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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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He rapped on the door three sharp times, enough to wake the dead but not the neighbours, or so he'd calculated. The precise mathematical certainty of his knock made him pleasant. He loved precise things. Very slowly, Rory shuffled down the brief hallway separating her flat from the outside world. The three deadbolts — a charming reminder of past troubles — squealed one by one in quick succession. They were never meant to keep out vampires or werewolves, just people who were heavy-handed with their fists and their affection. Like certain former parts of her life she preferred to keep outside. Rory didn't know who would be on the other side of her wood-planked barrier. A delivery. Not for her. The blockade of deadbolts ensured that her property remained detached from party-too-hard student apartments flanking her flat on either side. My perfect little fortress. But Condition B sprouted, not bad, just unexpected. Condition B, with his impossibly preoccupied eyes and tailored suits. Bloody hell. "How did you find this place?" She kept her body rigidly positioned in the doorway, deliberately choosing to block his entry entirely. "The door was locked." "My dear girl, has anyone ever told you three heavy bolts make little difference when you're obliging enough to look out the window at precisely eight forty-three p.m.? I've been tracking you for days. The Yu-Fei delivery schedule, Walkheath bookshop, the curry house below. fashionably occasionally." Her right hand — the one not still on the third and most stubborn deadbolt — smacked against her forehead. Nails, short and utilitarian black, tapped impatiently against skin. "Of course you have. What do you want, Luc?" He made no move to enter. She saw his left amber eye, constantly restless, scan the flat behind her before touching her face, then the messy pile of spell tomes on her coffee table, before finally landing on her torn jeans and weary features again. "Plenty," he admitted, waving in the air the ivory-handled cane he always carried. "Plenty I suspect you'd rather not know. But primarily, I've come about yesterday's development." "Yesterday?" Was quite apparent in her voice. "Yesterday was yesterday. The relevant parts remain." "Oh," Lucien dipped his head slightly, smooth blonde hair catching the hallway light as if made of spun glass, "the relevance index on this particular situation operates on a remarkably different scale. Might we discuss it indoors? Indicating a growing sense of impatience. I wasn't anticipating doorstep rudimentary astronomy either." Rory scoffed but stepped aside, allowing him just enough room to enter and not need to squeeze sideways. Still, as he brushed past her, she detected the subtle clove and cedar scent, an experience she recalled in vivid, troubling detail from three years ago. Platinum blond head sunk below the doorframe as he passed through, moving with the preternatural grace too perfect for human edited genes sličenia. "Are you stealthing point options down there?" she asked irritably once she secured the locks. No point in good security measures if you left them open when the predatory cat was already indoors. The moment the lock tumbled closed with a final, definitive snick, the flat above the curry house still felt smaller with both of them inside. contriadicting "Apartments in above-continent's building, crossword-style vision performance completed. My personal decent personal muddle of usefulLee workspace for him level." Lucien glided across the room without looking, straight to the bookshelf where prints of obscure London architecture layered its scraps height. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount12
adverbTags
0"she asked irritably [irritably]"
1"Rory stomped rapidly [rapidly]"
2"heightwalk escaping specifically [specifically]"
3"Storming thrown abruptly [abruptly]"
4"hand held precisely [precisely]"
5"Lucien's reputation took precisely [precisely]"
6"she sighed finally [finally]"
7"accurate coordinating progressed steadily [steadily]"
8"He stepped back [back]"
9"He smiled slightly [slightly]"
10"mathematical variation defined annually [annually]"
11"perfect entirety COVID behaviour performing rapidly [rapidly]"
dialogueSentences107
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.654
rawRatio0.343
effectiveRatio0.224
0.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3082
totalAiIsmAdverbs104
found
0
adverb"very"
count5
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count39
4
adverb"slightly"
count5
5
adverb"perfectly"
count20
6
adverb"utterly"
count2
7
adverb"completely"
count18
8
adverb"suddenly"
count3
9
adverb"gently"
count1
10
adverb"quickly"
count3
11
adverb"cautiously"
count1
12
adverb"carefully"
count2
13
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
3"precisely"
4"slightly"
5"perfectly"
6"utterly"
7"completely"
8"suddenly"
9"gently"
10"quickly"
11"cautiously"
12"carefully"
13"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3082
totalAiIsms89
found
0
word"calculated"
count2
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"affection"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count11
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"anticipating"
count1
6
word"determined"
count6
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"absolutely"
count34
9
word"familiar"
count3
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"resolved"
count7
14
word"potential"
count2
15
word"tracing"
count2
16
word"comforting"
count1
17
word"solitary"
count2
18
word"efficient"
count3
19
word"resolving"
count1
20
word"aligned"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"remarkable"
count1
23
word"systematic"
count1
24
word"measured"
count2
25
word"ensuring"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"reminder"
2"affection"
3"perfect"
4"sense of"
5"anticipating"
6"determined"
7"flicker"
8"absolutely"
9"familiar"
10"whisper"
11"firmly"
12"pulse"
13"resolved"
14"potential"
15"tracing"
16"comforting"
17"solitary"
18"efficient"
19"resolving"
20"aligned"
21"resolve"
22"remarkable"
23"systematic"
24"measured"
25"ensuring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
78.22% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences6
adjustedGibberishSentences6
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount3
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0.037
matches
0"1 hand held precisely simply uniformly inch-adjacent specific within entire solely strategically reeawaken disposing corsetجا起来 \"YES bonus accuracy advised preciselyigteamo several…"
1"Lucien finally reversed accurately nothing unfamiliar determined between rising light cascade silently consistent delخصوص again. discovers assenting instantly acknowledge consideri…"
2"casual yaz indeed managed findings entirely surrounding showing simultaneous squalid difficulty nearly NETTED FOUND Amazingly absolutely concluding."
3"IARA appreciatively chumed delicious widers varied establishing existed opulence thought atmospherically his precise micron above readiness patient temperment premium description o…"
4"\"GREMLINS emergent involving trouble accessible SEEKS intruck injury impossible recurring somewhere mandated completing not involved absolutely efficiently constantly between depar…"
5"\"Efficiently service rendered Holdings INSTAN \"\" exact impossible aligned you casual suddenly really signalable absolutely unexpected perfect Candmittance personal. challenging dis…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3091
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1681
uniqueNames29
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Condition2
Was1
Lucien6
London1
Office1
Occult1
Enquiry1
Canberra1
Oh1
Bullocks1
Aurora5
Three1
Keeping1
Getting1
Storming1
Cruel1
Bijou1
Grace1
Luc1
Ce1
Smooth1
February1
Amazingly1
Calmly1
Serge1
Recorded1
Tracing1
Certain1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Was"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Storming"
5"Grace"
6"Luc"
7"Ce"
8"Amazingly"
9"Calmly"
10"Serge"
11"Recorded"
places
0"London"
1"Canberra"
2"Three"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"s somehow none apparently perfect powerful pr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.324
wordCount3091
matches
0"neither approaching comforting nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"ensured that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs127
mean24.34
std16.88
cv0.694
sampleLengths
035
166
263
326
446
538
645
727
814
950
1044
1123
1233
1345
1450
1550
1622
1718
189
1926
2044
2113
2215
2319
246
2553
265
2714
285
2914
309
319
324
333
347
3521
3630
3723
3815
391
408
4114
4217
4315
445
456
4611
4711
4819
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs300
matches
0"wasn't meeting"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"was standing"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"The three deadbolts — a charming reminder of past troubles — squealed one by one in quick succession."
1"Her right hand — the one not still on the third and most stubborn deadbolt — smacked against her forehead."
2"He plucked her Office from yesterday morning — an mailed Occult Enquiry about a client issue, sigilic cold documents verification, one altercation managed — and certainly had questions about \"If I had,\" he murmured without turning, \"you wouldn't have nearly killed yourself checking for kitchen slippers at 2am, would you? Though hairy personalized slippers remained absent, Even with ridiculously unsuitable outdoor footwear inside like, nearly black varieties.\" he carried nestled proximalig conveniently cedar cane Canberra evening temperature equalized steadily\""
3"\"Specifically determined,\" she finally managed — not weil consisting."
4"\"GREMLINS emergent involving trouble accessible SEEKS intruck injury impossible recurring somewhere mandated completing not involved absolutely efficiently constantly between departments previous precise EMBODIED NORMALLY further generally STATEMENT completed ; IMPART genuinely separate renewed accurate REVEALING precisely venomous seriously. CERTAIN \"."
0.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1626
adjectiveStacks10
stackExamples
0"party-too-hard student"
1"familiar sharp clean scent"
2"occupied resolvable informative perfect"
3"overcomprehensible economic mathematical cyclous journey"
4"specific hybrid kindeuranalogous completing"
5"showing simultaneous squalid difficulty"
6"awaiting precise intimate expert"
7"naive updated analytical practical completion"
8"individual EXISTING accurate issues"
9"received original measured increased involvement"
adverbCount293
adverbRatio0.18019680196801968
lyAdverbCount248
lyAdverbRatio0.15252152521525214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean18.85
std15.02
cv0.797
sampleLengths
021
110
24
315
418
521
612
714
82
93
1020
114
128
1310
142
1522
164
1746
1820
199
209
216
2239
2313
2414
257
267
2750
2818
2926
3023
3115
3218
3325
3420
3521
3679
3722
3827
3926
402
4155
429
4325
446
4553
465
4714
485
4923
98.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.7317073170731707
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners120
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences104
matches
0"Very slowly, Rory shuffled down"
1"Quite a bloody long time"
2"Almost nothing visible except certain"
3"strangely problem doing depended contrasted"
4"finally silently triggered alteration first"
5"(Calmly expects formal typically uncritical"
6"ALL SORTED complete above next"
7"necessarily minimizing forming specific successfully"
8"KINDA basically INSTAN states perfection"
ratio0.087
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences104
matches
0"He rapped on the door"
1"He loved precise things."
2"They were never meant to"
3"My perfect little fortress."
4"She kept her body rigidly"
5"Her right hand — the"
6"He made no move to"
7"She saw his left amber"
8"he admitted, waving in the"
9"she asked irritably once she"
10"He plucked her Office from"
11"he paused, exposing away enlargement,"
12"She stared and breezy jacket"
13"He walked closer, the familiar"
14"his voice formally stressed unexpectedly"
15"He stopped mid-center."
16"she finally managed — not"
17"He slapped precise conclusion resummarily"
18"she sighed finally specifically approximately"
19"He bowed facing instead perfectly"
ratio0.25
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences104
matches
0"He rapped on the door"
1"The precise mathematical certainty of"
2"He loved precise things."
3"The three deadbolts — a"
4"They were never meant to"
5"Rory didn't know who would"
6"The blockade of deadbolts ensured"
7"My perfect little fortress."
8"Condition B, with his impossibly"
9"She kept her body rigidly"
10"Her right hand — the"
11"He made no move to"
12"She saw his left amber"
13"he admitted, waving in the"
14"Lucien dipped his head slightly,"
15"Rory scoffed but stepped aside,"
16"Platinum blond head sunk below"
17"she asked irritably once she"
18"The moment the lock tumbled"
19"Lucien glided across the room"
ratio0.587
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They were never meant to keep out vampires or werewolves, just people who were heavy-handed with their fists and their affection."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"these corners continued (continue)"
2"she sighed finally (sigh)"
3"L lied (lie)"
4"possibility maintained (maintain)"
dialogueSentences107
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.15
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.093
81.0916%