| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "oppressive" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "tangible" | | 5 | "potential" | | 6 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1138 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 825 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Aurora | 10 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.894 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if treading on moss but the moss was made of velvet" | | 1 | "seemed particularly interested in the newcomers" | | 2 | "appeared closer or further away than they actually were" | | 3 | "patterns that seemed to respond to her movements" | | 4 | "looked like woven light, shifting pattern" | | 5 | "patterns that seemed to shift and move, depicting stories she couldn't comprehend but somehow felt in her bones" | | 6 | "something like a prophecy stained the amber" |
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| 24.25% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.757 | | wordCount | 1138 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a regular bell sound but one" | | 1 | "Not carvings in the conventional sense, but patterns" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 79.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.64 | | std | 17.45 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 32 |
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| 92.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "was made" | | 1 | "being served" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a regular bell sound but one that seemed to come from within the very air—a clear, pure note that hung suspended before fading into the unexpected oppressive humidity of the air." | | 1 | "Occasionally, strange creatures darted between trees—some resembling nothing so much as spinning tops of light, others with the bodies of snakes and heads of what might have been parrots." | | 2 | "The pool emitted a soft, recognizable sound—like the tinkling of tiny bells, harmonizing with the strange light in a way that seemed both intentional and random." |
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| 88.62% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 832 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.046875 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.026442307692307692 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 17.24 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 81.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Occasionally, strange creatures darted between" | | 1 | "Once, she reached out to" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "It was spongy, dark, and" | | 1 | "She glanced at her wrist" | | 2 | "It hadn't pulsed since they'd" | | 3 | "she murmured, adjusting the pack" | | 4 | "they whispered, their voice sounding" | | 5 | "Their petals seemed to capture" | | 6 | "she asked, pointing to a" | | 7 | "They swayed gently, though there" | | 8 | "they said, gesturing with a" | | 9 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "She wore what looked like" | | 11 | "she said without turning" | | 12 | "She gestured to the trees," | | 13 | "Her eyes were slightly different," | | 14 | "she said, her fingers absently" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 75.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's boots, worn from" | | 1 | "It was spongy, dark, and" | | 2 | "She glanced at her wrist" | | 3 | "It hadn't pulsed since they'd" | | 4 | "she murmured, adjusting the pack" | | 5 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at her" | | 6 | "Nyx flowed beside her, a" | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice sounding" | | 8 | "Aurora nodded, taking in the" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove wasn't a" | | 10 | "Wildflowers of every conceivable hue" | | 11 | "Their petals seemed to capture" | | 12 | "she asked, pointing to a" | | 13 | "They swayed gently, though there" | | 14 | "Nyx's form briefly dissolved, following" | | 15 | "they said, gesturing with a" | | 16 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 17 | "The path wasn't exactly a" | | 18 | "None of them seemed particularly" | | 19 | "Aurora muttered, pressing fingers to" |
| | ratio | 0.769 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Before anyone could answer, a" | | 1 | "Even after several minutes, her" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter's boots, worn from miles of London pavement, sank into something that wasn't exactly soil." | | 1 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip was reassuringly cold, its moonsilver surface catching flecks of light that didn't seem to come from any particular source." | | 2 | "Nyx flowed beside her, a humanoid silhouette of shadow that solidified with each step." | | 3 | "Their petals seemed to capture and refract the strange light filtering through the canopy, creating an ethereal glow that shifted between purple and blue and so…" | | 4 | "Not a regular bell sound but one that seemed to come from within the very air—a clear, pure note that hung suspended before fading into the unexpected oppressiv…" | | 5 | "Once, she reached out to touch what appeared to be a cluster of purple berries, only to have her hand pass through them as if they were mere light before her fi…" | | 6 | "As they rounded a particularly large stone that looked suspiciously like a failure of some thankfully not-ignored archaeological excavation, they came upon a sm…" | | 7 | "The pool emitted a soft, recognizable sound—like the tinkling of tiny bells, harmonizing with the strange light in a way that seemed both intentional and random…" | | 8 | "Not carvings in the conventional sense, but patterns that seemed to shift and move, depicting stories she couldn't comprehend but somehow felt in her bones." | | 9 | "A prince being served plate after plate of exotic delicacies by countless servants who moved with unnatural precision." | | 10 | "Isolde smiled then, a knowing, patient expression that seemed both ancient and new." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice sounding like wind through leaves" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |