Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEXHWM64PM7SWWS6J54XAG

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31.6s
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$0.000924
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks stood like silent sentinels at the edge of the clearing, their branches intertwined to form a natural cathedral above. Moonlight filtered through the leaves, casting shifting patterns on the ground where Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends—took careful steps. The Fae Grove had always felt... different to her, not like the rest of Richmond Park. Her perk-up friends would tease her of folk tales if they ever learned of her visits, but Rory had never been one for dismissal of the unexplained. She came tonight because her Heartstone pendant, a crimson gemstone resting against her throat, had been pulsing with warmth all day—a sensation she'd learned meant she stood near a Hel portal, a doorway between realms she'd come to understand through her research. She'd come prepared: flashlight in one hand, the pendant visible beneath her coat collar. According to the old books she'd found in second-hand shops across London, this particular grove was a known entrance point, though less frequented than others. That's why she'd chosen the late hour—fewer witnesses, fewer chances of interruption. The first sign was the silence. Rory had expected the usual night sounds of the park: the rustling of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl. Instead, everything was unnaturally still. Even the wind seemed hesitant to disturb the clearing. As she moved deeper into the grove, her footsteps—usually accompanied by the crunch of autumn leaves—barely made a sound, as if the earth itself were swallowing each footfall. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. There, to her left, something moved—a flicker of shadow between two ancient oaks. Her heart jumped, but she held still, watching for nearly a full minute. Nothing. Yet unease settled into the pit of her stomach, thick and heavy as fog. She'd never experienced this before in the grove. In all her previous visits, there'd been a feeling of peace, not disquiet. "You're imagining things, Rory," she whispered to herself, the sound of her own voice jolting in the vacuum of silence. But then it came again—a sound this time, faint but unmistakable: the soft scrape of something dragging against bark. She whipped her head around, flashlight beam cutting a swath through the darkness. Only trees met her gaze. Yet her instincts screamed that she wasn't alone. The Heartstone pendant grew warmer against her skin, its faint pulsation an almost comforting rhythm against her mounting unease. The trees continued their silent watch, but Rory could feel their eyes, if not physically there, then in the collective consciousness of the forest. That's not right, she thought. Trees don't watch. Her flashlight beam trembled as she fought to steady her hand. The scraping sound came again, closer this time, from directly behind her. Slowly, she turned, the light cutting a path across the clearing until she saw it—a figure, humanoid in shape, standing between the trees. Its outline seemed indistinct, as if it were partially blended into the forest around it. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice stronger than she would have believed possible. The figure didn't answer, didn't move, merely stood watching her. The watchfulness of the forest intensified. She could feel its presence pressing in on her, the wrongness she'd noticed earlier now undeniable and pervasive. "Show yourself," she demanded, Jeffrey raising her voice. The Heartstone pendant burned with warmth, its glow seeming to intensify in the darkness. And then the forest responded. Not with words, but with a shift in the trees themselves. Branches that had been still began to move, not with the wind, but with purpose—pointed fingers reaching into the clearing. Leigh's heart hammered against her ribs as she took a step back, then another, her flashlight beam dancing wildly as she tried to track all the movements at once. "Get away from me," she whispered, backing toward the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove. They represented safety—her escape route back to the familiar world beyond. But the standing stones too seemed to vibrate with energy, their ancient oaks pulsing with an otherworldly light she'd never seen before. The figure between the trees began to move, not walking but sliding through the forest as if the very air were carrying it. Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on an exposed root and nearly sending her sprawling. Somewhere in the distance, a dog barked, and for a moment, the world seemed to snap back into focus—the sound of insects, the rustle of leaves, the gentle hum of London in the distance. She was alone. Looking around, she saw no figure, no moving trees, just the ancient oaks and the quiet grove. The Heartstone pendant had returned to its normal, gentle pulse. Had she imagined it? Her breath came in short gasps as she leaned against one of the standing stones, her fingers clutching the warm surface. The bark beneath her fingers felt slightly unnaturally smooth, as if carved from something other than oak. She closed her eyes, trying to steady her breathing, to return her thoughts to the task at hand. She'd come to observe, to understand. But understanding seemed further away than ever. When she opened her eyes, she was no longer alone. The figure stood directly before her, now fully formed and unmistakable. It was humanoid, but wrong—its face seemed stretched, the features elongated and indistinct in the moonlight. Its eyes, wide and liquid black, fixed on hers with an intensity that made Rory's blood run cold. She should run. She knew that with a certainty that vibrated through her entire body. But her feet felt rooted to the spot, as if the standing stone at her back had burrowed its roots into her shoes. The Heartstone pendant flared with warmth, near scorching against her skin, but she couldn't bring herself to move away from whatever this was that stood before her. The figure raised a hand, slender fingers with too many joints extending toward her face. In its palm rested something that looked like a blossom, but with petals that seemed to absorb light rather than reflect it. "Rory Carter," it whispered, its voice like the rustle of leaves in a gentle breeze, yet somehow in her mind rather than her ears. She swallowed hard, her mouth suddenly dry. "How do you know my name?" The figure smiled, revealing teeth that seemed too small and too perfect. "We've been waiting." "Waiting for what?" The black eyes never left hers. "For you to return." "But I've never—" Rory began, but the words died in her throat as she watched the trees around them begin to stir once again, this time moving with purpose toward the clearing. Dread pooled in her stomach as she realized what was happening.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"footfall"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"footfall"
5"scanning"
6"flicker"
7"stomach"
8"comforting"
9"could feel"
10"trembled"
11"dancing"
12"familiar"
13"otherworldly"
14"pulse"
15"intensity"
16"vibrated"
17"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
91.67% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences75
matches
0"g with warmth"
1"d with warmth"
2"d with warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
3"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1088
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory7
Fae1
Grove1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone5
Hel1
London2
Jeffrey1
Dread1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Jeffrey"
4"Dread"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Hel"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed hesitant to disturb the clearing"
1"seemed stretched the features elongated and indistinct in the moonlight"
2"petals that seemed to absorb light rather than reflect it"
3"looked like a blossom, but with petals th"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.676
wordCount1121
matches
0"Not with words, but with a shift in the trees themselves"
1"not with the wind, but with purpose"
2"not walking but sliding through the forest as if the very air were carrying"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"screamed that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.04
std27.95
cv0.698
sampleLengths
0126
151
26
362
473
520
664
743
850
914
1034
1122
1265
1351
1472
153
1631
1769
1810
1945
2065
2137
2224
2313
2415
253
2610
2743
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were swallowing"
1"were carrying"
2"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences79
ratio0.139
matches
0"Moonlight filtered through the leaves, casting shifting patterns on the ground where Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends—took careful steps."
1"She came tonight because her Heartstone pendant, a crimson gemstone resting against her throat, had been pulsing with warmth all day—a sensation she'd learned meant she stood near a Hel portal, a doorway between realms she'd come to understand through her research."
2"That's why she'd chosen the late hour—fewer witnesses, fewer chances of interruption."
3"As she moved deeper into the grove, her footsteps—usually accompanied by the crunch of autumn leaves—barely made a sound, as if the earth itself were swallowing each footfall."
4"There, to her left, something moved—a flicker of shadow between two ancient oaks."
5"But then it came again—a sound this time, faint but unmistakable: the soft scrape of something dragging against bark."
6"Slowly, she turned, the light cutting a path across the clearing until she saw it—a figure, humanoid in shape, standing between the trees."
7"Branches that had been still began to move, not with the wind, but with purpose—pointed fingers reaching into the clearing."
8"They represented safety—her escape route back to the familiar world beyond."
9"Somewhere in the distance, a dog barked, and for a moment, the world seemed to snap back into focus—the sound of insects, the rustle of leaves, the gentle hum of London in the distance."
10"It was humanoid, but wrong—its face seemed stretched, the features elongated and indistinct in the moonlight."
91.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04986400725294651
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.016319129646418858
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.19
std8.26
cv0.582
sampleLengths
022
119
26
310
427
542
614
725
812
96
1020
115
129
1328
1411
1513
1613
171
1814
198
2013
2120
2219
2313
245
258
2619
2724
285
293
3011
3112
3223
3315
3414
3510
366
3718
388
3914
405
4111
4220
4329
4418
4511
4622
4723
4815
4934
74.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4936708860759494
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead, everything was unnaturally still."
1"Even the wind seemed hesitant"
2"Only trees met her gaze."
3"Slowly, she turned, the light"
4"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.068
84.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her perk-up friends would tease"
1"She came tonight because her"
2"She'd come prepared: flashlight in"
3"She glanced around, her bright"
4"Her heart jumped, but she"
5"She'd never experienced this before"
6"she whispered to herself, the"
7"She whipped her head around,"
8"Her flashlight beam trembled as"
9"Its outline seemed indistinct, as"
10"she called out, her voice"
11"She could feel its presence"
12"she demanded, Jeffrey raising her"
13"she whispered, backing toward the"
14"They represented safety—her escape route"
15"She was alone."
16"Her breath came in short"
17"She closed her eyes, trying"
18"She'd come to observe, to"
19"It was humanoid, but wrong—its"
ratio0.338
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences74
matches
0"The ancient oaks stood like"
1"Moonlight filtered through the leaves,"
2"The Fae Grove had always"
3"Her perk-up friends would tease"
4"She came tonight because her"
5"She'd come prepared: flashlight in"
6"That's why she'd chosen the"
7"The first sign was the"
8"Rory had expected the usual"
9"She glanced around, her bright"
10"There, to her left, something"
11"Her heart jumped, but she"
12"She'd never experienced this before"
13"she whispered to herself, the"
14"She whipped her head around,"
15"The Heartstone pendant grew warmer"
16"The trees continued their silent"
17"That's not right, she thought."
18"Trees don't watch."
19"Her flashlight beam trembled as"
ratio0.716
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"As she moved deeper into the grove, her footsteps—usually accompanied by the crunch of autumn leaves—barely made a sound, as if the earth itself were swallowing…"
1"Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on an exposed root and nearly sending her sprawling."
2"The bark beneath her fingers felt slightly unnaturally smooth, as if carved from something other than oak."
3"Its eyes, wide and liquid black, fixed on hers with an intensity that made Rory's blood run cold."
4"But her feet felt rooted to the spot, as if the standing stone at her back had burrowed its roots into her shoes."
5"The figure smiled, revealing teeth that seemed too small and too perfect."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, her voice stronger than she would have believed possible"
1"she demanded, Jeffrey raising her voice"
2"Rory began, but the words died in her throat as she watched the trees around them begin to stir once again, this time moving with purpose toward the clearing"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
70.0498%