Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMET8NKDNJGBRNQTDEQX9YY

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door burst open before I could even finish asking who was there. No spring on the hinges, not this time. Piazza the deadbolts hadn't worked. "Rory." My name didn't register at first. "Evan?" I stepped back, my knee knocking against the battered coffee table in Eva's crowded flat. The aroma of ancient books and drying laundry - the flat's permanent scent - suddenly seemed foreign. No, it wasn't Evan. Not this time. Tall, impeccably dressed, with a cane that looked like it belonged in a theatre production. Caesar's field. "Lucien Moreau." Of course. The name cracked through my defenses like a bullet through glass. "How did you find me?" "Brendan Carter still likes to gossip with his daughter at Sunday brunch." His tone was casual, apologetic even. "Didn't she mention me?" His heterochromatic eyes followed me as I paced behind the living room sofa. "Who said I ever told my father about you?" My fingers traced the familiar worn page of a textbook on Eva's desk. Calm. Stay calm. I'd been repeating this mantra since I was twelve, since my first 3E exam. "That brilliance is precisely why I'm here, Rory." He solutioned carefully across the room, each step deliberate. "Needless to say, things have gone sour." "Evan?" The name barely passed my lips, catching in my throat like a bone. "He stopped paying his debts." Lucien's smile didn't reach his eyes. "And started working for the wrong people." "I don't care about Evan's problems." The lie tasted sour. Of course I cared. Last time he'd broken my wrist - not my paperwork, but actually my wrist - bloody knocking holes in The WA's door.His breath had been hot against my neck. "It's rather more than a problem now." Lucien tapped his cane against the worn Persian rug Eva had "rescued" from a skip bin in Soho. "We're both in the same predicament." A crash from the kitchen - the kettle. Eva's monstrous tabby cat Ptolemy had knocked it off the counter again. Water spattered across the newspapers, blurring the headlines about another strange disappearance in West London. "No," I said firmly. "Our business ended years ago." "Laila," he used the name my mother had given me, the one I'd never told Evan. It made me shudder. "If we don't last, you don't last." A tinny ring cut through the silence - my work phone from my pocket. Yu-Fei. Golden Empress. I had a delivery in twenty minutes. Normal life. Ordinary problems. "This is inappropriate. Get out." His platinu hair caught the lamplight, milliseconds. "I've tried the polite approach. Braggart sides the can't-side trail, doors admirating." "No dogs allowed," I retorted. We spoke in our battlefield language - what had been the code to part years before. A shadow passed through his eyes - the black one. "Margaret Twinning said you were brilliant, indomitable. I said she left out some attributes." He slid a folded paper across the table. "Dead drops." Clever eyes caught the fleeting expression. "Illegal texts" "Three years ago, missed shuttles and three langs. This brings the money." "Eva's not here anymore," I lied. "She moved to Strasbourg last month." Lucien tapped the cane once. "A gap flat in Edinburgh. Tidal springs." Three rings from the work phone now. Yu-Fei's patience was fading. "You've got five minutes before I call security." He flashed more pearly whites than should fit in anyone's mouth. "Time's funny. Removes clothes in paradox." The kettle hissed in the kitchen, followed by Ptolemy's indignant meow. "Come back on Monday, when I'm free," I said. "And make an appointment." "No," said Lucien. "This isn't going to be a pleasant afternoon." He smoothed his neatly pressed trousers. "Shall we discuss the terms of Evan's treatment?" I recognized the tactic - making me switch the topic from his presence to future problems. Classic diversion. "You're wasting time" "No time wasted, Rory." He presented the dossier. "Pretty music, German texts and six skies." 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
4.88% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags82
adverbTagCount16
adverbTags
0"I stepped back [back]"
1"He solutioned carefully [carefully]"
2"I said firmly [firmly]"
3"admitted quietly [quietly]"
4"I said faintly [faintly]"
5"I said firmly [firmly]"
6"The phone rang again [again]"
7"he said gently [gently]"
8"cross-legged more [more]"
9"suggested helpfully [helpfully]"
10"complete profiles kissed suddenly [suddenly]"
11"The kettle finished entirely [entirely]"
12"I said steadily [steadily]"
13"I whispered back [back]"
14"pointy midnight reasons everywhere [everywhere]"
15"I said faintly [faintly]"
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tagDensity0.573
leniency1
rawRatio0.195
effectiveRatio0.195
59.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2079
totalAiIsmAdverbs17
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adverb"suddenly"
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adverb"precisely"
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adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count2
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"perfectly"
count2
7
adverb"slightly"
count2
8
adverb"sadly"
count1
9
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
4"gently"
5"tightly"
6"perfectly"
7"slightly"
8"sadly"
9"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Brady"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2079
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"firmly"
count2
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"determined"
count2
10
word"potential"
count2
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"firmly"
3"silence"
4"fleeting"
5"whisper"
6"porcelain"
7"silk"
8"complex"
9"determined"
10"potential"
11"electric"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happens to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2092
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions61
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1264
uniqueNames40
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Evan3
Calm1
Lucien8
Persian1
Soho1
Ptolemy2
West1
London2
Empress1
Clever1
Three1
Brady1
December1
Quinn1
No-running1
Snowdonia1
Natural1
History1
Museum1
Proper1
Red1
Hesistent1
Standards1
Rewriting1
Warner1
Turns1
Bronzos1
Currently1
Funny1
Heavy1
Regret1
Lanna1
Unexpected1
Electric1
Neat1
Arabic1
Election1
Underneath1
Predicting1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Clever"
5"Brady"
6"Quinn"
7"No-running"
8"Museum"
9"Proper"
10"Hesistent"
11"Rewriting"
12"Bronzos"
13"Currently"
14"Regret"
15"Lanna"
places
0"Soho"
1"West"
2"London"
3"December"
4"Snowdonia"
5"Natural"
6"Unexpected"
globalScore1
windowScore1
9.55% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed foreign"
1"looked like it belonged in a theatre prod"
2"seemed real"
3"seemed electrocuted bending burnished strength myriad balancing motive crucifying mighthowever chipped distance personality"
4"seemed glossy gardens significant adviser proud drinking.\"Messed harm questions rescued helping recruited through both enormous branches finally twenty entails dodging possibly engaged creating grooming"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.478
wordCount2092
matches
0"not my paperwork, but actually my wrist - bloody knocking holes in The WA's door"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs115
mean18.19
std10.44
cv0.574
sampleLengths
026
11
239
324
42
518
622
713
839
924
1014
1118
1243
1331
1435
159
1627
1733
1819
1921
2032
2122
226
2318
2419
2517
2611
2713
2825
2921
3015
3118
3220
3311
3414
353
3616
3745
387
3911
406
415
4217
432
4416
459
4631
472
4810
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs248
matches
0"was laterally running"
1"was beginning"
2"was mostly running"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences207
ratio0.043
matches
0"The aroma of ancient books and drying laundry - the flat's permanent scent - suddenly seemed foreign."
1"Last time he'd broken my wrist - not my paperwork, but actually my wrist - bloody knocking holes in The WA's door.His breath had been hot against my neck."
2"A crash from the kitchen - the kettle."
3"A tinny ring cut through the silence - my work phone from my pocket."
4"We spoke in our battlefield language - what had been the code to part years before."
5"A shadow passed through his eyes - the black one."
6"I recognized the tactic - making me switch the topic from his presence to future problems."
7"The family photos suddenly - my parents wedding, the three of us in Snowdonia, me with Eva at the Natural History Museum - seemed like relics from another life."
8"Evan's face flashed through my memory - the way he'd held me too tightly, the way I'd cringed at unexpected touches."
36.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sensitive stubborn difficult dead water"
1"flexible irrational uncertain orders"
adverbCount79
adverbRatio0.0711071107110711
lyAdverbCount54
lyAdverbRatio0.048604860486048604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean10.11
std7.42
cv0.734
sampleLengths
013
18
25
31
46
516
617
74
83
915
102
112
122
1311
145
1518
164
1713
1822
191
202
2114
2217
237
2414
2511
267
2710
284
2929
3025
316
328
3312
3415
354
365
3716
384
397
4014
411
422
437
442
452
465
477
4812
495
94.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5700483091787439
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners118
50.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"Of course I cared."
1"Currently kicking anger."
ratio0.015
78.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences133
matches
0"My name didn't register at"
1"I stepped back, my knee"
2"His tone was casual, apologetic"
3"His heterochromatic eyes followed me"
4"My fingers traced the familiar"
5"I'd been repeating this mantra"
6"He solutioned carefully across the"
7"I said firmly"
8"he used the name my"
9"It made me shudder."
10"I had a delivery in"
11"His platinu hair caught the"
12"We spoke in our battlefield"
13"He slid a folded paper"
14"He flashed more pearly whites"
15"He smoothed his neatly pressed"
16"I recognized the tactic -"
17"He presented the dossier"
18"Its 1 Lucien's fingers played"
19"I was laterally running injured."
ratio0.353
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences133
matches
0"The door burst open before"
1"Piazza the deadbolts hadn't worked."
2"My name didn't register at"
3"I stepped back, my knee"
4"The aroma of ancient books"
5"The name cracked through my"
6"His tone was casual, apologetic"
7"His heterochromatic eyes followed me"
8"My fingers traced the familiar"
9"I'd been repeating this mantra"
10"He solutioned carefully across the"
11"The name barely passed my"
12"Lucien's smile didn't reach his"
13"The lie tasted sour"
14"Lucien tapped his cane against"
15"A crash from the kitchen"
16"Eva's monstrous tabby cat Ptolemy"
17"Water spattered across the newspapers,"
18"I said firmly"
19"he used the name my"
ratio0.692
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags79
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"admitted quietly, as if to someone else"
1"suggested helpfully, voice dropping to intimate"
17.13% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags32
fancyCount19
fancyTags
0"I retorted (retort)"
1"I lied (lie)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"admitted quietly (admit)"
4"I whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien sighed (sigh)"
6"that person refusing (refuse)"
7"I whispered (whisper)"
8"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
9"suggested helpfully (suggest)"
10"he agreed (agree)"
11"he whispered (whisper)"
12"he admitted (admit)"
13"I whispered back (whisper)"
14"overseas finishings spoke (speak)"
15"he admitted (admit)"
16"I cried (cry)"
17"I whispered (whisper)"
18"another night weeks government lists reveal (reveal)"
dialogueSentences143
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0.594
effectiveRatio0.266
76.7952%