Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEM44KS2P4TM55434A3ERQ

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16.4s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chassis creaked as Detective Harlow Quinn's sedan pulled up to an abandoned Tube station alongside the Thames. Rain drummed against the car roof and Jalan Hendershot's hulking form beside her. The threadbare lip of his thin hood looked suitably out of place against his mailboy uniform, even if the outfit was just a cover for his true identity - the Head Deacon working for The Veil's High Syndicate. Harlow stepped out to inhale a deep breath. Sutton Road in Camden cut a bleak path through the congestion of foggy illumination from the local streetlamp. Candor lay buried beneath a mass of vegetation and cracks on the concrete walkway, each step casting talons into the damp earth beneath their attire. The Market awaited them in a derelict tunnel below ground, a shadowed refuge scurried by feral things. This time, Harlow and Jalan summoned one such denizen to draw back the curtain on another stinging question. The stone arch led to a dank courtyard filled with the detritus of homemade signages and knick-knacks - Jadan's Cove sprawled beneath the metallic glint of the abandoned station, the charm of a pirate haven for a lost color rising in gloom. Over by the kiosks, Harlow glimpsed a familiar figure. Under the hood of a sky-blue jean jacket, she stared with wide emerald eyes — they were green as sea glass and framed by amber laces, that somehow softened her burnt shoulders. Feline and gracefully tall, Eve Kowalski had a whispered aura. It was not just an eerie but haunting presence, a woman with tame red curls that made serving as an archivist and researcher seem more tool-like than benevolent as she stood before the stalls of a rogue showroom. Harlow stepped forward. "Eve, what are you doing here? You'll be found out by the High Syndicate." A ripple of static laughter was Eve's reply. "Really, High- herself Detective, and here I thought The Syndicate was already giving you the goosebumps." She gestured at the surrounding marble kiosks. "But tell me... What if we can find the key to what's wrong here, right here in plain sight? The answer to a much closer mystery?" By now, Harlow couldn't pull her gaze from the erratic visages and the impossible build-up of Ondrian trinkets from the Sanctorum's portal. "Too bad your silence goes against a tighter law. Everything in the name of investigation..." Quinn felt the storm's electricity down her arms as she stretched out her palms to the nightscapes. Instantly, the hourglass tray and commodities in the clay-pot blew across the courtyard. Quick kaleidoscopic reactions in the logs, Jar Royan sprung from the tall grass with a bone dagger in his hand. "You leave us no choice!" He barked. "You dare conscript the secrets we staged." He lunged. Harlow and Jalan's daggers glistened, as the scum turned into shadows. "Detective, I know this is not how you wanted things." Eve's voice was laced with hurt as the roaring noises subsided. "But remember... Obsidian eyes don't lie. And neither do the ones you keep hidden." A shadow moved. Harlow saw it blink. She caught her breath. Agitations sloshed inside her own organs. When she looked up, Eve had disappeared. Harlow turned, saw Jalan being pulled back. The rain pounded harder and Harlow felt dizzy, her body quaking as she fisted a leather bound treatise. Open. The page read in gold relief: As above, so below. What goes high, stays high. What sins rise, don't fall. Again. She blinked, and Eve stood beside her once more. "I thought you'd fled." "I couldn't let Jar's men get to you," Eve replied. "There was too much at stake." Harlow felt a pang of something in her chest as she looked over at Eve, rain dripping from her nose—something more than the ordinary pull for a higher good, something sweetly sailor and charming, more enticing yet foreboding. "Eve, you know what this means, don't you? This is just the beginning."
created_at"2026-05-27T10:10:30.689Z" 5/27/2026, 10:10:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount658
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"sweetly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"sweetly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount658
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"hulking"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"roaring"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"hulking"
1"glint"
2"charm"
3"gloom"
4"familiar"
5"marble"
6"silence"
7"roaring"
8"pang"
9"foreboding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords660
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount522
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow11
Quinn2
Tube1
Thames1
Jalan4
Hendershot1
Head1
Deacon1
Veil1
High1
Syndicate1
Road1
Camden1
Market1
Jadan1
Cove1
Eve7
Kowalski1
Ondrian1
Sanctorum1
Jar1
Royan1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Jalan"
3"Hendershot"
4"Deacon"
5"Veil"
6"High"
7"Market"
8"Jadan"
9"Cove"
10"Eve"
11"Kowalski"
places
0"Thames"
1"Road"
2"Sanctorum"
globalScore0.446
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
48.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.515
wordCount660
matches
0"not just an eerie but haunting presence, a woman with tame red curls"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean33
std20.27
cv0.614
sampleLengths
069
151
235
342
489
517
657
737
817
933
1014
1113
1235
1331
1425
1514
1614
1716
1838
1913
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences40
matches
0"was laced"
1"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs79
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences48
ratio0.083
matches
0"The threadbare lip of his thin hood looked suitably out of place against his mailboy uniform, even if the outfit was just a cover for his true identity - the Head Deacon working for The Veil's High Syndicate."
1"The stone arch led to a dank courtyard filled with the detritus of homemade signages and knick-knacks - Jadan's Cove sprawled beneath the metallic glint of the abandoned station, the charm of a pirate haven for a lost color rising in gloom."
2"Under the hood of a sky-blue jean jacket, she stared with wide emerald eyes — they were green as sea glass and framed by amber laces, that somehow softened her burnt shoulders."
3"Harlow felt a pang of something in her chest as she looked over at Eve, rain dripping from her nose—something more than the ordinary pull for a higher good, something sweetly sailor and charming, more enticing yet foreboding."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount524
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03625954198473282
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009541984732824428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean13.75
std10.46
cv0.761
sampleLengths
018
113
238
38
418
525
617
718
842
99
1032
1110
1238
133
1414
158
1623
1726
1822
1915
2017
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2220
237
247
252
2611
2721
2814
293
304
314
326
337
347
3518
361
376
384
395
405
411
429
434
4410
456
4638
4713
93.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6458333333333334
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences35
matches
0"By now, Harlow couldn't pull"
1"Instantly, the hourglass tray and"
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences35
matches
0"It was not just an"
1"She gestured at the surrounding"
2"She caught her breath."
3"She blinked, and Eve stood"
ratio0.114
88.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences35
matches
0"The chassis creaked as Detective"
1"Rain drummed against the car"
2"The threadbare lip of his"
3"Harlow stepped out to inhale"
4"Sutton Road in Camden cut"
5"Candor lay buried beneath a"
6"The Market awaited them in"
7"This time, Harlow and Jalan"
8"The stone arch led to"
9"Feline and gracefully tall, Eve"
10"It was not just an"
11"Harlow stepped forward."
12"A ripple of static laughter"
13"She gestured at the surrounding"
14"Quinn felt the storm's electricity"
15"Harlow and Jalan's daggers glistened,"
16"Eve's voice was laced with"
17"A shadow moved."
18"Harlow saw it blink."
19"She caught her breath."
ratio0.743
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was not just an eerie but haunting presence, a woman with tame red curls that made serving as an archivist and researcher seem more tool-like than benevolent…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.167
84.6214%