when she was so close. With a deep breath, she plunged onward, leaving the comfort of solid earth. The crystal beneath her feet gave way to undulating pool in dappled shadow, glowing with an ethereal light. An alien world of wonder and wonder sprawled out before her, contrasting with the comforting world of commodities, creeds and capital. Aurora's senses stretched in overdrive, absorbing the alien realm's magnanimous beauty. Her mind wove a fantastical tapestry of the impossibility of it all while she walked, amazed, through a Shimmering portal. Seeing her friends behind her stoked her heart, as if they too felt the same magesty and call to adventure in this impossible world. They were greeted with the sight of an oasis: a bubbling spring fed by the most decadent natural spring she had ever gazed upon. Vines of all shades and hues crept up its walls like great, pulsing artifacts of life. The feeling of its essence was most invigorating. The spring moved with rhythm, sending send joyous cascade drops dancing across its magical surface. Aurora bent down, reaching her hand into its depths. It was cool to the touch, tingling to her fingertips. Biting down on her lip, closing her dark chocolate eyes, Aurora cupped her hands beneath the fountain, letting it dance between her fingertips. She took a drink, the water clean and delicious. Where did it lead ?
created_at"2026-05-27T10:09:22.889Z" 5/27/2026, 10:09:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount733
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount733
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count2
1
word"crystalline"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count3
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count2
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"foreboding"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"tapestry"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"crystalline"
2"silk"
3"vibrated"
4"symphony"
5"pristine"
6"crystal"
7"traced"
8"dancing"
9"shimmered"
10"sense of"
11"foreboding"
12"could feel"
13"comforting"
14"tapestry"
15"depths"
16"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords737
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount668
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Rippled1
Aurora13
Nyx4
Isolde3
Siege1
Morphic1
Hel1
Shimmering1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Shimmering"
globalScore0.527
windowScore0.5
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"s the horizon, seemingly endless fields of f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount737
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
66.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean40.94
std15.65
cv0.382
sampleLengths
013
145
246
350
442
534
665
741
838
940
1018
1128
1240
1311
1452
1555
1648
1771
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"were greeted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences48
ratio0.042
matches
0"Aurora's hand inadvertently brushed the gemstone pendant around her neck as they crossed the threshold — faint heartbeats escalated as she entered the unknown territory."
1"Vast charmed gardens sprawled across the horizon, seemingly endless fields of flora — some shimmery in hue, others glowing, their radiance danced across Aurora's delicate features."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount666
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03153153153153153
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01951951951951952
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean15.35
std7.49
cv0.488
sampleLengths
013
125
220
326
420
515
617
718
89
912
108
1113
1217
1317
1418
1547
1620
1721
187
1917
2014
218
2212
2320
246
2512
263
2725
286
2915
3011
318
3211
3313
3418
3521
3611
3720
3824
3924
4016
418
4215
439
4410
4523
469
475
89.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5625
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences46
matches
0"Her fingers were barely an"
1"Her fingers traced runes in"
2"She could feel it in"
3"She had come this far,"
4"She would not falter now,"
5"Her mind wove a fantastical"
6"They were greeted with the"
7"It was cool to the"
8"She took a drink, the"
ratio0.196
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences46
matches
0"The shimmering portal Rippled, inviting"
1"Aurora's hand inadvertently brushed the"
2"The air here was heavy"
3"Her fingers were barely an"
4"Plants recalled Aurora of a"
5"Walls formed from organic, Morphic"
6"Aurora's eyes widened as Nyx"
7"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying"
8"Isolde moved gracefully among the"
9"Her fingers traced runes in"
10"Aurora tentatively took a few"
11"The path narrowed, and the"
12"Aurora hesitated, feeling an inexplicable"
13"The beauty was intoxicating, but"
14"She could feel it in"
15"Nyx seemed to sense her"
16"Isolde nodded sagely."
17"Aurora squared her shoulders, steeling"
18"She had come this far,"
19"She would not falter now,"
ratio0.674
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"To protect the mortal world"
1"To find answers about her"
ratio0.043
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air here was heavy with Siege of different scents and flora, a world that existed beyond her known reality."
1"Aurora tentatively took a few steps forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft, luminescent moss that carpeted the ground."
2"With each step, she felt a tingling sensation, as if the very earth beneath her feet was alive and welcoming her."
3"Seeing her friends behind her stoked her heart, as if they too felt the same magesty and call to adventure in this impossible world."
4"Biting down on her lip, closing her dark chocolate eyes, Aurora cupped her hands beneath the fountain, letting it dance between her fingertips."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on the breeze"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
77.4835%