Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEK09K954KBZAJY8X5MMZ7

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28.4s
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$0.000823
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the pavement, coming down in sheets that blurred Detroit Plcazar's face as he ducked into another alleyway. Detective Harlow Quinn cursed under her breath, her lungs burning as she pounded her boots against the wet cobblestones, her leather watch glistening under the sporadic streetlights. Three months she'd been following this lead, a trail of whispers about the Raven's Nest and its alleged connections to black market dealings, and finally, they had chanced upon the heir himself in the shadows of Soho. "Did you see which way he went?" Her partner, Ian Wilkins, splashed up beside her, his jacket already clinging damply to his thin frame. "The Catsaw Estate," Quinn snapped, pointing down a narrower street where neon signs reflected on puddles like watery constellations. "He went left, toward that green sign." They didn't speak as they ran now, their footsteps echoing against brick walls. The rain had intensified, a curtain that separated them from the rest of humanity, the two sworn to uphold the law now crashing through it like avenging angels. The green neon sign above The Raven's Nest grew nearer, a beacon in the storm, though no one entered or exited the establishment. When they reached the bar, Quinn didn't hesitate. She shoved open the heavy wooden door and swept inside, shaking water from her closely cropped hair as she scanned the dimly lit room. Old maps and black-and-white photographs adorned the walls, giving the bar an air of establishment despite its recent reputation. The air smelled of whiskey and stale beer, the place alive with conversation that stopped abruptly as Quinn strode in. "Has anyone seen someone come through here in the last minute?" she barked, flashing her badge to the nearest patron. "Detective Quinn, Metropolitan Police. Man, about my height, dark coat, running from the rain." Before anyone could answer, Quinn's eyes landed on a bookshelf in the back corner – one that didn't quite line up with the wall properly. Her instincts screamed as she jogged over, pushing against the shelves. With a soft scrape, they swung inward like a gate, revealing a darkened hallway. "Qunn, wait!" Wilkins hissed, following closely. "That bar's got history. People don't just disappear in there for wholesome reasons." But Quinn was already through, pulling her torch from her belt and clicking it on, the beam cutting through the darkness. The hallway opened into a small room with stairs descending into it. "Hell," Quinn whispered, glancing at her partner. "We're going down." Descending into unknown territory wasn't protocol, but her time in the Metropolitan Police had taught her that rules sometimes needed bending when you were deep in a case. She moved down the stairs, stepping carefully in her sodden shoes, Wilkins following close behind. The passage opened into a vast underground space, and Quinn froze. This was no basement storage. Countless stalls lined what looked like an abandoned Tube station platform, the walls glowing with unnatural colors, and she would recognize that distinctive green neon sign anywhere from the street above. "Shit," Wilkins breathed. "The Veil Market." A man stepped into their path, his olive skin a stark contrast to the muted lighting of the market. He was dressed unremarkably, but the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck caught the light, flickering in a way that shouldn't have been possible. "I'm afraid you've taken a wrong turn, officers," he said, his voice soft yet carrying easily through the bustling market. "This is private property." "Tomás Herrera?" Quinn asked, recognizing the description from her files. "You provide medical services for this circle, don't you?" The man's warm brown eyes flicked from Quinn to Wilkins and back again, calculating. "Aiding and abetting criminal activity would constitute a serious offense, Mr. Herrera," Quinn continued, taking a step closer. "Where did he go? The man in the coat? The one who nearly ran me down up there." Herrera sighed, looking around as if making sure no one watched. "They move the market every month," he said. "The suspect, as you call him, has already gone ahead. You're too late." "No one is ever too late, especially not for justice," Quinn replied, her sharp jaw tightening with determination. "I know men like these, Herrera. They trade in more than baubles and spices. People die to keep their operation running." Herrera watched Quinn carefully, his right hand straying briefly to touch the medallion at his neck. "You knew my partner, DS Morris. That's why you're here, isn't it? Because you think this is connected to how he died." The detective stiffened almost imperceptibly. How had he known that? "Everything is connected, Ms. Quinn," Herrera continued, his voice quieter now. "Morris didn't understand what he was really chasing. I think you do." Quinn's fingers itched for the badge at her hip, but she remained still. Decision time. She could turn around, let this slip into the darkness, or plunge deeper into this underground world with Herrera as something between a guide and a threat. "The man we're chasing," Quinn said slowly, her brown eyes locking onto Herrera's. "He had what I need in his pocket – proof of what they're really doing." "He will have moved on by now. To somewhere only those in the circle know," Herrera explained, shifting his weight from one foot to the other. "The tokens cycle, you see. You'd need the right one to even get in." "The bone tokens," Quinn nodded, understanding dawning. "That's how they control access." "Yes," Herrera confirmed. "Come with me." He turned and walked toward the far end of the market, not looking back. "It's your only chance. If you want to save whoever else they might be planning to harm, that is." Quinn glanced back at Wilkins, who gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod. They were committed. The rain might beat down on the streets above, but here, Quinn stood between justice and chaos, and she knew which path needed walking, even if it led into the darkness where her late partner had met his end. This time, she wouldn't be the one left behind, wondering what happened. This time, she was walking straight into the storm.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:09:53.984Z" 5/27/2026, 10:09:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
75.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1024
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1024
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"beacon"
4"scanned"
5"stark"
6"flicked"
7"calculating"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences52
matches
0"g with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1026
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount740
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.43
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detroit1
Plcazar1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Ian1
Wilkins6
Descending1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera7
persons
0"Plcazar"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Ian"
6"Wilkins"
7"Police"
8"Saint"
9"Christopher"
10"Herrera"
places
0"Detroit"
1"Soho"
2"Metropolitan"
globalScore0.284
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite line up with the wall properly"
1"looked like an abandoned Tube station pla"
2"as if making sure no one watched"
3"something between a guide and a threat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1026
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.38
std19.43
cv0.549
sampleLengths
085
124
226
364
471
534
650
719
833
910
1043
1147
126
1343
1424
1519
1614
1736
1832
1939
2038
2110
2223
2342
2428
2540
2612
2739
2875
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"was dressed"
1"were committed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences68
ratio0.015
matches
0"Before anyone could answer, Quinn's eyes landed on a bookshelf in the back corner – one that didn't quite line up with the wall properly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount741
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03643724696356275
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.018893387314439947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.09
std8.4
cv0.557
sampleLengths
021
127
237
324
419
57
613
728
823
98
1024
1119
1220
1320
1414
1525
1611
1714
186
1913
2021
2112
227
233
2428
2515
2611
275
2831
293
303
3119
3224
3320
344
3510
369
3714
3818
3918
4011
418
4213
4318
4421
4516
4622
475
485
4911
87.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5588235294117647
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences48
matches
0"Her partner, Ian Wilkins, splashed"
1"They didn't speak as they"
2"She shoved open the heavy"
3"she barked, flashing her badge"
4"Her instincts screamed as she"
5"She moved down the stairs,"
6"He was dressed unremarkably, but"
7"he said, his voice soft"
8"She could turn around, let"
9"He turned and walked toward"
10"They were committed."
ratio0.229
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences48
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn cursed under"
2"Her partner, Ian Wilkins, splashed"
3"Quinn snapped, pointing down a"
4"They didn't speak as they"
5"The rain had intensified, a"
6"The green neon sign above"
7"She shoved open the heavy"
8"The air smelled of whiskey"
9"she barked, flashing her badge"
10"Her instincts screamed as she"
11"Wilkins hissed, following closely"
12"The hallway opened into a"
13"Quinn whispered, glancing at her"
14"She moved down the stairs,"
15"The passage opened into a"
16"This was no basement storage."
17"A man stepped into their"
18"He was dressed unremarkably, but"
19"he said, his voice soft"
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Before anyone could answer, Quinn's"
ratio0.021
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn cursed under her breath, her lungs burning as she pounded her boots against the wet cobblestones, her leather watch glistening under the …"
1"The rain had intensified, a curtain that separated them from the rest of humanity, the two sworn to uphold the law now crashing through it like avenging angels."
2"He was dressed unremarkably, but the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck caught the light, flickering in a way that shouldn't have been possible."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his voice soft yet carrying easily through the bustling market"
1"Quinn replied, her sharp jaw tightening with determination"
2"Herrera continued, his voice quieter now"
3"Quinn said slowly, her brown eyes locking onto Herrera's"
4"Quinn nodded, understanding dawning"
5"He turned, not looking back"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Quinn snapped (snap)"
1"she barked (bark)"
2"Wilkins hissed (hiss)"
3"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
4"Wilkins breathed (breathe)"
5"Quinn continued (continue)"
6"Herrera continued (continue)"
7"Herrera explained (explain)"
8"Herrera confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.643
effectiveRatio0.545
77.6913%