Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMES8KNT64Q0N0S64DPM5VK

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34.9s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
It was past midnight when Rory stepped beneath the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of The Fae Grove. The streets of Richmond had long since emptied of their evening patrons, and the usual nighttime din of London had receded into a distant hum. Now, she stood in an otherworldly silence, broken only by the rustle of unseen creatures in the undergrowth. Her fingers traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as she walked deeper into the grove. She had come here for answers. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a faint warmth that had been distracting her for weeks, had drawn her to this place. No longer content with dismissing it as an elaborate piece of jewelry, Rory needed to understand why it had been gifts to her by the mysterious "Protector," and why apparently the stones of this grove were reacting to it with a resonant hum that vibrated in her bones. The air in the grove was thick with the scent of wildflowers that seemed to bloom perpetually, regardless of the season outside. In the moonlight filtering through the canopy, the petals glowed with an ethereal light. Something rustled nearby, and Rory froze. She scanned the shadows, her bright blue eyes searching for movement. For a moment, she thought she caught the glimpse of a figure darting between trees - taller than a man, impossible to see clearly. She blinked, and it was gone. "It's just the wind," she whispered to herself, continuing down the winding path that snaked through the grove. The Heartstone grew warmer, its glow intensifying slightly. Her pulse quickened as she approached a clearing where the time of the grove behaved most erratically. Travelers spoke of entering at dusk and emerging at dawn the next day, or sometimes finding themselves years in the past or future upon departure. That's when she heard it - the distinct whisper of fabric brushing against stone, straight ahead. Rory stopped, the small hairs on the back of her neck standing on end. Abrubtly her ears perked up as she heard footsteps, almost padded, circling around behind her. She held her breath, waiting. Silence fell again, heavy and oppressive. She inched forward, her delivery-accustomed legs now trembling beneath her. The center of the clearing materialized into view a hundred yards ahead. In its middle stood a moss-covered pedestal upon which rested a shallow basin. Her destination. She knew somehow, as if the Heartstone itself was guiding her steps. "This grove is where the veil between worlds is thinnest," the Protector had explained, their voice a soft echo in her memory. "Your book says so," she had replied defensively, but privately she had wondered how they knew. "The stones," the Protector had simply said, and that was that. The grove itself seemed to hold its breath as she approached. The wildflowers shivered without any wind, and the trees creaked and groaned under a nonexistent gale. When she entered the clearing, Rory felt the weight of eyes upon her from every direction. Not just one pair, but many. She could feel them gazing at her from the shadows between the trees, from the canopy above, from the very dust at her feet. She approached the pedestal, noticing for the first time the intricate carvings covering its surface - swirls of Celtic knots and spirals that seemed to move and shift when she looked directly at them. Her hand hovered over the basin, then she felt it - a gentle pressure on her shoulder. She spun around, heart hammering against her ribs, but no one was there. "Hello?" she said, cursing herself for the fear that trembled in her voice. "Always trying to fix things," the voice whispered. It wasn't in her ears, but somehow inside her head. Feminine, melodic, yet cold as winter. "They lured you here,(child), but you came willing." Aurora's black hair whipped around her face as she stepped back, turning in a slow circle. "Who's there? What do you want?" "You came seeking answers," the voice continued, shifting position as if circling her in the dark. "We offer answers. True ones." The correct response had been delayed - too long. Before she could form another question, a figure materialized before her - tall, impossibly thin, with skin like bark and eyes like twin pools of ink. Its limbs were unnaturally long, extending further and further as she watched, hollow at its joints. It was unfamiliar yet somehow completely expected - an answer at last to the unsettling thrill she never fully understood since inheriting the pendant. Aurora tried frantically to back away, but the ground beneath her feet had somehow changed, becoming sticky and unmoving. The Heartstone blazed around her neck, pulsing as if keeping time with her racing heart. She tried to speak, but the air had solidified in her lungs, preventing any sound from escaping. "Such a greedy little flame," the bark-skinned creature whispered, extending one long arm. "So bright. So... valuable." The trees around them began to move, their branches coiling and lashing like serpents as they too reached towards her. The grove had come alive, and she was the only thing that mattered. "This was inevitable," the voice sighed inside her head as a secondentity emerged from behind the moss-covered pedestal. "They need you." The Heartstone burned hotter, against her collarbone and Rory knew then what she had always feared - that part of this journey had been always meant to be this end. That the "invisible protector," the return to Richmond, this midnight outing - it had all been sliding towards this moment with a gravity she hadn't seen. "Welcome home, little star," the second entity whispered as rough, scraping fingers brushed against her cheek. The last thing Aurora Carter saw was the grove lighting up with third and fourth figures stepping into the clearing, the spatial allowance of her vision no longer hers to command.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:13:19.105Z" 5/27/2026, 10:13:19 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the Protector had simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.706
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
84.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"warmth"
4"vibrated"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"quickened"
8"whisper"
9"footsteps"
10"oppressive"
11"echo"
12"weight"
13"could feel"
14"intricate"
15"trembled"
16"racing"
17"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
21.79% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount923
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Fae1
Grove1
Richmond2
London1
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Protector2
Celtic1
Aurora3
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Protector"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"erious and why apparently the stones of this"
1"wildflowers that seemed to bloom perpetually, regardless of the season outside"
2"as if circling her in the dark"
3"as if keeping time with her racing heart"
99.40% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.006
wordCount994
matches
0"Not just one pair, but many"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean43.22
std25.82
cv0.597
sampleLengths
064
1100
283
368
466
539
622
716
811
973
1064
1113
1232
1322
1421
1575
1651
1717
1833
1921
2056
2116
2231
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was gone"
1"been delayed "
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"were reacting"
1"was guiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences64
ratio0.141
matches
0"For a moment, she thought she caught the glimpse of a figure darting between trees - taller than a man, impossible to see clearly."
