| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Aurora admitted finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 71.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "fascinating" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "potential" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1200 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 867 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 17 | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 5 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Thames | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.52 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "nd book before apparently thinking better of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 26.09 | | std | 15.61 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 68 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was sharp, insistent—an unexpected visitor at this hour." | | 1 | "Three deadbolts—Eva had insisted on three deadbolts—turned with a satisfying clunk." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—seemed to pierce through her, even in the shadows." | | 3 | "The flat was exactly what one would expect from a researcher of ancient artifacts and supernatural lore—stacks of books wobbling precariously against walls covered in charts, diagrams, and notes in multiple languages." | | 4 | "In the better lighting, Aurora could see the tiredness around them—fine lines she hadn't noticed before." | | 5 | "\"And yet here you stand, alive and well.\" He took a step closer, and the familiar scent of him—something dark and expensive, like sandalwood and aged whisky—filled her senses." | | 6 | "Theomnia—a small, obsidian-like artifact said to allow the holder to enter people's dreams." | | 7 | "Lucien's gaze drifted to her left wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar still lingered—a reminder from when she was ten and had caught her hand on a splintered fence while trying to rescue a cat." | | 8 | "And she remembered the fight—the accusations, the slamming of doors, the ultimate declaration that they couldn't be trusted to work together when they couldn't be trusted around each other." | | 9 | "The silence that fell was charged with memories—sharp words in dim-lit hotel rooms after a botched score, quiet moments watching the Thames at dawn, the paralyzing news that had sent him running back to his demonic birthright, leaving her alone to pick up the pieces." |
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| 91.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 885 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.0384180790960452 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022598870056497175 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 12.9 | | std | 8.25 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 71.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.44086021505376344 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "His ears twitched, yellow eyes" | | 1 | "She cracked the door open," | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 3 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 4 | "he replied, his accent precisely" | | 5 | "she asked, feeling a familiar" | | 6 | "she said as he moved" | | 7 | "he murmured, reaching out to" | | 8 | "He took a step closer," | | 9 | "she said, sensing the argument" | | 10 | "Her pulse quickened under his" | | 11 | "he said quietly" | | 12 | "She bristled at his use" | | 13 | "He reached into his jacket" | | 14 | "He sighed, running a hand" | | 15 | "he asked, surprising a small" | | 16 | "she challenged, taking a step" | | 17 | "she acknowledged with a bitter" | | 18 | "he replied, his eyes never" |
| | ratio | 0.302 | |
| 23.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at precisely" | | 1 | "The sound was sharp, insistent—an" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat who" | | 3 | "His ears twitched, yellow eyes" | | 4 | "Aurora sighed, pushing her shoulder-length" | | 5 | "The scent of curry from" | | 6 | "She cracked the door open," | | 7 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, taller" | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 9 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 10 | "he replied, his accent precisely" | | 11 | "Aurora hesitated, fingers tightening around" | | 12 | "she asked, feeling a familiar" | | 13 | "A faint smile touched his" | | 14 | "Frustration warred with curiosity in" | | 15 | "she said as he moved" | | 16 | "The flat was exactly what" | | 17 | "Lucien moved with grace despite" | | 18 | "he murmured, reaching out to" | | 19 | "Aurora replied, crossing her arms" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat who had claimed her flat as his personal kingdom, lifted his head from where he'd been basking on the windowsill." | | 1 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to weave between their legs, purring loudly and jumping onto a stack of Eva's notes." | | 2 | "The silence that fell was charged with memories—sharp words in dim-lit hotel rooms after a botched score, quiet moments watching the Thames at dawn, the paralyz…" | | 3 | "Ptolemy followed, leaping onto Lucien's lap as if he'd been expecting him all along." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 1 | "Aurora admitted finally, her voice softer" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "Lucien continued (continue)" | | 4 | "she corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 6 | "she acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 7 | "Aurora admitted finally (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |