| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the Protector had simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.706 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 84.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 985 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 985 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "intricate" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 994 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 923 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Protector | 2 | | Celtic | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Protector" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "erious and why apparently the stones of this" | | 1 | "wildflowers that seemed to bloom perpetually, regardless of the season outside" | | 2 | "as if circling her in the dark" | | 3 | "as if keeping time with her racing heart" |
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| 99.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.006 | | wordCount | 994 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just one pair, but many" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 43.22 | | std | 25.82 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 100 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 31 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been delayed " |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "were reacting" | | 1 | "was guiding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, she thought she caught the glimpse of a figure darting between trees - taller than a man, impossible to see clearly." | | 1 | "That's when she heard it - the distinct whisper of fabric brushing against stone, straight ahead." | | 2 | "She approached the pedestal, noticing for the first time the intricate carvings covering its surface - swirls of Celtic knots and spirals that seemed to move and shift when she looked directly at them." | | 3 | "Her hand hovered over the basin, then she felt it - a gentle pressure on her shoulder." | | 4 | "The correct response had been delayed - too long." | | 5 | "Before she could form another question, a figure materialized before her - tall, impossibly thin, with skin like bark and eyes like twin pools of ink." | | 6 | "It was unfamiliar yet somehow completely expected - an answer at last to the unsettling thrill she never fully understood since inheriting the pendant." | | 7 | "The Heartstone burned hotter, against her collarbone and Rory knew then what she had always feared - that part of this journey had been always meant to be this end." | | 8 | "That the \"invisible protector,\" the return to Richmond, this midnight outing - it had all been sliding towards this moment with a gravity she hadn't seen." |
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| 83.30% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 919 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.05223068552774755 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01958650707290533 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 15.53 | | std | 8.4 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 74.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "No longer content with dismissing" | | 1 | "Abrubtly her ears perked up" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 82.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "It was past midnight when" | | 1 | "Her fingers traced the small" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "She scanned the shadows, her" | | 4 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 5 | "she whispered to herself, continuing" | | 6 | "Her pulse quickened as she" | | 7 | "She held her breath, waiting." | | 8 | "She inched forward, her delivery-accustomed" | | 9 | "She knew somehow, as if" | | 10 | "she had replied defensively, but" | | 11 | "She could feel them gazing" | | 12 | "She approached the pedestal, noticing" | | 13 | "Her hand hovered over the" | | 14 | "She spun around, heart hammering" | | 15 | "she said, cursing herself for" | | 16 | "It wasn't in her ears," | | 17 | "Its limbs were unnaturally long," | | 18 | "It was unfamiliar yet somehow" | | 19 | "She tried to speak, but" |
| | ratio | 0.345 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "It was past midnight when" | | 1 | "The streets of Richmond had" | | 2 | "Her fingers traced the small" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her" | | 5 | "The air in the grove" | | 6 | "Something rustled nearby, and Rory" | | 7 | "She scanned the shadows, her" | | 8 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 9 | "she whispered to herself, continuing" | | 10 | "The Heartstone grew warmer, its" | | 11 | "Her pulse quickened as she" | | 12 | "Travelers spoke of entering at" | | 13 | "That's when she heard it" | | 14 | "Rory stopped, the small hairs" | | 15 | "She held her breath, waiting." | | 16 | "Silence fell again, heavy and" | | 17 | "She inched forward, her delivery-accustomed" | | 18 | "The center of the clearing" | | 19 | "She knew somehow, as if" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she stood in an" | | 1 | "Before she could form another" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was past midnight when Rory stepped beneath the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of The Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a faint warmth that had been distracting her for weeks, had drawn her to this pla…" | | 2 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of wildflowers that seemed to bloom perpetually, regardless of the season outside." | | 3 | "The Heartstone blazed around her neck, pulsing as if keeping time with her racing heart." | | 4 | "She tried to speak, but the air had solidified in her lungs, preventing any sound from escaping." | | 5 | "The trees around them began to move, their branches coiling and lashing like serpents as they too reached towards her." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the Protector had, their voice a soft echo in her memory" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the Protector had (have)" | | 2 | "she had (have)" | | 3 | "the Protector had simply (have)" | | 4 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "the voice continued (continue)" | | 6 | "skinned creature whispered (skin whisper)" | | 7 | "the voice sighed (sigh)" | | 8 | "entity whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.9 | | effectiveRatio | 0.9 | |