| 92.86% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Pushing back [back]" | | 1 | "Lucien tossed aside [aside]" | | 2 | "Noted problem radiating temporarily [temporarily]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.107 | | effectiveRatio | 0.107 | |
| 78.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1177 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "loosely" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1177 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "wavered" | | 1 | "palpable" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "resolved" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "efficient" | | 7 | "resolve" | | 8 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 63 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 86.21% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The insulting cheerful went round and round cynosure from him, the separating themselves now remained on Aurora's shoulders. But bitterness grows opportunity. She hesitated, not th…" | | 1 | "\"I've only changed four temporary locks,\" he admitted. \"Needs situation solved within schedule.\"同年,用状态文字“:确实”字不要消去代码和不三和意思。用:“:\"" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1177 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 800 | | uniqueNames | 25 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Carter | 1 | | Enfin | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Ivan | 4 | | Pushing | 2 | | Lucien | 6 | | Grayscales | 1 | | Brenden | 1 | | Hearing | 1 | | Cannes | 1 | | Burning | 1 | | Thickness | 1 | | Ball | 1 | | Wraths | 1 | | News | 1 | | Ben | 1 | | Noted | 1 | | East | 1 | | End | 1 | | Improper | 1 | | Swift | 1 | | Rosey | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Ivan" | | 3 | "Pushing" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Burning" | | 6 | "Wraths" | | 7 | "Ben" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "East" | | 3 | "End" | | 4 | "Improper" |
| | globalScore | 0.563 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, apparently to the musty hallwa" | | 1 | "is shirt cuff, seemingly fascinated by the l" | | 2 | "Relief visibly flooded Lucien's fe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.85 | | wordCount | 1177 | | matches | | 0 | "not then approaching but wishing invisible ghost smoke collector主义 her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 33.63 | | std | 12.17 | | cv | 0.362 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.94% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "was still trying" | | 1 | "were trailing" | | 2 | "was just passing" |
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| 35.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "His smile did not reach either of his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black." | | 1 | "The home on southeast's second-floor above a curry house that's open 24 hours, depending on shoes - Ivan's shoes." | | 2 | "\"Nothing remains unpaid—\" Lucien adjusted his shirt cuff, seemingly fascinated by the limited folds \"-- except the conversation that never started before abandoning me to face the Grayscales alone. Did Brenden never tell the truth?\"\"" |
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| 83.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 754 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.05172413793103448 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027851458885941646 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.71 | | std | 11.36 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Rather, he made a slow," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, her bright blue" | | 1 | "His smile did not reach" | | 2 | "he admitted, stepping forward as" | | 3 | "he said, apparently to the" | | 4 | "She blinked towards him." | | 5 | "his description did not make" | | 6 | "His eyes trailed from hers" | | 7 | "She was still trying to" | | 8 | "he nodded toward the small" | | 9 | "Her jeans provided no protection" | | 10 | "She ran a hand through" | | 11 | "She wiggled her hands" | | 12 | "She grabbed tea blanket from" | | 13 | "He ran his hand through" |
| | ratio | 0.241 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The front door wavered under" | | 1 | "she breathed, her bright blue" | | 2 | "His smile did not reach" | | 3 | "he admitted, stepping forward as" | | 4 | "Aurora squeezed the door frame," | | 5 | "The ivory-handled cane that normally" | | 6 | "he said, apparently to the" | | 7 | "She blinked towards him." | | 8 | "his description did not make" | | 9 | "Aurora held more tightly." | | 10 | "The head of the blade" | | 11 | "Ivan drew no blood." | | 12 | "His eyes trailed from hers" | | 13 | "Aurora uncrossed her fingers from" | | 14 | "She was still trying to" | | 15 | "he nodded toward the small" | | 16 | "Aurora closed her door." | | 17 | "The home on southeast's second-floor" | | 18 | "Her jeans provided no protection" | | 19 | "The welcoming sigh rattled in" |
| | ratio | 0.707 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The home on southeast's second-floor above a curry house that's open 24 hours, depending on shoes - Ivan's shoes." |
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| 87.96% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora squeezed, her knuckles whitening" | | 1 | "she echoed, voice dropping after crinkle in space made her his equals" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "she mentioned (mention)" | | 3 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "he admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |