Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEN9FT1B2221X4VNVXJMSD

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Duration:
27.8s
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$0.000705
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pour of rain was relentless, a grey curtain that blurred the edges of the city into watercoloured shapes of frustration and near-blinding white light. Quinn's lungs burned with the cold November air, sharp against her wet clothes. She swore under her breath, watching the figure ahead of her—Tomás Herrera—slip into an alleyway, the dark curly hair and olive skin disappearing into shadows like a ghost. “Come on,” she muttered, wiping water from her face as she ran. Eighteen years in the force and here she was, chasing phantoms in the storm. Not phantoms, she corrected herself grimly. Since Morris's death, the line between what she knew and what she could believe had blurry at best. Supernatural origins, her report had finally noted. It had gotten her laughed at by Internal Affairs, transferred from Homicide, and ultimately isolated in her pursuit of the same people who had taken her partner. The alley opened into a busy street, people with umbrellas moving like comical mushroom-topped creatures. Tomáš was fast, but Quinn was faster, her long legs pumping as she cut across the road against the lights, angry horns blaring at her back. She caught a glimpse of the Saint Christopher medallion he kept around his neck, glinting faintly in the streetlights before he turned the corner of another narrow passage. She had done her homework on Tomás. Paramedic, lost his license after treating supernatural patients—whatever that meant in practical terms. Working for whatever they were now, the same organisation her notes pointed to over and over. They called themselves nothing official, just a network, a clique of people who operated beyond conventional law enforcement. And they were corrupt. Or more than corrupt. The rain Balkan just kamisado soaked bank the ground as Quinn's boots splashed through increasingly deep puddles. The scent of burnt ozone and damp cobblestones filled her nostrils. Up ahead, a green neon sign—The Raven's Nest—was blinking furiously in the downpour, casting a watery glow on the chipped paint of the doorway. That was one of their haunts. Silas's bar, with its hidden back room that provided no doubt covert meetings. Too public. If Tomáš wanted sanctuary, he wouldn't go so obvious. Not now. She skidded to a stop just short of the bar's entrance, breathing heavily. Crossed the street instead, doing a full 360 to spot any side exits. Her eyes landed on an iron grate at the end of the alley, half-covered with trash and rotting leaves. The kind that led below street level. People avoided trash-filled alleyways in pouring rain unless absolutely necessary. But not Tomáš. He had known where he was going the entire time. “Hell with it,” Quinn muttered, straightening her coat and adjusting her pistol at her side. The metal was cold and solid, a simple comfort in the absurdity of the night. She approached the grate, finding the cast iron cold against her palms as she pushed experimentally. It lifted silently, revealing a dark drop down into what must be the converted Tube level. A single bare bulb hung down below, casting an eerie glow on damp stone and support beams. Quinn pulled her gun from its holster and checked the chamber. Dropping into darkness wasn't her ideal choice of operations, but she had followed morons into worse situations. This felt different, though.OLD The stairs groaned under her weight but held. Below, the air changed—warm, humid, filled with a myriad of smells she couldn't identify but somehow recognised as belonging below the city. Spells gone wrong? Alchemical residues? Her imagination was running wild with Morris's ghost still haunting her sleep. Strangely culled accounts and reports that hinted at the extraordinary still haunted her waking hours. At the bottom of the stairs, the passage opened into a vast, bustling space. The Veil Market. She had researched it too, hearing whispers among the city's junkies and conspiracy theorists. A marketplace for those who operated outside normal society. And apparently, according to files she'd stolen, outside normal physics as well. The changes came in waves—elven dignitaries in crystal headdresses, bespelled leatherwork fitted to giants disguised as humans, people she couldn't even classify doing transactions with small bone engraved tokens that must be some form of entry fee or currency. Every inch of her cop's senses screamed at her both to shoot and to get out. This defied everything she had been trained to believe. It wasn't just about criminal activity anymore. It was about another layer entirely. In the centre of the market, Tomás stood with three men and a woman all dressed in what Quinn supposed normal clothing that might cloak their otherworldly presence. Tomás wasn't looking at her but seemed to be monitoring the entrance where she stood, his medallion catching the overhead light. His eyes met hers and widened almost imperceptibly, then shut briefly as if in dismissal. He knew she was there. Knew and wasn't running. That spelt confidence—or a trap. Either way, Quinn squared her shoulders, holstered her gun under her coat, and moved forward, Marshal who enlisted lawful means in the face of the lawless unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount855
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount855
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"glinting"
2"sanctuary"
3"absolutely"
4"weight"
5"crystal"
6"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords847
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Not phantoms, she corrected herself grimly."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount842
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
November1
Tomás4
Herrera1
Eighteen1
Morris2
Internal1
Affairs1
Homicide1
Quinn7
Saint1
Christopher1
Balkan1
Raven1
Nest1
Tomáš3
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Marshal1
persons
0"Tomás"
1"Herrera"
2"Morris"
3"Affairs"
4"Quinn"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Balkan"
8"Raven"
9"Tomáš"
10"Marshal"
places
0"Homicide"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"And apparently, according to files"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount847
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
49.83% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean56.47
std18.32
cv0.324
sampleLengths
066
184
269
362
484
552
623
779
832
962
1052
1139
1238
1364
1441
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"been trained"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was blinking"
1"was going"
2"was running"
3"wasn't looking"
4"wasn't running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences63
ratio0.095
matches
0"She swore under her breath, watching the figure ahead of her—Tomás Herrera—slip into an alleyway, the dark curly hair and olive skin disappearing into shadows like a ghost."
1"Paramedic, lost his license after treating supernatural patients—whatever that meant in practical terms."
2"Up ahead, a green neon sign—The Raven's Nest—was blinking furiously in the downpour, casting a watery glow on the chipped paint of the doorway."
3"Below, the air changed—warm, humid, filled with a myriad of smells she couldn't identify but somehow recognised as belonging below the city."
4"The changes came in waves—elven dignitaries in crystal headdresses, bespelled leatherwork fitted to giants disguised as humans, people she couldn't even classify doing transactions with small bone engraved tokens that must be some form of entry fee or currency."
5"That spelt confidence—or a trap."
85.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount854
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"comical mushroom-topped creatures."
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04918032786885246
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01990632318501171
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.44
std7.87
cv0.586
sampleLengths
025
113
228
312
414
56
618
77
827
915
1026
1128
127
1313
1416
1518
164
174
1817
1911
2024
216
2213
232
249
252
2613
2713
2819
297
3010
313
3210
3315
3415
3516
3616
3717
3811
3917
4012
4122
423
432
4412
4515
4614
473
4814
499
95.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6190476190476191
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners39
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Strangely culled accounts and reports"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences60
matches
0"She swore under her breath,"
1"she muttered, wiping water from"
2"It had gotten her laughed"
3"She caught a glimpse of"
4"She had done her homework"
5"They called themselves nothing official,"
6"She skidded to a stop"
7"Her eyes landed on an"
8"He had known where he"
9"She approached the grate, finding"
10"It lifted silently, revealing a"
11"Her imagination was running wild"
12"She had researched it too,"
13"It wasn't just about criminal"
14"It was about another layer"
15"His eyes met hers and"
16"He knew she was there."
ratio0.283
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences60
matches
0"The pour of rain was"
1"Quinn's lungs burned with the"
2"She swore under her breath,"
3"she muttered, wiping water from"
4"It had gotten her laughed"
5"The alley opened into a"
6"Tomáš was fast, but Quinn"
7"She caught a glimpse of"
8"She had done her homework"
9"They called themselves nothing official,"
10"The rain Balkan just kamisado"
11"The scent of burnt ozone"
12"That was one of their"
13"Silas's bar, with its hidden"
14"She skidded to a stop"
15"Her eyes landed on an"
16"The kind that led below"
17"People avoided trash-filled alleyways in"
18"He had known where he"
19"Quinn muttered, straightening her coat"
ratio0.667
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"If Tomáš wanted sanctuary, he"
1"Either way, Quinn squared her"
ratio0.033
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The pour of rain was relentless, a grey curtain that blurred the edges of the city into watercoloured shapes of frustration and near-blinding white light."
1"She swore under her breath, watching the figure ahead of her—Tomás Herrera—slip into an alleyway, the dark curly hair and olive skin disappearing into shadows l…"
2"They called themselves nothing official, just a network, a clique of people who operated beyond conventional law enforcement."
3"Silas's bar, with its hidden back room that provided no doubt covert meetings."
4"The changes came in waves—elven dignitaries in crystal headdresses, bespelled leatherwork fitted to giants disguised as humans, people she couldn't even classif…"
5"Tomás wasn't looking at her but seemed to be monitoring the entrance where she stood, his medallion catching the overhead light."
6"Either way, Quinn squared her shoulders, holstered her gun under her coat, and moved forward, Marshal who enlisted lawful means in the face of the lawless unkno…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
81.2737%