Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEZRH2C2Q6BWY6GAK3ZYT5

Run Details

Duration:
42.6s
Cost:
$0.002025
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A shroud of ominous darkness blanketed the grove. Tree structures twisted in strange, impossible angles. Lunar light shined on the FDET. Drip-drip. Streams of blood ran across cracked ground that seemed to echo from underfoot across the frozen grass. My breathing became labored, shuddering and spent as if I had sprinted here. Alarms went off in my head, causing it to throb. Dozens of whispers played in my ears, but they were too faint to really register. The chilly wind bit down on my neck, a cold reminder of the icy temperature. Snot ran from my nose, clogging my mouth, saltiness crawling into my throat. I shivered, zipping up my jacket as far as it would go. Pure white breath steamed out from my mouth. Each movement revealed my pounding heart, each exhalation straining breath. Memories flickered through my mind; at once vivid and entangled as my nightmares had become. Evan's past shadow stretching across my mind. With my eyes finally adjusting to the light, the heart stone revealed an eerie glow. Sure, I remembered being given it; an obscure memory handed to me as a child. Was this really the same ancient artifact? Unsurprised, the "grove" was a trap. Reading as my worst fears in the back of mind, this place felt so wrong. An absurdity. My thoughts were so dark and hopeless. Nothing but pain vibrated in my bones and compressed my chest. Breaking down into tears, I just wanted to run, runaway from the enormity of it. The abject terror stung my eyes. Why did I come here again, and why was it still this dangerous. I should've stayed in London, it was safer- the thoughts rushed through my mind. Yellow leaves were dancing in the fairy lights, which amplified the dread piercing through me. Rory. Call my name. Call my name. You're mine, Rory. The voice called out again, bordering on a warning. M B;I tripped and hit the forest floor hard, kicking up dead, rotten leaves. "Shhh- be quiet " My throat closed as I stammered and sobbed. A guttural scream erupted from my lungs in a forceful shout: SILENCE! "!! The world around me went dark. Alan. The image of Francis played in my mind. Thrown into an abyss; my heart froze.. ched the silence for a moment, a tense pause. The muffled laughter crept into the early morning. Photos. News. Headlines. The word spread as if the police had already announced the news. Then came the trembling, nausea and vomiting. The shots fired went off- the bloodshot eyes. Pictures. I had too many pictures. My smallest confidence is shattered. Pieces are gone. A rat, trapped in a cage as it ate away the center of my being. Suicidal. Anguish overpowered emotions. I rocked back and forth, crying. I kept it inside; memories buried. Bloody tears. I'm trapped in a nightmare. Tears poured down my face, and blood dripped down my wrists. The pain was almost too much to bear. I managed to drag myself through the grove. My hands were slick with sweat and shaking uncontrollably. It felt like a dream; still enough sleep to get to tomorrow, regarding as the harder inside of another day. Slowly, the alarm set in as every little hair on my body stood. I ran back to Herizon and left the memories behind. I laid there, staring at the wall, wondering. They never said a thing, this was every nightmare royal. It was long gone, that feeling of endless sleep, yet something felt so odd. Sickening. I dwelled in a memory, jumping into the depths I had long tried to forget. As quickly as it appeared, it faded away. A ghost of a dream. I shook my head, trying to clear my thoughts. But the unease lingered, a sense of foreboding that I couldn't shake. I needed to figure out what was going on, and fast. But for now, I just needed to breathe. I took a deep breath, trying to calm my racing heart. But the memories kept coming, one after another, like a tormented broken record. Evan's laughter, his cruel jokes, his insults. The way he made me feel small, worthless, insignificant. I tried to push them away, but they just kept coming back, taunting me with their vividness. Then, suddenly, I heard a noise. A twig snapped, and I froze, my heart pounding in my chest. I held my breath, listening intently. But there was nothing. Just the sound of my own racing heart and the wind rustling the leaves. I let out a shaky breath, realizing I had been holding it. But the feeling of unease still lingered, nagging at the back of my mind. I stood up, my body shaking. I needed to get out of here, needed to go somewhere, anywhere else. As I stumbled through the grove, I couldn't shake the feeling that I was being watched. That something was following me, creeping up from behind. I whirled around, my heart leaping into my throat. But there was no one there. Just the trees, swaying in the wind, and the shadows, dancing in the moonlight. I turned back around, my breath coming in short, panicked gasps. I needed to get out of here, needed to get to somewhere safe. But as I took a step forward, I froze. There, in the distance, I saw it. A figure, standing still, watching me. I squinted, trying to make out who it was. But it was too far away, too obscured by the trees. And then, slowly, it began to move towards me. Slowly, inexorably, like a predator stalking its prey. My heart pounded in my chest, my palms slicked with sweat. I took a step back, then another, but the figure kept coming, its pace slow and steady. I turned and ran, my feet pounding against the ground. I ran and ran, my lungs burning, my legs aching. But no matter how fast I went, I could still hear it behind me, slowly gaining ground. I looked back over my shoulder, but the figure was gone. I skidded to a halt, my chest heaving as I tried to catch my breath. But there, in the distance, I saw it again. Watching me, waiting. I turned and ran again, my heart