1"That's when she heard it - the distinct whisper of fabric brushing against stone, straight ahead."
2"She approached the pedestal, noticing for the first time the intricate carvings covering its surface - swirls of Celtic knots and spirals that seemed to move and shift when she looked directly at them."
3"Her hand hovered over the basin, then she felt it - a gentle pressure on her shoulder."
4"The correct response had been delayed - too long."
5"Before she could form another question, a figure materialized before her - tall, impossibly thin, with skin like bark and eyes like twin pools of ink."
6"It was unfamiliar yet somehow completely expected - an answer at last to the unsettling thrill she never fully understood since inheriting the pendant."
7"The Heartstone burned hotter, against her collarbone and Rory knew then what she had always feared - that part of this journey had been always meant to be this end."
8"That the \"invisible protector,\" the return to Richmond, this midnight outing - it had all been sliding towards this moment with a gravity she hadn't seen."
83.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.05223068552774755
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01958650707290533
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean15.53
std8.4
cv0.541
sampleLengths
021
125
218
318
46
528
648
722
814
96
1011
1124
126
1318
148
1517
1625
1716
1814
1915
205
216
2210
2312
2413
252
2612
2722
2816
2911
3011
3116
3216
336
3424
3534
3617
3713
3813
398
4010
416
428
4316
446
4516
465
479
4826
4916
74.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.484375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"No longer content with dismissing"
1"Abrubtly her ears perked up"
ratio0.034
82.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences58
matches
0"It was past midnight when"
1"Her fingers traced the small"
2"She had come here for"
3"She scanned the shadows, her"
4"She blinked, and it was"
5"she whispered to herself, continuing"
6"Her pulse quickened as she"
7"She held her breath, waiting."
8"She inched forward, her delivery-accustomed"
9"She knew somehow, as if"
10"she had replied defensively, but"
11"She could feel them gazing"
12"She approached the pedestal, noticing"
13"Her hand hovered over the"
14"She spun around, heart hammering"
15"she said, cursing herself for"
16"It wasn't in her ears,"
17"Its limbs were unnaturally long,"
18"It was unfamiliar yet somehow"
19"She tried to speak, but"
ratio0.345
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences58
matches
0"It was past midnight when"
1"The streets of Richmond had"
2"Her fingers traced the small"
3"She had come here for"
4"The Heartstone Pendant around her"
5"The air in the grove"
6"Something rustled nearby, and Rory"
7"She scanned the shadows, her"
8"She blinked, and it was"
9"she whispered to herself, continuing"
10"The Heartstone grew warmer, its"
11"Her pulse quickened as she"
12"Travelers spoke of entering at"
13"That's when she heard it"
14"Rory stopped, the small hairs"
15"She held her breath, waiting."
16"Silence fell again, heavy and"
17"She inched forward, her delivery-accustomed"
18"The center of the clearing"
19"She knew somehow, as if"
ratio0.828
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"Now, she stood in an"
1"Before she could form another"
ratio0.034
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was past midnight when Rory stepped beneath the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of The Fae Grove."
1"The Heartstone Pendant around her neck, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a faint warmth that had been distracting her for weeks, had drawn her to this pla…"
2"The air in the grove was thick with the scent of wildflowers that seemed to bloom perpetually, regardless of the season outside."
3"The Heartstone blazed around her neck, pulsing as if keeping time with her racing heart."
4"She tried to speak, but the air had solidified in her lungs, preventing any sound from escaping."
5"The trees around them began to move, their branches coiling and lashing like serpents as they too reached towards her."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the Protector had, their voice a soft echo in her memory"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the Protector had (have)"
2"she had (have)"
3"the Protector had simply (have)"
4"the voice whispered (whisper)"
5"the voice continued (continue)"
6"skinned creature whispered (skin whisper)"
7"the voice sighed (sigh)"
8"entity whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.9
effectiveRatio0.9
76.6432%