"Memories flickered through my mind; at once vivid and entangled as my nightmares had become."
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"Sure, I remembered being given it; an obscure memory handed to me as a child."
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"M B;I tripped and hit the forest floor hard, kicking up dead, rotten leaves."
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"The world around me went dark. Alan. The image of Francis played in my mind. Thrown into an abyss; my heart froze.."
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"Photos. News. Headlines. The word spread as if the police had already announced the news. Then came the trembling, nausea and vomiting. The shots fired went off- the bloodshot eyes. Pictures. I had too many pictures. My smallest confidence is shattered. Pieces are gone. A rat, trapped in a cage as it ate away the center of my being. Suicidal. Anguish overpowered emotions. I rocked back and forth, crying. I kept it inside; memories buried. Bloody tears."
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"I managed to drag myself through the grove. My hands were slick with sweat and shaking uncontrollably. It felt like a dream; still enough sleep to get to tomorrow, regarding as the harder inside of another day. Slowly, the alarm set in as every little hair on my body stood. I ran back to Herizon and left the memories behind."
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"I was lost in a silent world until the drip-drip of blood stunned me. The darkness—oppressive, thick as ink—threw deceptive images my way, laughing at my ignorance."
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"The moon stared cruelly at me, as if laughing. I was cold, scared, searching for something—anything to provide me comfort from becoming completely unhinged. I was alone, the heart stone forgotten, my necklace lost. I fell to my knees, unable to conceivable of taking another step. Sobbing, praying, hoping."
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"My breathing became labored, shuddering and spent as if I had sprinted here."
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"Photos. News. Headlines. The word spread as if the police had already announced the news. Then came the trembling, nausea and vomiting. The shots fired went off…"
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"I shook my head, trying to clear my thoughts. But the unease lingered, a sense of foreboding that I couldn't shake."
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"I held my breath, listening intently. But there was nothing. Just the sound of my own racing heart and the wind rustling the leaves."
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"I whirled around, my heart leaping into my throat. But there was no one there. Just the trees, swaying in the wind, and the shadows, dancing in the moonlight."
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"I turned and ran, my feet pounding against the ground. I ran and ran, my lungs burning, my legs aching. But no matter how fast I went, I could still hear it beh…"
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"I pressed myself back against a tree trunk, my body shaking uncontrollably, a prayer falling from my lips. But I knew it would make no difference."
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"I closed my eyes, bracing for the inevitable. The touch on my flesh, feeling the stench of rottenness. The screams as it screamed. Waiting, waiting."
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"The moon stared cruelly at me, as if laughing. I was cold, scared, searching for something—anything to provide me comfort from becoming completely unhinged. I w…"