Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMENJ0K80RQ5DXFZBHK217Y

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26.9s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was already bustling by the time Rory arrived, the green neon sign flickering above the entrance like a beacon in the darkening London evening. She tucked a strand of straight black hair behind her ear and took a deep breath, steeling herself before pushing open the heavy oak door. The wall of sound hit her first - clinking glasses, Musak-variety guitar strumming from the main room merged into increasingly private conversations. Rory weaved through the scattering of patrons, trying not to make eye contact as she made her way to the bar. She recognized several regulars from her frequent trips back to the anonymity of homebase, while others kept coming back here for whatever choices bubbled up from the deep. Whatever rusted up bread crumb of wisdom they sought to mend their whatever route going through. The buzz around the bar quieted as Silas, the bar owner, appeared from somewhere behind the shelves that surrounded the wall. He had a queen's dignity on his broad shoulders, and the way he walked stemmed from a posture of restraint. The glasses that hang from the upper region of his chest on a thin oak frame cast a reflection of light into a pair of hazel eyes. "Evening, Miss Carter," Silas said, leaning against the bar with a slight limp. A neatly trim beard strangely complemented his muscles. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the low light as he rubbed it absently with his thumb. Rory's stomach went to twisting stings, in part because of unwanted excitement that chased memories next to fear of being run out of her momma's 'hood at gunpoint. "I... ah... me dad was Irish but I was born and raised here in the capital like all them other of me kind," Rory closed that. "Even-still, despite being born in the kingdom of Gwynedd, kinda like how Eva here....I think the beating was c]+BETTER대d to have become a barista anyway." Rory bit her lip, regretting her words. Silas eyed her with an appraising look, his gaze lingering on the small crescent shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident. In that moment, Rory could see the whole secret room of Silas' gotten memories. Those without need for linguist, an operative's trained eye misses nothing. "Yes, you're not half as Irish as your father was," Silas agreed, gesturing for Rory to sit in one of the bar's worn velveteen chairs. "I remember when he first brought you in here, must've been 'least ten years ago now." Rory settled into the chair, folding her hands in her lap. "Hard to believe it's been so long. Seemed like only yesterday I was running errands between the bar and his office for spending money. And uh.." She swallowed hard, nerves fisting like a manhole cover, "I've been trying to, you know. Make a better life for myself. Get the hell out of Cardiff." Silas nodded, his expression thoughtful. "He was proud of you, Rory. Even when the two of ye had your ups and downs. Never once did I hear him say otherwise." He paused, regarding her with an intense gaze. "But I'm guessing that's not why you're here tonight. What brings you to the Nest, out of the blue like this?" Rory's fingers tightened around the edge of the bar, her knuckles blanched white. It was now or never. "I saw someone tonight, Silas. Someone I didn't think I'd ever lay eyes on again - not in this life anyway. We... we used to be close. Best mates, even. Thought we'd be friends forever. Until..." She trailed off, swallowing hard. Silas simply waited, his gaze steady and unreadable. "We took different paths, Silas," Rory finally resumed. "She went to uni, studied art in Rome. I... well, you know how that turned out. Evan, law school, the whole mess." Her voice broke slightly. "She tried to reach out, after. But I was too stubborn, too proud. Pushed her away." "And now?" Silas prompted softly. "Now..." Rory hesitated, a single tear sliding down her cheek that she quickly brushed away. "Now I don't know. Seeing her again, it brought it all crashing back. The mistakes, the regrets. The way I treated her, let her down. She doesn't even recognize me, Silas. And I don't blame her. I wouldn't recognize me either, not after everything that's happened. I'm not... I'm not the girl she used to know." Silas reached across the bar, laying a comforting hand over Rory's. "Change is a part of life, Aurora. It doesn't make the bonds we share any less real, or the weaves we create at all less true. Dedicate yourself to doing better, to making the things thati used to brought together again fulfilled, perfectly and you will see the skies by your side more often." His gaze was knowing, almost sad. "Your Eva... she was a part of your golden, perfect in every way, kindest," he beckoned. "And maybe, just maybe, it's time you stop running from those parts of yourself. Stop hiding in shadows and start living in the light again." Rory nodded, a fresh wave of tears spilling down her cheeks. She squeezed Silas' hand tightly, drawing strength from his steady presence. "You're right. Maybe... maybe it's time I stopped