Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMER0GTCJQ1N65MBG701Q6R

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Duration:
38.9s
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$0.000969
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign above "The Raven's Nest" buzzed softly against the growing darkness of Soho. Aurora Carter - Rory to those who knew her well, though she hadn't heard the name in years - paused at the doorway, the familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey flooding her senses. The bar had barely changed; told to Silas' careful attention, it preserved the same character it had when she had stumbled through its doors at twenty-one, fresh from Cardiff and carrying a heart she thought was broken. She stepped inside, the faint limp of her the bar owner catching her attention as he moved between tables. Silas Blackwood hadn't aged so much as he had... settled. His beard, streaked with gray now, was neat as always, and the silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim lighting as he wiped down a glass. "Rory?" That familiar voice, deep and measured, didn't register surprise exactly, but rather the quiet disbelief of witnessing a ghost. Rory turned slowly, a faint smile touching her lips. "Long time, Si." The corners of his eyes crinkled, and for a moment, he seemed frozen. Then, with that familiar slight limp, he closed the distance between them, his hazel eyes sweeping over her face with an intensity that hadn't dimmed with time. "I thought you were in Cardiff." "Changes plans." Rory took the proffered bar stool with careful grace. "Well, you're looking good." "Retirement agrees with me." Silas moved behind the bar with practiced ease. "You?" "Delivery work. Keeps me moving." They sat in silence for a moment, the comfortable kind that had once existed between them but now felt strange. Silas slid a glass of whiskey across the bar without asking. Rory didn't drink it immediately, her fingers following the curve of the glass. "Your flat's empty upstairs," Silas said eventually, his tone measured. "I thought you'd moved out." "I finished the job, went back to Cardiff for a bit. Then..." She trailed off, her bright blue eyes locking onto his hazel ones. "Strange how place can trap you." The server next to whisky caught around the ring on his finger. "Wasn't expecting to see you here." "Less of an explanation than I expected to hear either." "That's fair." Silas polished another glass, his motions precise. "How's Eva?" Rory's expression softened almost imperceptibly. "Married. Two kids. Happily, as far as I know." "Good. You weren't ever... Houston?" Rory laughed softly, the sound rich with nostalgia. "We tried. It didn't work. Different worlds, then." "Not so different now, from what I hear." Silas nodded toward her construction gear. "That -- delivery work must suit you. Always did like being active." "I didn't just like it. Needed it." Rory finally took a sip, the burning sensation familiar but long forgotten. "Publisher's gone under, and my contract with all-new last year. Story of my life, really." Silas's eyes narrowed slightly. "You were brilliant. Always had a way of seeing through things." "Brilliant people still get left behind." Rory traced the condensation on her glass. "You never came back to Cardiff. Not once." The question hung in the air between them. Silas finished wiping the glass and rested his hands on the bar, the silver ring gleaming under the soft light. "This place called me back. I used to love it, remember? Before it all went wrong." "I remember." Rory's voice was barely above a whisper. "I remember seeing you afterward. You looked like hell." Silas's expression remained carefully neutral. "That was a long time ago." "Fourteen years. Enough time for things to settle but not enough to forget." "You've changed," Silas finally said, and it wasn't a compliment. Rory nodded slowly, her hand moving from her glass to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "We all change, Si. Some more than others." The atmosphere shifted, tense, filled with the weight of their history and the expectations they had never voiced when they were young. The barman turned his attention back to the bar, polished the already spotless surface with deliberate movements. "Who knew we'd both end up serving others. In my case for thirty years." "You own this place, Si. Mountains between." "I run a bar when I'm not trying to fix problems most people don't even know exist," he said quietly. Rory's eyebrows lifted. "Still spymaster?" Silas leaned in slightly, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial volume. "Some habits die harder than we wish they would." "I've had enough tonight of trying to explain myself," said, the blue ice in her eyes in contrast to her intriguing smile. "I didn't plan on finding you here." Silas studied Rory's face, lines around eyes that hadn't been there before. Time had left her with something more than scars; it had shaped her into someone new but unapologetically herself. "The world's smaller than we think sometimes." "We work the same neighborhood it seems." Rory downed the last of her whiskey, set the glass down with a finality that echoed in the quiet bar. "I should go. Before more ghosts appear." "You can use the couch upstairs if you need it," Silas said suddenly. "Still got the flat." Rory looked at him, really looked at him, and saw not the former MI6 agent nor the bar owner, but the friend who had rescued her in countless ways. "Thanks, Si. But I think I'm done with hiding in corners." He nodded, and there was a wealth of understanding in that single gesture. "We all need to find our own way back eventually." "Some roads are longer than others, that's for sure." Silas smiled, a rare and genuine expression. "Get back to delivering your packages, Rory. Don't break that scooter of yours on these wretched London streets again." The quickness in her gaze told him she might change her mind. But not tonight. She tilted her head toward the door in farewell and slid off the stool, the rhythmic thump of her steps slowly fading out into the busy street where London carried on its business of mankind, of memories chasing each other between dawn and dusk.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"The bar had barely [barely]"
1"Silas said eventually [eventually]"
2"Silas finally said [finally]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
4"Silas said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.26
leniency0.52
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.2
35.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"happily"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
7
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"happily"
3"really"
4"slightly"
5"barely above a whisper"
6"carefully"
7"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1015
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"intriguing"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"measured"
2"intensity"
3"practiced ease"
4"silence"
5"comfortable"
6"traced"
7"gleaming"
8"whisper"
9"weight"
10"intriguing"
11"echoed"
12"rhythmic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences48
matches
0"h with nostalgia"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1018
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount618
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Carter1
Rory14
Blackwood1
Silas14
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.367
windowScore0.167
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed frozen"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.982
wordCount1018
matches
0"not the former MI6 agent nor the bar owner, but the friend who had rescued her in countless ways"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean24.83
std17.53
cv0.706
sampleLengths
088
158
220
312
446
515
613
75
844
915
1030
1118
1210
1311
1414
155
1616
1726
1834
1915
2021
2144
2218
2311
2413
2510
2626
2753
287
2920
305
3120
3229
3338
3434
3517
3640
3723
389
3926
4059
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs94
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"Aurora Carter - Rory to those who knew her well, though she hadn't heard the name in years - paused at the doorway, the familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey flooding her senses."
1"The bar had barely changed; told to Silas' careful attention, it preserved the same character it had when she had stumbled through its doors at twenty-one, fresh from Cardiff and carrying a heart she thought was broken."
2"Time had left her with something more than scars; it had shaped her into someone new but unapologetically herself."
91.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount324
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.04938271604938271
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.41
std8.29
cv0.668
sampleLengths
017
134
237
319
49
51
629
720
89
93
1013
1127
126
1311
144
1512
161
175
1820
1911
2013
2110
225
2324
246
2512
266
2710
289
292
305
319
325
338
348
3514
3612
3719
3815
394
4011
4113
428
438
4420
4516
469
479
485
496
71.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4634146341463415
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners38
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then, with that familiar slight"
ratio0.021
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences47
matches
0"She stepped inside, the faint"
1"His beard, streaked with gray"
2"They sat in silence for"
3"She trailed off, her bright"
4"he said quietly"
5"He nodded, and there was"
6"She tilted her head toward"
ratio0.149
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences47
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Aurora Carter - Rory to"
2"The bar had barely changed;"
3"She stepped inside, the faint"
4"Silas Blackwood hadn't aged so"
5"His beard, streaked with gray"
6"That familiar voice, deep and"
7"Rory turned slowly, a faint"
8"The corners of his eyes"
9"Rory took the proffered bar"
10"Silas moved behind the bar"
11"They sat in silence for"
12"Silas slid a glass of"
13"Rory didn't drink it immediately,"
14"Silas said eventually, his tone"
15"She trailed off, her bright"
16"The server next to whisky"
17"Silas polished another glass, his"
18"Rory's expression softened almost imperceptibly."
19"Rory laughed softly, the sound"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Then, with that familiar slight limp, he closed the distance between them, his hazel eyes sweeping over her face with an intensity that hadn't dimmed with time."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas said eventually, his tone measured"
1"Silas polished, his motions precise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.7768%