pounding a staccato rhythm in my chest. But this time, I didn't look back. I just ran, ran until my lungs burned and my legs gave out. And as I collapsed to the ground, gasping for breath, I knew. I was never going to escape. Not from this place. Not from this feeling. Not from the memories that haunted me, the nightmares that stalked me. I was trapped in a cycle of my own making, and there was no escape. No matter how hard I tried, no matter how far I ran, I was always going to be stuck here. Trapped in the darkness, lost in the shadows, forever chasing after something I could never quite grasp. And as the figure began to approach, slow and inexorable, I knew there was nothing I could do but scream. A shriek erupted from my throat, raw and primal, as the figure finally drew near. I could see it more clearly now, its features obscured by the darkness, but its intent unmistakable. Hunger. Rage. Pursuit. I pressed myself back against a tree trunk, my body shaking uncontrollably, a prayer falling from my lips. But I knew it would make no difference. This thing, whatever it was, was not subject to the whims of mere mortals. It followed its own rules, its own agenda. And I was simply in its way. The figure loomed closer, extending a gnarled hand towards me. I flinched back, tried to scramble away, but there was nowhere to go. I was trapped, cornered like a rabbit, with no escape and no hope. I closed my eyes, bracing for the inevitable. The touch on my flesh, feeling the stench of rottenness. The screams as it screamed. Waiting, waiting. I was lost in a silent world until the drip-drip of blood stunned me. The darkness—oppressive, thick as ink—threw deceptive images my way, laughing at my ignorance. A chimera of nightmares and memories, that I knew would crescendo to a final act of horror. The cold realized my dreams up ahead, and my feet sunk into muck. Into the stuff of nightmares, chasing my fears back. Malphora had told me, and here, at this moment I understood. Everything was inside-the darkness, the voice, the endless maze of twisted trees. The moon stared cruelly at me, as if laughing. I was cold, scared, searching for something—anything to provide me comfort from becoming completely unhinged. I was alone, the heart stone forgotten, my necklace lost. I fell to my knees, unable to conceivable of taking another step. Sobbing, praying, hoping. I was..." I whispered to myself, letting out a long, shuddering sob. The only answer came the sough of the breeze in the branches, whispering warnings. Something shifted in the copse of trees. In the darkness. The realization washed over me like a cold wave. A creature, hunched and misshapen, stood before me. Its eyes were twin orbs of pure malice, glittering in the moonlight. Its skin was a patchwork of mottled colors, swaying and buzzing. Hel. I remained frozen, my mind racing. This couldn't be real. It wasn't possible. I was dreaming, having a nightmare, anything but this. But the creature advanced, slowly, deliberately. It reached out a clawed hand, pointed at me. In that instant, I knew. I knew what it wanted. What this place wanted. My sanity. My spirit. I tried to scream, but no sound came out. I couldn't move, couldn't think, could only watch in horror as the creature loomed closer and closer. And then, its hand touched my face. And all the world went white, and I was falling, falling into an abyss of endless, screaming darkness.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:16:52.014Z" 5/27/2026, 10:16:52 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
63.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count5
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"inexorably"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"suddenly"
4"inexorably"
5"completely"
6"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count4
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"foreboding"
count1
12
word"racing"
count3
13
word"predator"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count2
15
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"throb"
2"reminder"
3"pounding"
4"flickered"
5"vibrated"
6"dancing"
7"silence"
8"shattered"
9"depths"
10"sense of"
11"foreboding"
12"racing"
13"predator"
14"loomed"
15"oppressive"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in my chest"
1"a sense of foreboding"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences106
matches
0"a sense of foreboding"
1"the feeling of unease"
2"h in horror"
8.09% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1657
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount1640
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory2
Francis1
Herizon1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Francis"
places
0"London"
1"Herizon"
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"ground that seemed to echo from underfoot across the frozen grass"
1"felt like a dream; still enough sleep t"
2"as if laughing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1657
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"gone, that feeling"
1"foreboding that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean24.73
std15.37
cv0.622
sampleLengths
039
138
258
359
462
542
610
79
814
923
101
1123
1217
1377
145
1519
1660
1718
1830
1913
2021
2119
2224
2316
2417
2518
2624
2726
2819
2925
3029
3124
3222
3320
3417
3528
3637
3726
3812
3934
4012
4126
4235
4317
4420
4532
463
4726
4822
497
85.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences106
matches
0"being given"
1"are gone"
2"was gone"
3"was trapped"
4"was, was"
5"was lost"
43.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs341
matches
0"were dancing"
1"was going"
2"was being"
3"was following"
4"was never going"
5"was always going"
6"was dreaming"
7"was falling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences106
ratio0.075
matches
0"Memories flickered through my mind; at once vivid and entangled as my nightmares had become."
1"Sure, I remembered being given it; an obscure memory handed to me as a child."
2"M B;I tripped and hit the forest floor hard, kicking up dead, rotten leaves."
3"The world around me went dark. Alan. The image of Francis played in my mind. Thrown into an abyss; my heart froze.."
4"Photos. News. Headlines. The word spread as if the police had already announced the news. Then came the trembling, nausea and vomiting. The shots fired went off- the bloodshot eyes. Pictures. I had too many pictures. My smallest confidence is shattered. Pieces are gone. A rat, trapped in a cage as it ate away the center of my being. Suicidal. Anguish overpowered emotions. I rocked back and forth, crying. I kept it inside; memories buried. Bloody tears."
5"I managed to drag myself through the grove. My hands were slick with sweat and shaking uncontrollably. It felt like a dream; still enough sleep to get to tomorrow, regarding as the harder inside of another day. Slowly, the alarm set in as every little hair on my body stood. I ran back to Herizon and left the memories behind."
6"I was lost in a silent world until the drip-drip of blood stunned me. The darkness—oppressive, thick as ink—threw deceptive images my way, laughing at my ignorance."
7"The moon stared cruelly at me, as if laughing. I was cold, scared, searching for something—anything to provide me comfort from becoming completely unhinged. I was alone, the heart stone forgotten, my necklace lost. I fell to my knees, unable to conceivable of taking another step. Sobbing, praying, hoping."
94.10% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1476
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.046747967479674794
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.013550135501355014
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean15.62
std12.6
cv0.807
sampleLengths
08
17
26
31
417
513
610
715
815
913
1012
118
1210
1315
147
1515
1615
177
186
1915
202
217
2211
2315
246
2513
2614
2715
281
293
303
313
329
3314
3412
3511
361
3722
3817
3977
405
4119
4260
4318
4430
4513
4621
4719
4824
4916
59.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.44339622641509435
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners47
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then, suddenly, I heard a"
ratio0.01
60.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences98
matches
0"My breathing became labored, shuddering"
1"I shivered, zipping up my"
2"My thoughts were so dark"
3"I should've stayed in London,"
4"You're mine, Rory."
5"My throat closed as I"
6"I'm trapped in a nightmare."
7"I managed to drag myself"
8"I laid there, staring at"
9"It was long gone, that"
10"I shook my head, trying"
11"I needed to figure out"
12"I took a deep breath,"
13"I tried to push them"
14"I held my breath, listening"
15"I let out a shaky"
16"I stood up, my body"
17"I whirled around, my heart"
18"I turned back around, my"
19"I squinted, trying to make"
ratio0.398
97.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences98
matches
0"A shroud of ominous darkness"
1"Tree structures twisted in strange,"
2"Lunar light shined on the"
3"Streams of blood ran across"
4"My breathing became labored, shuddering"
5"Alarms went off in my"
6"Dozens of whispers played in"
7"The chilly wind bit down"
8"Snot ran from my nose,"
9"I shivered, zipping up my"
10"Each movement revealed my pounding"
11"Memories flickered through my mind;"
12"Evan's past shadow stretching across"
13"My thoughts were so dark"
14"Nothing but pain vibrated in"
15"The abject terror stung my"
16"I should've stayed in London,"
17"You're mine, Rory."
18"The voice called out again,"
19"M B;I tripped and hit"
ratio0.724
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"My breathing became labored, shuddering and spent as if I had sprinted here."
1"Photos. News. Headlines. The word spread as if the police had already announced the news. Then came the trembling, nausea and vomiting. The shots fired went off…"
2"I shook my head, trying to clear my thoughts. But the unease lingered, a sense of foreboding that I couldn't shake."
3"I held my breath, listening intently. But there was nothing. Just the sound of my own racing heart and the wind rustling the leaves."
4"I whirled around, my heart leaping into my throat. But there was no one there. Just the trees, swaying in the wind, and the shadows, dancing in the moonlight."
5"I turned and ran, my feet pounding against the ground. I ran and ran, my lungs burning, my legs aching. But no matter how fast I went, I could still hear it beh…"
6"I pressed myself back against a tree trunk, my body shaking uncontrollably, a prayer falling from my lips. But I knew it would make no difference."
7"I closed my eyes, bracing for the inevitable. The touch on my flesh, feeling the stench of rottenness. The screams as it screamed. Waiting, waiting."
8"The moon stared cruelly at me, as if laughing. I was cold, scared, searching for something—anything to provide me comfort from becoming completely unhinged. I w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.9976%