Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEZ4K1GQPZ723VGZ26F2RC

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Duration:
14.2s
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$0.000822
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out of the decrepit subway car, the gold forearm-winning partner standing at her side. The fluorescent lights flickered, casting an eerie glow on the walls covered in graffiti and soot. An unsettling silence hung over the platform save for the distant dripping of water. Queenie was the first to speak. "This is what, the third murder in as many weeks, sir?" She nervously adjusted the clipboard, her pen hovering over the paperwork. Quinn did not answer. Instead, her gaze swept the area, absorbing the details with her trained eye. The body lay crumpled against the wall, shrouded in a black trench coat. Dark red blood pooled around her head, congealed and glistening sickeningly under the lights. Quinn moved closer, heels clicking sharply in the quiet. She glanced at the body, taking in the pale skin and frail frame. Frail but spirited. Around the neck, a golden necklace dangling with a blood-red gemstone. "That's no cheap trinket," Quinn muttered. The detective analyzed every corner of the scene, deepening the lines around her eyes. She crouched, tilting her head towards the corpse. Close up, it was clear the victim's eyes were open, glassy and lifeless. Yet this wasn't the killer's style. Not the third scream. This was ruled out as a ritual, not who she was. The scarf, whimsical and off-brand with the scraps of a noble's relic. This steampunk collage was called entitled chaos. Even in the gore, Quinn could read the name: 'Aurora Bell'. What a flower's bloom, borne of machinery gone right. The detective was still looking for clues when Queenie called them out. "You know, sir?" She formed cautious words. "I think I've got a lead on the killer. I did some poking around..." Her voice hung, uncertain. Quinn cocked an eyebrow, still on all fours. "And?" she growled. Queenie fiddled with her earring and spoke. "I found out he's a Veil Magistrate. Hence the Veil Market tokens." Quinn's breath caught. She did her best to stay cool while she thought. Looking again, she saw a small opening behind Aurora's body. It was small unless you were small enough to fit, hurrying somewhere. Her suspicion was confirmed. "And?" She stared down. Queenie studied her feet. "And...we don't have a warrant to cross into Watch Society territory. So I thought..." "It won't happen," Quinn said. A thought occurred to Queenie. "And who says I'm in Watch Society," she whispered. Queenie shook her head, but she knew Quinn had a point. This was her jurisdiction, after all. With a sigh, she holstered her weapon. "Fine. But if we're doing this, we're doing it my way," she warned. Queenie nodded. She knew Harlow well enough to know when a compromise was the best she was going to get. With that, the two detectives set off into the dark tunnel, ready to face whatever awaited them in the Veil Market and uncover the truth behind the murder.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:16:31.597Z" 5/27/2026, 10:16:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.909
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount489
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount489
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"analyzed"
count1
4
word"whimsical"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"glistening"
3"analyzed"
4"whimsical"
5"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords489
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
39.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount406
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn9
Queenie7
Aurora1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Queenie"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.392
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount489
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean54.33
std33.8
cv0.622
sampleLengths
048
128
2142
330
476
535
645
737
848
82.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences47
matches
0"was ruled"
1"was called"
2"was confirmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs82
matches
0"was still looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount284
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.02464788732394366
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.01056338028169014
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean9.98
std5.3
cv0.531
sampleLengths
018
116
214
36
422
54
613
713
814
99
1013
113
1211
136
1414
158
1613
176
184
1911
2012
217
2211
239
2412
257
2618
278
283
297
3012
313
3210
3310
3412
354
364
374
3814
395
405
419
4211
436
447
4513
462
4718
4828
88.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5306122448979592
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences41
matches
0"Instead, her gaze swept the"
1"Dark red blood pooled around"
ratio0.049
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences41
matches
0"She nervously adjusted the clipboard,"
1"She glanced at the body,"
2"She crouched, tilting her head"
3"She formed cautious words"
4"Her voice hung, uncertain"
5"She did her best to"
6"It was small unless you"
7"Her suspicion was confirmed."
8"She stared down"
9"She knew Harlow well enough"
ratio0.244
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences41
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out"
1"The fluorescent lights flickered, casting"
2"An unsettling silence hung over"
3"Queenie was the first to"
4"She nervously adjusted the clipboard,"
5"Quinn did not answer."
6"The body lay crumpled against"
7"Quinn moved closer, heels clicking"
8"She glanced at the body,"
9"The detective analyzed every corner"
10"She crouched, tilting her head"
11"This was ruled out as"
12"The scarf, whimsical and off-brand"
13"This steampunk collage was called"
14"The detective was still looking"
15"She formed cautious words"
16"Her voice hung, uncertain"
17"Quinn cocked an eyebrow, still"
18"Queenie fiddled with her earring"
19"Quinn's breath caught."
ratio0.707
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"Even in the gore, Quinn"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice hung, uncertain"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"she growled (growl)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.727
90.1222%