Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMESEECS0J8T7F1Z1X1SE6N

Run Details

Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.001071
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora flung open the door, her face red and angry. Yanking Eva inside the apartment, she didn't care about the cat Ptolemy screeching by her feet or the research papers littering the floor. "Rory, calm down! Please, I know-" "I knew you weren't in this alone!" Aurora snapped, keeping her voice low. Eva's hair was wild, vapor diffused over their irises. Two years ago, the former student at the Taylor Watts tea school, daughter of the tea school founder, rested her hands on Aurora's shoulders, trying to soothe out her rush of panic. "Must you always run at things with a sword?" She asked. "I wasn't-" "You're out of your depth!" She sputtered in frustration. Her own roommate's research kept piling up on her desk, the books, the pencil- engraved amulets... Eva took a deep breath, patting Rory gently as she twitched her head back and forth. "Now listen carefully. Fringe thriller books, religious texts, linguistics - they all tie together. Plug - I mean Paddington, isn't who we think he is." Ms.Carter narrowed her eyes. I won't get you hurt, she summed up, letting her friend step back into the room. Popping her knuckles, she held back the tears as she felt her lips tremble. "Eva-" She caught her breath. Her best friend turned around, Pat's face thrown over her shoulder like a flaxen bodyguard. She muffled a laugh, trying to stovepipe herself. "Don't worry Rory - it'll all work out!" Aurora slammed the door. She threw her bike to the floor. Even Patricia had better be doing right by her. She flew down the concrete steps of the apartment renting her friend. She wouldn't cry. She didn't living with Silas kicking up still. Her accounting for rent allowing her to learn the martial magic the proprietor promised in exchange. Suddenly, arms hooked around her waist. "Rory, stop! Let me run ore on this for a moment. It's crucial." She pinched the bridge of her nose. Her eyes fell open and a thing that moved caught her eye. "Eva." Her lip bounced up and down, up and down. Eva nodded, dragging a moment of silence up. "Hey Rory, I'll figure it all out in the end. I have - know - powerful people looking out for us both now okay?" She whispered. Together, they trekked down the quaint bricks of Brick Lane. Emma, one of her roommate's contacts, told Rory some details to look into. She still couldn't wrap her head around where Eva had been for the past month. She didn't ask, her instinct screaming that the truth would trouble her more than she already was. A yelp left her lips as frigid air filled her lungs, the rush forcing her off the pavement with an "oomph" against the concrete. She heard paws nine-pin down the street. BLAM. Fatima ran by the shop, then flowed into shadows, out of sight. Too quickly as she vomited, face crimson. "My God - north-west for the night." The bells chimed, the shop lights flickered, and she heard footsteps stop. Her heart thumped, unable to identify the threat. A strong hand she'd recognize anywhere lifted her to a sitting position, the woolly arm coiling around to her future as if every moment since Evan hadn't left this fear in the pit of her gut. She shook, meeting the heterochromatic eyes she had once loved. Lucien sighed, taking in the small colonies of crimson on Rory's knuckles. She looked a tremendous mess. "Listen, we can't chat. I'm here for work. Nothing more." Aurora wiped her eyes, a smile stuttering over her face. "You missed me." He turned away but didn't move. A mirror, forever reflecting the only one she'd confessed to falling for that could never be: a half-demon. "I'm in Londonlywood business, Rory. Nothing more."
created_at"2026-05-27T10:13:31.39Z" 5/27/2026, 10:13:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount627
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount627
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flickered"
2"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences46
matches
0"d in frustration"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords633
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount504
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Ptolemy1
Taylor1
Watts1
Aurora5
Rory3
Pat1
Patricia1
Silas1
Together1
Brick1
Lane1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Taylor"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"Pat"
6"Patricia"
7"Silas"
8"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount633
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"screaming that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean33.32
std19.84
cv0.595
sampleLengths
033
16
213
354
425
541
634
75
831
959
1019
1129
1289
1351
1427
1546
1627
1713
1831
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs97
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount506
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03359683794466403
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009881422924901186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean11.72
std7.17
cv0.612
sampleLengths
010
123
26
313
49
532
611
72
89
916
1016
1125
124
1316
1414
155
1615
178
188
194
207
219
2212
233
248
2516
266
2713
287
2912
3010
318
3226
3310
3413
3515
3617
3724
387
391
4012
417
4219
438
4436
4510
4612
475
4810
4910
75.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences43
matches
0"Suddenly, arms hooked around her"
1"Too quickly as she vomited,"
ratio0.047
24.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences43
matches
0"She sputtered in frustration"
1"Her own roommate's research kept"
2"I won't get you hurt,"
3"She caught her breath"
4"Her best friend turned around,"
5"She muffled a laugh, trying"
6"She threw her bike to"
7"She flew down the concrete"
8"She wouldn't cry."
9"She didn't living with Silas"
10"Her accounting for rent allowing"
11"She pinched the bridge of"
12"Her eyes fell open and"
13"Her lip bounced up and"
14"She still couldn't wrap her"
15"She didn't ask, her instinct"
16"She heard paws nine-pin down"
17"Her heart thumped, unable to"
18"She shook, meeting the heterochromatic"
19"She looked a tremendous mess."
ratio0.488
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"Aurora flung open the door,"
1"Aurora snapped, keeping her voice"
2"Eva's hair was wild, vapor"
3"She sputtered in frustration"
4"Her own roommate's research kept"
5"Eva took a deep breath,"
6"Ms.Carter narrowed her eyes."
7"I won't get you hurt,"
8"She caught her breath"
9"Her best friend turned around,"
10"She muffled a laugh, trying"
11"Aurora slammed the door."
12"She threw her bike to"
13"She flew down the concrete"
14"She wouldn't cry."
15"She didn't living with Silas"
16"Her accounting for rent allowing"
17"She pinched the bridge of"
18"Her eyes fell open and"
19"Her lip bounced up and"
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Even Patricia had better be"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A strong hand she'd recognize anywhere lifted her to a sitting position, the woolly arm coiling around to her future as if every moment since Evan hadn't left t…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"A yelp left, the rush forcing her off the pavement with an"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora snapped (snap)"
1"She sputtered (sputter)"
2"She whispered (whisper)"
3"The bells chimed (chime)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.5
88.2884%