hiding. Started living again. Started making things right." Silas smiled gently, his thumb brushing over the back or Rory's hand. "Take it one day at a time, lass. One step forward is all it takes to change your whole journey." He stood, moving to the other side of the bar. "Now, what'll it be? A whiskey, to take the edge off, perhaps?" Rory sniffled, wiping at her eyes. "Make it a double. And you're on," she added, managing a weak smile. "I've got a long night ahead of me, and a few old ghosts to lay." As Silas poured out the whiskey, Rory's mind drifted back to earlier that evening, to the moment she had seen Eva walking down the street. A phantom memory of Eva's laughter, of the easy camaraderie they once shared. A fragment tucked away with the dried flowers and wishes from things long past. It had been a mistake, going to the gallery. A foolish, sentimental gesture that brought back feelings and regrets best left buried. And yet, seeing Eva's name etched on that plaque, her work displayed with such flair... it had stirred something in Rory. Something she thought she had lost long ago. Pride. Longing. Shame.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:11:17.664Z" 5/27/2026, 10:11:17 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice broke slightly [slightly]"
1"Silas prompted softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.609
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
72.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"quickly"
3"perfectly"
4"tightly"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1083
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"single tear"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"stomach"
2"unreadable"
3"single tear"
4"comforting"
5"perfect"
6"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
92.14% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0.016
matches
0"\"Even-still, despite being born in the kingdom of Gwynedd, kinda like how Eva here....I think the beating was c]+BETTER대d to have become a barista anyway.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1085
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount602
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory17
London1
Musak-variety1
Silas10
Eva3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.088
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1085
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
93.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean51.67
std24.58
cv0.476
sampleLengths
074
165
268
342
479
556
641
764
859
954
1013
1150
125
1371
14112
1538
1654
1734
1852
1951
203
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs110
matches
0"was already bustling"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences61
ratio0.016
matches
0"The wall of sound hit her first - clinking glasses, Musak-variety guitar strumming from the main room merged into increasingly private conversations."
99.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount514
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.04085603112840467
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.017509727626459144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean17.79
std12.08
cv0.679
sampleLengths
027
125
222
321
428
516
621
720
827
913
108
1121
1228
1326
1425
157
1624
1714
1811
1925
2016
2111
2253
235
2433
2521
2613
275
2836
295
308
318
3226
3316
345
3515
3656
3711
3860
3916
4025
4111
4211
4316
4412
4530
4612
476
4813
4915
74.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47540983606557374
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences46
matches
0"She tucked a strand of"
1"She recognized several regulars from"
2"He had a queen's dignity"
3"She swallowed hard, nerves fisting"
4"He paused, regarding her with"
5"It was now or never."
6"She trailed off, swallowing hard."
7"Her voice broke slightly"
8"His gaze was knowing, almost"
9"He stood, moving to the"
10"she added, managing a weak"
11"It had been a mistake,"
12"it had stirred something in"
ratio0.283
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences46
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was already"
1"She tucked a strand of"
2"The wall of sound hit"
3"Rory weaved through the scattering"
4"She recognized several regulars from"
5"Whatever rusted up bread crumb"
6"The buzz around the bar"
7"He had a queen's dignity"
8"The glasses that hang from"
9"Silas said, leaning against the"
10"A neatly trim beard strangely"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"Rory's stomach went to twisting"
13"Rory closed that"
14"Rory bit her lip, regretting"
15"Silas eyed her with an"
16"Those without need for linguist,"
17"Silas agreed, gesturing for Rory"
18"Rory settled into the chair,"
19"She swallowed hard, nerves fisting"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The glasses that hang from the upper region of his chest on a thin oak frame cast a reflection of light into a pair of hazel eyes."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She swallowed, nerves fisting like a manhole cover,"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas agreed (agree)"
1"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.174
80.1423%