| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 93.87% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Some regulars glanced up briefly, then returned to their drinks under the сверкающие neon signs." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1050 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1048 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 8 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Herrera | 4 | | Affairs | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Headquarters | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Dewey | 1 | | Decimal | 1 | | Solid | 1 | | Engulf | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Affairs" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Headquarters" | | 7 | "Market" | | 8 | "Dewey" | | 9 | "Decimal" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed increasingly real might be helpful" | | 1 | "sounded like garnish she must have been sw" | | 2 | "light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once" | | 3 | "appeared casual and deliberate flow except some were gliding" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1050 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.62% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 75 | | std | 36.35 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 105 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 94 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 190 |
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| 95.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "was hunched" | | 1 | "been announced" |
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| 45.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't trying" | | 1 | "was running" | | 2 | "were gliding " | | 3 | "was seeing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "The flash of dark hair and olive skin, the distinctive limp from that old injury—Herrera wasn't trying to hide anymore." | | 1 | "But Quinn had seen the thing that took her partner from this world—that wasn't human, not even close." | | 2 | "The evidence—if there was any to be found in this world of spooks and shadows that seemed increasingly real—might be helpful." | | 3 | "The place smelled of stale beer, old pipe tobacco, and something else—something Quinn couldn't place, like ozone and decay mixed together." | | 4 | "The path had led her to places officially unrecorded by city planners—the liminal spaces, the Headquarters known only to those who built the city's foundation." | | 5 | "She looked down at her watch—after three in the morning, she recalled, the Market changed locations on Wednesdays...instead, of each full moon." |
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| 83.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1045 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.053588516746411484 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02583732057416268 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 14.58 | | std | 8.72 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 94.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.6527777777777778 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "so far rule but didn't" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came in short," | | 1 | "He'd gone this way." | | 2 | "She'd boarded up her own" | | 3 | "It looked solid on the" | | 4 | "She strode forward, noting the" | | 5 | "She looked down at her" | | 6 | "He was taller perhaps seven" | | 7 | "I'd mentioned human merchants-sided some" | | 8 | "Her mind rounded her demotion" | | 9 | "Her moral Dewey Decimal had" | | 10 | "They would laugh at her?" | | 11 | "she twisted turning remainder established" |
| | ratio | 0.182 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain fell in sheets," | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself" | | 2 | "Her breath came in short," | | 3 | "He'd gone this way." | | 4 | "The flash of dark hair" | | 5 | "Quinn adjusted her grip on" | | 6 | "The rain hammered down as" | | 7 | "Herrera was, at best, a" | | 8 | "The evidence—if there was any" | | 9 | "She'd boarded up her own" | | 10 | "The place smelled of stale" | | 11 | "Some regulars glanced up briefly," | | 12 | "Onyx knew the rest of" | | 13 | "Some books were deliberately bored" | | 14 | "Something wasn't right about this" | | 15 | "It looked solid on the" | | 16 | "She strode forward, noting the" | | 17 | "The wooden shelf felt real" | | 18 | "Quinn hesitated for only a" | | 19 | "The taste of peppery leather" |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "And now Herrera, the paramedic with the saint's medallion and a knack for treating wounds that defied medical explanation, was running from her." | | 1 | "figures, beings She defined her suspect standing about fifty meters away, talking with a creature of circumstances that left her breath caught in her throat." | | 2 | "Mouth dry, Quinn hefted her pistol, wondering if such a thing could even pierce what she was seeing." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |