| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1103 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "solace" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "unwavering" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1096 | | uniqueNames | 26 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 4 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Worldly | 1 | | Prophecy | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Glade | 1 | | County | 1 | | Lands | 1 | | Britain | 1 | | Saykh | 1 | | Myre-Agro | 1 | | Dripping | 1 | | Stead | 1 | | Joan | 2 | | Miles | 1 | | Emmy | 1 | | Lou | 1 | | Cole | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Greenhouse | 1 | | Aneki | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Prophecy" | | 4 | "Joan" | | 5 | "Emmy" | | 6 | "Lou" | | 7 | "Cole" | | 8 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" | | 5 | "County" | | 6 | "Saykh" | | 7 | "Aneki" |
| | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like it had been hours since Rory" | | 1 | "felt like she hadn't had a choice" |
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| 19.33% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.807 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "Not simply dark, but altered" | | 1 | "no room for anything but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.55 | | std | 19.33 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 89 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "being caught" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Fucking idiots - she was safer haunting her own house than skulking out in fae-infested bushed after dark." | | 1 | "But the Heartstone hung heavy in her pocket, as if it knew the truth - there was no escaping her_search for answers." | | 2 | "Reality really does suck, but knowing you'll never escape it - that's a special kind of torture." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 219 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.0319634703196347 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0136986301369863 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 10.85 | | std | 7.97 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 68.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4411764705882353 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Fucking idiots - she was" | | 1 | "Somewhere a branch snapped, too" | | 2 | "Then it was over." | | 3 | "Still turning, lost to time." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here dozens of" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 2 | "Their whispers sounded almost like..." | | 3 | "She had a job to" | | 4 | "Her shoulders itched beneath her" | | 5 | "She could feel its warmth" | | 6 | "she'd needed to escape the" | | 7 | "she'd find the portal, claim" | | 8 | "...it felt like it had" | | 9 | "She felt it then: a" | | 10 | "Her heart gave a warning" | | 11 | "Her skin prickled." | | 12 | "they'd gotten worse." | | 13 | "She knew those whispers." | | 14 | "She'd heard them from daybreak" | | 15 | "She couldn't remember exactly, nor" | | 16 | "She hadn't thought to meet" | | 17 | "She pressed her hands to" | | 18 | "My own bad making, I" | | 19 | "She just felt like she" |
| | ratio | 0.281 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove was different at" | | 1 | "The ancient oaks stood as" | | 2 | "She'd been here dozens of" | | 3 | "A wrongness leaked from the" | | 4 | "Her boots crunched on the" | | 5 | "A chilly autumn wind skittered" | | 6 | "Their whispers sounded almost like..." | | 7 | "Rory shook her head." | | 8 | "exhaustion, and an overactive imagination." | | 9 | "She had a job to" | | 10 | "Her shoulders itched beneath her" | | 11 | "She could feel its warmth" | | 12 | "she'd needed to escape the" | | 13 | "she'd find the portal, claim" | | 14 | "...it felt like it had" | | 15 | "The ever-present weariness from her" | | 16 | "She felt it then: a" | | 17 | "Her heart gave a warning" | | 18 | "The faint tinkle of running" | | 19 | "The hidden spring-fed stream was" |
| | ratio | 0.674 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the usual serenity evoked" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her hands to her temples, circling the glade in search of the quicksilver portal on legs and knees like a statue, until the slinking, unseen fae set…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |