Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEWGHE7J7QJ75D40F97C70

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21.2s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet, the neon sign above flickering on and off in the evening gloom. Rory slipped in through the door, the bell jingling softly as she entered. A blast of warm air and the low murmur of conversation enveloped her, and her eyes quickly adjusted to the dim lighting, scanning the faces of the patrons. At the far end of the bar, a figure sat hunched over in a leather chair, half-hidden by the shadows. The auburn hair streaked with grey gave way to their identity, and her heart caught in her throat. It couldn't be. Could it? "Silas?" He stirred, turning his face, and her breath caught in her chest as the stark lines, the deep crevices on his once-handsome face, looked as though they could have been carved with a knife. "Rory?" His voice was hoarse, but recognizably Silas'. She took a seat across from him, marveling at the lack of recognition in his eyes. "God, it's me," she laughs, shaking her head slightly. "When did you get so old?" she grins, nudging him. "I could say the same for you, kid," Silas retorted. Time had carved out hollows beneath his cheekbones, and the chickenpox scar on his right forearm now stood out in sharp relief against the sunken flesh. "I never thought I'd see the day when Rory Carter came back to London." He smiled, but it was thin, and his eyes didn't quite crinkle at the corners the way they used to. "I've changed a bit, haven't I? Time is a cruel mistress." Rory looked away, her gaze landing on his hands, seeing the same silver signet ring he'd always worn. "You know," Silas said after a pause. "I never thought I'd miss the way things used to be. The open caseboard at the front desk, shaking our heads at the latest badaper, gohome by midnight, get 4 hours' sleep and be back by 6am ready to deliver." Rory laughed, but Silas didn't join in. "I think about it often, you know." Rory glanced up, surprised. "I thought you were content, running this bar, living this life." "I supposed I thought I was, for a while," Silas said. "But sometimes, at night, I sit in here, and I remember, and I feel like a chump." "You could always come back," Rory said. "You know that, don't you?" Silas' eyes metastasized into slits at that, and Rory saw there was no humor left there. "No." They sat in silence until Rory tilts her head, peering at the shadow he could never shed, lightly touching the rim of her glass. "You know, sometimes I think we shouldn't have run. Maybe if we hadn't-" "I know. I've thought about that a lot. Running. Leaving. All of it. Maybe we should have stayed, fought for our lives. But going your own way, making your own choices - that's the ultimate act of defiance." You came back. After all this time. "Yes, I did," Aurora admitted. "For all the reasons that I don't understand even now. And now," she said, quietly. "...what?" "I came back because, in the end, they were our people. They saved me. You saved me." Silas reached out, taking her hand, and curled his fingers around her own. "It wasn't easy, coming back here. I didn't want to lie to them-" "I know," Silas said. "I understand, Rory. I understand what it's like to have a past that you're trying to run from." He released her hand, leaning back in his chair. "Did you ever think you could come back and start over? Go back to the way things were?" Certainly for a month or two. "I did," Silas said. "When I first got out, I thought I could make a fresh start, pretend that none of it had ever happened. But..." He shrugged. "It never really goes away, does it? The things we've seen, the things we've done. They stay with us, no matter how much we try to run from them." Rory nodded, understanding exactly what he meant. "We're not the same people we were when we left, Silence." She said his name softly, intentionally, for the first time in years. "None of us are. But maybe that's okay. Maybe it's okay to have changed, to have grown, to have become something that you never expected." Silas smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners the way they used to. "Maybe you're right." They sat in comfortable silence for a while, lost in their own thoughts, until Rory finally spoke again. "I'm sorry, Silas. For everything. For running. For not being there when you needed me." Silas reached out, taking her hand again. "I'm sorry too, Rory. For everything. For not being the man I wanted to be. For not being the father I wanted to be." Silas' eyes glistened as they looked into each other's eyes, watching the reflected faces of the people they had once been shimmer and our morph away, leaving behind the faded echoes of their former selves. Rory squeezed his hand, holding on tight. "And now what?"
created_at"2026-05-27T10:15:05.531Z" 5/27/2026, 10:15:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount848
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"lightly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount848
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"comfortable"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"scanning"
2"stark"
3"silence"
4"comfortable"
5"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords849
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount387
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Time1
Rory9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Time"
3"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.337
windowScore0.333
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences23
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite crinkle at the corners the way they used to"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount849
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean19.3
std15.09
cv0.782
sampleLengths
058
138
25
31
434
58
616
79
810
950
1020
1111
1218
1347
147
157
1615
1728
1812
1916
201
2124
2213
2338
247
2520
261
2717
2813
2913
3022
319
3218
336
3457
357
3648
3716
3818
3915
4031
4135
427
433
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs74
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount450
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03777777777777778
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008888888888888889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean13.69
std9.5
cv0.694
sampleLengths
017
113
228
320
418
53
62
71
834
98
1016
119
1210
1310
1426
1514
1620
1711
1818
197
2040
217
227
234
2411
2511
2617
277
285
2916
301
3124
3213
3338
343
354
365
3715
381
3917
4013
4113
424
4318
449
4518
466
474
4824
4929
67.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43548387096774194
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences30
matches
0"Certainly for a month or"
ratio0.033
46.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences30
matches
0"It couldn't be."
1"He stirred, turning his face,"
2"His voice was hoarse, but"
3"She took a seat across"
4"she laughs, shaking her head"
5"she grins, nudging him"
6"He smiled, but it was"
7"They sat in silence until"
8"You came back."
9"she said, quietly"
10"He released her hand, leaning"
11"She said his name softly,"
12"They sat in comfortable silence"
ratio0.433
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences30
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet,"
1"Rory slipped in through the"
2"A blast of warm air"
3"The auburn hair streaked with"
4"It couldn't be."
5"He stirred, turning his face,"
6"His voice was hoarse, but"
7"She took a seat across"
8"she laughs, shaking her head"
9"she grins, nudging him"
10"Time had carved out hollows"
11"He smiled, but it was"
12"Rory looked away, her gaze"
13"Silas said after a pause"
14"Rory laughed, but Silas didn't"
15"Rory glanced up, surprised."
16"They sat in silence until"
17"You came back."
18"she said, quietly"
19"Silas reached out, taking her"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He stirred, turning his face, and her breath caught in her chest as the stark lines, the deep crevices on his once-handsome face, looked as though they could ha…"
1"Rory looked away, her gaze landing on his hands, seeing the same silver signet ring he'd always worn."
2"They sat in silence until Rory tilts her head, peering at the shadow he could never shed, lightly touching the rim of her glass."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, quietly"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she laughs (laugh)"
1"Silas retorted (retort)"
2"Aurora admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.171
78.6716%