| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn replied evenly [evenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 84.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 982 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "nervously" | | 2 | "precisely" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 982 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "furrowing" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "charm" | | 5 | "sinister" | | 6 | "palpable" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "synchronized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 972 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 20.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 619 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.58 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Central | 1 | | Archives | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Simon | 4 | | Red | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Simon" | | 3 | "Red" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.208 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a body slumped against a pill" |
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| 97.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.029 | | wordCount | 972 | | matches | | 0 | "not with iron like normal blood, but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 33.52 | | std | 20.02 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 80 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 69 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 37 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "being dispatched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency scanners had popped up something unusual—body found in an abandoned Tube station off the main line." | | 1 | "The air felt thick, heavy with something beyond mere moisture—the scent of ozone and something metallic, like blood mixed with copper coins." | | 2 | "Instead, it was almost too neat—almost ritualistic in its positioning." | | 3 | "The bone token was marked with sigils—sigils Quinn recognised from a study she'd done a few years back before her partner's disappearance." | | 4 | "The symbols represented gateways, portals—diagrammed precisely in the Central Archives at the British Museum." | | 5 | "These weren't theory—they were reality, and their presence here suggested something far more sinister than a simple robbery." | | 6 | "\"Sorry,\" another voice apologised—a timid one that made the hairs on Quinn's neck stand straight." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 630 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.031746031746031744 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015873015873015872 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 15.93 | | std | 8.93 | | cv | 0.56 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 95.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5901639344262295 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it was almost too" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots echoed ominously in" | | 1 | "he said, voice cracking slightly" | | 2 | "Their stark glow cut through" | | 3 | "she observed to herself" | | 4 | "she called to another officer," | | 5 | "His eyes darted fearfully toward" | | 6 | "His fear was palpable, ringing" | | 7 | "He offered a clear baggie" | | 8 | "He waved another baggie in" |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 68.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency scanners had popped" | | 1 | "Her boots echoed ominously in" | | 2 | "The air felt thick, heavy" | | 3 | "Quinn's heavily built frame hurried" | | 4 | "A uniformed officer stood guard" | | 5 | "he said, voice cracking slightly" | | 6 | "Quinn replied, flashing her identification" | | 7 | "Quinn passed them and rounded" | | 8 | "The platform stretched into darkness," | | 9 | "Their stark glow cut through" | | 10 | "The body itself wasn't in" | | 11 | "The victim, a man in" | | 12 | "A small bone talisman lay" | | 13 | "Quinn approached with deliberate caution," | | 14 | "The bloody scene unfolded before" | | 15 | "she observed to herself" | | 16 | "Quinn gestured around with a" | | 17 | "the officer stammered" | | 18 | "Quinn said, her green now" | | 19 | "The bone token was marked" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "As Simon connected threads that escape normal cognition, a crunch echoed behind them." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice cracking slightly" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she observed (observe)" | | 1 | "the officer stammered (stammer)" | | 2 | "Simon continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.276 | | leniency | 0.552 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |