Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEZ9TR2X87FMNAPSJM5H57

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The massive oak standing stones marked the boundary, their ancient wood gray with age and weather, yet humming with a subtle power that made the air vibrate. Aurora Carter, still coming to terms with shadows whispering her name and pendant glowing crimson, approached cautiously. At her side, Nyx shimmered half-formed, their body of living shadows flickering like a dying candle flame. "Here it is," Aurora murmured, adjusting the Fae-forged blade strapped to her left thigh. Its cold bit her bones through her trousers, a constant reminder of the impossible journey she'd undertaken. Nyx exited their shadow form and solidified enough to briefly naked a humanoid silhouette in the dim light filtering through the oak canopy. Their violet eyes seemed to absorb what little illumination there was. "We're expected," they whispered, their voice like dry leaves skittering across stone. "The doll should've been here hours ago." Aurora didn't ask why they spoke in riddles anymore. With Nyx, everything was a riddle wrapped inside an enigma, and most times, she preferred it that way. "Where now?" she asked, peering between the standing stones into the grove beyond. The air itself seemed to move differently here, thick with the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something older—something metallic and faintly sulfuric. Nyx pointed a shadowy finger past the massive oaks. "She dwells in the heart, where the oldest trees rustle the secrets of the wind." The Fae Grove was nothing like she'd imagined. As they stepped between the standing stones, the world shifted subtly. The sky took on a lavender hue that seemed both afternoon and midnight at once. Time stumbled and faltered—an hour glass pouring both sand upward and downward simultaneously. "Your pendant," Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves. Aurora followed their gaze to her chest. The Heartstone pulsed a gentle crimson, its warmth spreading across her collarbone. "This place..." "It's ancient. Somehow both older and younger than anything you've known." They ventured deeper, the ground beneath their feet uncomplicated by ancient root systems that should have been treacherous. The farther they walked, the more Aurora felt the grove's age pressing on her consciousness. Trees centuries old stood sentinel, their bark carved with symbols she couldn't read but somehow understood nonetheless. "Does the Veil feel thinner here?" Aurora asked, suddenly cold despite the mild air. "It's not just thin," Nyx replied. "It's tangled. Like a spider's web with strands knotted together." Ahead, sunlight filtered through impossibly tall birch trees, illuminating a natural clearing where wildflowers defied season and time. In the center stood another standing stone, this one carved with intricate spiral patterns that seemed to move when observed from the corner of her eye. And there, beside the stone, waited Isolde Varga. Her silver hair cascaded down her back like moonlight made solid. When she turned, her lavender eyes seemed to hold all the wisdom of the grove. She smiled, but it didn't quite reach those ancient eyes. "Welcome to the in-between," she said, and though she stood still, the very air around her seemed to vibrate with hidden energy. Aurora's wrist scar—normally pale except when she stressed—tingled sharply. She forced herself to keep her breathing steady. Despite the small curls of trepidation wending through her, she found herself fascinated. Isolde possessed a tranquility that defied her reputation as Oracle. "You sense it, don't you?" Isolde asked, gesturing to the Heartstone. The pendant warmed again in response, glowing more intensely where it rested against her shirt. "Dymas calls to it," Aurora said. "To me." "And it answers." Isolde approached, her feet making no sound upon the soft moss. "Just as it answered to me all those centuries ago when I first beheld it in the human realm." Nyx stepped forward, solidifying more completely until their silhouette became sharper. "Centuries ago, you said. Tell me truly, Seer—what do you know of this pendant?" Isolde laughed softly, a sound like wind chimes. "Everything and nothing. I know it comes from a place of excess, of feasting and gluttony. I know it depends on restaurants near portals." "The Golden Empress," Aurora whispered. "Where I work." "The protégé of Chef Yu-Fei," Isolde confirmed. "Blessed with a talent for creating exquisite dishes that draw patrons from... all realms." She gestured to the stone they've circled. "Over here. You'll find the answers you seek mirrored in the water." Behind a screen of blooming azaleas and ferns crystallized with morning dew stood a crystal-clear pool that seemed bottomless. Aurora approached cautiously, the Heartstone at her chest pulsing now strongly enough that she could feel its rhythm against her ribs. Bending over the water, she saw not her reflection, but through it—the Golden Empress came into sharp view as if she were looking down on the restaurant from above. Inside, Yu-Fei moved with purpose, directing kitchen staff before vanishing into his private office where, in the vision, a door to somewhere else flickered opening. "Bloody hell," Aurora breathed. "The involvement of Yu-Fei exposes the contracts between the human realm and Dymas more deeply than you imagined," Isolde said, appearing at her shoulder. Nyx materialized beside them, eyes fixed on the vision in the water. The surface rippled once, and the image changed to Dymas itself—a land of warm amber skies and opulent feasting halls where souls served as chefs and patrons, their forms indistinct. "A queendom of dining built upon souls who found their way from your kitchen," Nyx whispered, a note of awe in their voice. "But Yu-Fei's office," Aurora said, pointing though she knew Isolde would see nothing. "That wasn't just a serving hatch to another kitchen, was it?" Isolde placed a hand gently on Aurora's shoulder. The touch carried the weight of ages, and Aurora glimpsed countless possibilities dancing at the edges of her vision—possible futures, possible pasts. "He too is caught between worlds, bound to a promise he made long ago. His kitchen exists in both realms, a doorway impossible for mortal eyes to discern." The pendant at Aurora's chest throbbed, and this time she felt something else—an answering pulse from Dymas that seemed both ancient and immediate, a hunger that transcended mere eating. "Prince Belphegor knows you have the stone," Isolde stated. "He watches." "How long do we have?" Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the fear creeping up her spine. "The winter solstice comes," Nyx said, their form shifting restlessly. "When the Veil weakens, Belphegor will make his move." Isolde knelt at the water's edge, her piers raising ripples that distorted the vision momentarily. "Time moves differently here. Moments outside are days within. We have perhaps three days by your reckoning before the solstice's full power parts the Veil permanently. When it does, Belphegor will cross completely." "And Yu-Fei?" Aurora asked, feeling the weight of the dagger at her thigh. "What of the souls bound to his kitchen?" The grove fell silent except for rustling leaves that spoke a language she almost understood. Isolde's gaze fixed on a point beyond them, her expression distant. "One soul remains captive in Dymas. The chef who once fed believers but was devoured long ago by his craft. His daughter still seeks him, blind to his enslavement." Aurora followed Isolde's stare to a small marin of lily pads floating nearby, where a water strider darted across surface tension with impossible grace. Inside that dance, she thought she glimpsed another vision—Eva, her childhood friend, coherent but confused, searching the Golden Empress with widening eyes. "The more you know, the faster Belphegor will move," Nyx warned, their form extending shadowy fingers along the ground. "We must act while he still believes your ignorance serves his purpose." Isolde stood fluidly, turning to face Aurora with unwavering certainty in her ancient eyes. "You can help her, Aurora Carter. Save the daughter, save the chef, pit one Prince against another." "But how?" Aurora asked,finally breaking eye contact with the watery visions. "I'm just... me." "Which is precisely why you can succeed where others have failed," Isolde said enigmatically. "The ordinary workings of the mundane often sneak past defenses crafted to ward off the grandiose."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said enigmatically [enigmatically]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
55.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"intensely"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count2
6
adverb"truly"
count1
7
adverb"softly"
count1
8
adverb"gently"
count1
9
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"sharply"
4"intensely"
5"completely"
6"truly"
7"softly"
8"gently"
9"precisely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"enigma"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"treacherous"
count1
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"trepidation"
count1
9
word"crystallized"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"pulse"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"dance"
count1
20
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"reminder"
2"enigma"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"treacherous"
6"sentinel"
7"intricate"
8"trepidation"
9"crystallized"
10"crystal"
11"could feel"
12"flickered"
13"carried the weight"
14"dancing"
15"throbbed"
16"pulse"
17"weight"
18"tension"
19"dance"
20"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
42.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1345
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount924
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx11
Fae-forged1
Aurora20
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone3
Ahead1
Isolde15
Varga1
Oracle1
Golden2
Empress2
Yu-Fei1
Dymas2
Eva1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Empress"
5"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Dymas"
globalScore0.418
windowScore0.333
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"patterns that seemed to move when observed from the corner of her eye"
1"quite reach those ancient eyes"
2"seemed bottomless"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.743
wordCount1345
matches
0"not her reflection, but through it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean25.87
std13.51
cv0.522
sampleLengths
061
131
234
319
427
535
624
747
812
919
102
1111
1250
1314
1416
1544
168
1736
1822
1940
2011
2115
228
2333
2411
2514
2632
278
2821
2919
3040
3154
324
3324
3442
3523
3624
3730
3828
3929
4011
4117
4219
4348
4421
4526
4629
4746
4831
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"were looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences94
ratio0.085
matches
0"The air itself seemed to move differently here, thick with the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something older—something metallic and faintly sulfuric."
1"Time stumbled and faltered—an hour glass pouring both sand upward and downward simultaneously."
2"Aurora's wrist scar—normally pale except when she stressed—tingled sharply."
3"Bending over the water, she saw not her reflection, but through it—the Golden Empress came into sharp view as if she were looking down on the restaurant from above."
4"The surface rippled once, and the image changed to Dymas itself—a land of warm amber skies and opulent feasting halls where souls served as chefs and patrons, their forms indistinct."
5"The touch carried the weight of ages, and Aurora glimpsed countless possibilities dancing at the edges of her vision—possible futures, possible pasts."
6"The pendant at Aurora's chest throbbed, and this time she felt something else—an answering pulse from Dymas that seemed both ancient and immediate, a hunger that transcended mere eating."
7"Inside that dance, she thought she glimpsed another vision—Eva, her childhood friend, coherent but confused, searching the Golden Empress with widening eyes."
95.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04051172707889126
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.024520255863539446
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.31
std6.97
cv0.487
sampleLengths
027
117
217
314
417
523
611
712
87
99
1018
1113
1222
139
1415
158
1611
1715
1813
1912
207
2112
222
2311
2418
2515
2617
2714
286
2910
3018
3126
328
3311
3415
3510
3622
379
388
3913
4010
4111
4215
436
442
4514
4619
4711
4814
498
85.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5212765957446809
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences65
matches
0"Its cold bit her bones"
1"Their violet eyes seemed to"
2"they whispered, their voice like"
3"she asked, peering between the"
4"They ventured deeper, the ground"
5"Her silver hair cascaded down"
6"She smiled, but it didn't"
7"she said, and though she"
8"She forced herself to keep"
9"She gestured to the stone"
ratio0.154
52.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences65
matches
0"The massive oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter, still coming to"
2"Aurora murmured, adjusting the Fae-forged"
3"Its cold bit her bones"
4"Nyx exited their shadow form"
5"Their violet eyes seemed to"
6"they whispered, their voice like"
7"Aurora didn't ask why they"
8"she asked, peering between the"
9"The air itself seemed to"
10"Nyx pointed a shadowy finger"
11"The Fae Grove was nothing"
12"The sky took on a"
13"Time stumbled and faltered—an hour"
14"Nyx whispered, their voice barely"
15"Aurora followed their gaze to"
16"The Heartstone pulsed a gentle"
17"They ventured deeper, the ground"
18"The farther they walked, the"
19"Trees centuries old stood sentinel,"
ratio0.815
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The massive oak standing stones marked the boundary, their ancient wood gray with age and weather, yet humming with a subtle power that made the air vibrate."
1"They ventured deeper, the ground beneath their feet uncomplicated by ancient root systems that should have been treacherous."
2"Isolde possessed a tranquility that defied her reputation as Oracle."
3"Behind a screen of blooming azaleas and ferns crystallized with morning dew stood a crystal-clear pool that seemed bottomless."
4"Bending over the water, she saw not her reflection, but through it—the Golden Empress came into sharp view as if she were looking down on the restaurant from ab…"
5"The pendant at Aurora's chest throbbed, and this time she felt something else—an answering pulse from Dymas that seemed both ancient and immediate, a hunger tha…"
6"Isolde knelt at the water's edge, her piers raising ripples that distorted the vision momentarily."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible over the rustling leaves"
1"Isolde approached, her feet making no sound upon the soft moss"
2"Nyx whispered, a note of awe in their voice"
3"Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the fear creeping up her spine"
4"Nyx said, their form shifting restlessly"
5"Nyx warned, their form extending shadowy fingers along the ground"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
5"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
6"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde stated (state)"
8"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.409
effectiveRatio0.391
67.1730%