Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEQ7TTHC9CFX11RAWZAT2A

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29.2s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The grove was different at night. Not simply dark, but altered. The ancient oaks stood as silent sentinels, their twisted limbs reaching like skeletal fingers to snag Rory's dark hair as she picked her way between them. She'd been here dozens of times before, seeking solace in the hidden grove's eternal bloom of wildflowers and whispering breeze. But never after dusk. Now, the usual serenity evoked a prickle of unease. A wrongness leaked from the moon-shadowed underbrush, setting Rory's nerves on edge. Her boots crunched on the moss-strewn path, each step echoing too loud in the heavy stillness. A chilly autumn wind skittered through the clearing, making the oak leaves shiver. Their whispers sounded almost like... rorre, rorre... Rory shook her head. exhaustion, and an overactive imagination. Silly to let childish fears spook her now. She had a job to do. Her shoulders itched beneath her jacket, the unwanted gift from an unknown benefactor nestled in her pocket. She could feel its warmth even through the fabric, and swore the faint heartbeat emanated by the gemstone quickened with each step. Seeking out the Fae's hidden grove hadn't been a snap decision for Rory. But after... everything... she'd needed to escape the too-confining walls of her flat, the ever-present buzz and thrum of London, even her friends' concerned glances - all of it too much. So here she was, art their fault for believing in the magic in her stories, during the day. There was a portal to the city, they were sure... and she would've come looking in the middle of the night. Fucking idiots - she was safer haunting her own house than skulking out in fae-infested bushed after dark. But the Heartstone hung heavy in her pocket, as if it knew the truth - there was no escaping her_search for answers. And she'd surrendered so much to this already. A few hours of solitude, one last foray into faerie... she'd find the portal, claim her sanity in the arms of her sister and a good night's sleep. ...it felt like it had been hours since Rory entered the Fae Grove, though she'd only crossed through its oaken threshold moments ago. The ever-present weariness from her past still clung to her bones, but she'd shoved that down, leaving no room for anything but the unwavering forward crater of Rory Carter. Except now something kept slowing her pace. She felt it then: a rustling in the moon-blanketed underbrush nearby that shouldn't have been there. Her heart gave a warning thump in her chest, but she kept moving. There. The faint tinkle of running water reached her ears, carrying on the wind. The hidden spring-fed stream was dead ahead, just as she remembered. The fauns and greenlings often partied along its flower-lined banks when they thought themselves unobserved in the dusk. Rory skirted the waist-high azaleas and circled around the spring. Her skin prickled. Something definitely wasn't right. Somewhere a branch snapped, too loudly. And those whispers... they'd gotten worse. rorre, rorre... A droplet of cold sweat trickled down between her shoulder blades. She knew those whispers. She'd heard them from daybreak to midnight, for... how many weeks and months? She couldn't remember exactly, nor what part of her own living nightmare this was supposed to be. Not that it mattered. Any feyling had only needed to glimpse the twin walnut tattoos on her spine, and wonderment clouded with a predatory gleam dancing between her fingers. The so-called Worldly Prophecy had been the fuel in their tank, until she escaped. She hadn't thought to meet Fae back home in London, much less Richmond Park after dark. Madness. Utter madness. She pressed her hands to her temples, circling the glade in search of the quicksilver portal on legs and knees like a statue, until the slinking, unseen fae set their gaze upon her through the dusk she almost wanted to scream. Bare Glade. Bereft County. Bloodtouched Lands. Where no fey may walk, for fear of being caught nearby by any roaming mortal than comes close. My own bad making, I suppose, unwittingly seeking a switch in tempers. Rory should have known her strange journey through time and space, from faerie to Britain, meant no good. Everything seemed too vivid, too vibrant especially the pitch black... Like someone had etched the stars in gooseflesh upon her arms. Searing her with a wavering line of 'naughty naughty' All because she, and she alone, had made it through without an errant touch from Saykh's dead hands clutching her waist, while every other faery shrieked and fled back to their gilded shire. The perch called for her, the satiny breeze pushing against her veil of hair, and she needed to know someday if anyone truly came back from this realm of see-saw night and day... There had to be a reason for all of this. Something hidden in the quest for faerie, like a splinter settled too deep to pluck by hand. Rory didn't want to die. She just felt like she hadn't had a choice... A bat-like flutter of wings brushed her hair as something twisted around her body pressed her against a trunk. Still... She couldn't stop. The wrongness in the Grove gave a sickening lurch, like a carnival ride gone rough. Rory choked back a scream as the Heartstone in her pocket flashed, blazing with an inner fire. The world flipped and spun, colors strobing. A blast of heat seared her face, so fierce Rory winced. Then it was over. Blinking rapidly, she looked around. Trees rose all around, but nothing like the ancient oaks of the Fae Grove. These were narrow, tall pines, swaying beneath a sickly yellowish sky. Rory stumbled back from the twisting, gnarled trunk. Her wardrobe. The creaking stead of houses. She knew this place. Had been wary of coming here for years, with Myre-Agro Dripping Stead LEEP half-remembered covers, never believing... Her bones bubbled as they turned into something the same... They'd made her into their own before Joan. Had made her forget once, silently. And when she saw Joan making awkaward hand signs and blinking twice slow, before rapidly entering the portal... Reality really does suck, but knowing you'll never escape it - that's a special kind of torture. The roti panicked as one, a wild scrabble of clattering peels and frantic flight. The last fast-beaming face Rory saw was that of Miles. The last sound, a snarling roar ripping from his snout. Dark tendrils snaked through the undergrowth, grasping, tugging. Rory staggered back, turning. Turning. She gasped, Emmy Lou Cole, Isolde's Greenhouse, and Aneki grove. Still turning, lost to time. Never reaching home.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:12:12.775Z" 5/27/2026, 10:12:12 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"solace"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"wavering"
count1
11
word"lurch"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"solace"
2"echoing"
3"could feel"
4"warmth"
5"quickened"
6"unwavering"
7"dancing"
8"etched"
9"searing"
10"wavering"
11"lurch"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1096
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Fae4
London2
Heartstone2
Grove3
Carter1
Worldly1
Prophecy1
Richmond1
Park1
Glade1
County1
Lands1
Britain1
Saykh1
Myre-Agro1
Dripping1
Stead1
Joan2
Miles1
Emmy1
Lou1
Cole1
Isolde1
Greenhouse1
Aneki1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Carter"
3"Prophecy"
4"Joan"
5"Emmy"
6"Lou"
7"Cole"
8"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"London"
2"Grove"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"County"
6"Saykh"
7"Aneki"
globalScore0.861
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like it had been hours since Rory"
1"felt like she hadn't had a choice"
19.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.807
wordCount1107
matches
0"Not simply dark, but altered"
1"no room for anything but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean33.55
std19.33
cv0.576
sampleLengths
037
124
221
336
423
539
644
757
858
952
1036
1143
1231
1315
1489
1544
1636
1748
1866
1941
2020
213
2232
2318
249
2533
2628
2759
2834
2913
3010
315
323
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"was supposed"
1"being caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences102
ratio0.029
matches
0"Fucking idiots - she was safer haunting her own house than skulking out in fae-infested bushed after dark."
1"But the Heartstone hung heavy in her pocket, as if it knew the truth - there was no escaping her_search for answers."
2"Reality really does suck, but knowing you'll never escape it - that's a special kind of torture."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.0319634703196347
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0136986301369863
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean10.85
std7.97
cv0.734
sampleLengths
06
15
226
320
44
59
612
716
813
95
102
114
125
138
146
1517
1622
1713
182
191
2028
2118
2210
2311
2418
2522
268
2710
2818
2923
3029
317
3216
3313
341
3513
3611
3718
3810
393
404
416
423
433
442
4511
464
478
485
4917
68.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4411764705882353
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"Fucking idiots - she was"
1"Somewhere a branch snapped, too"
2"Then it was over."
3"Still turning, lost to time."
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd been here dozens of"
1"Her boots crunched on the"
2"Their whispers sounded almost like..."
3"She had a job to"
4"Her shoulders itched beneath her"
5"She could feel its warmth"
6"she'd needed to escape the"
7"she'd find the portal, claim"
8"...it felt like it had"
9"She felt it then: a"
10"Her heart gave a warning"
11"Her skin prickled."
12"they'd gotten worse."
13"She knew those whispers."
14"She'd heard them from daybreak"
15"She couldn't remember exactly, nor"
16"She hadn't thought to meet"
17"She pressed her hands to"
18"My own bad making, I"
19"She just felt like she"
ratio0.281
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences89
matches
0"The grove was different at"
1"The ancient oaks stood as"
2"She'd been here dozens of"
3"A wrongness leaked from the"
4"Her boots crunched on the"
5"A chilly autumn wind skittered"
6"Their whispers sounded almost like..."
7"Rory shook her head."
8"exhaustion, and an overactive imagination."
9"She had a job to"
10"Her shoulders itched beneath her"
11"She could feel its warmth"
12"she'd needed to escape the"
13"she'd find the portal, claim"
14"...it felt like it had"
15"The ever-present weariness from her"
16"She felt it then: a"
17"Her heart gave a warning"
18"The faint tinkle of running"
19"The hidden spring-fed stream was"
ratio0.674
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Now, the usual serenity evoked"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She pressed her hands to her temples, circling the glade in search of the quicksilver portal on legs and knees like a statue, until the slinking, unseen fae set…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.0161%