Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF01J5BV6QYGX4RC4VEAX6

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The front door wavered under the fist's fourth knock. Three deadbolts giggled in protest as the intruder refused to yield. Pushing aside Ptolemy the tabby, Aurora Carter peered through the security hole. Must be Enfin. Who else summoned coffee at half past three in the morning? When she threw open the door, a wall of tailored charcoal suit hit her. "Lucien," she breathed, her bright blue eyes widening against the darkness of the hallway. "The hell are you wearing?" His smile did not reach either of his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black. "A ridiculous amount of quality wool," he admitted, stepping forward as if invited. "Though I believe your concern is misplaced. My attire is impeccable as always." "Misplaced?" Aurora squeezed the door frame, her knuckles whitening. "You're not bleeding, dead, or about to serve me with legal papers. The question didn't need answering, Lucien. It was an observation. A slightly scandalized one." The ivory-handled cane that normally hung loosely at his side now gripped with palpable tension. "Dark, cold, under a thin blanket of stars," he said, apparently to the musty hallway carpet. "March in London, to be specific." She blinked towards him. "What?" "Even empty air requires occasion." "Occasionally?" his description did not make him more comforting. Aurora held more tightly. "You've always been more for our air. Why now? 3 a.m.? Pleasant observation of your air?" The head of the blade extended from his cane's hollow center with a soft metallic shush. Ivan drew no blood. Rather, he made a slow, precise circle in the air. "Other tasks now complete." His eyes trailed from hers to the deadlocks. "Focus needed four separate bolts before answering me." "Bad habits." Aurora uncrossed her fingers from the frame, stepping aside. "From ex-boyfriend, not you." She was still trying to be pleasant, when language is the sharpest blade in the house. "I accounted for that," he nodded toward the small but perceptible dent in the third deadlock. "For future reference." Aurora closed her door. From the flat on Brick Lane. The home on southeast's second-floor above a curry house that's open 24 hours, depending on shoes - Ivan's shoes. Her jeans provided no protection from those eyes. The welcoming sigh rattled in Aurora's throat. She ran a hand through her straight, shoulder-length black hair. "Stress," she began, "it's not like this before three individual locks. Kefir for your coffee?" "Typical Russian cafe, bourgeois customs," Pushing back his blond hair as he passed through her flat towards the apartment's centre. "Yet, we remember my preference for it all those years back." Aurora bit her lip, turning away from his gaze when the longer sentence hit. "ETA six weeks," she mentioned, "but effectively eight. Approaches midnight July first anniversary would technically..." "Widowed was already ending our relationship," Ivan said, in a casual enough tone, but the words grew unnecessary inside the small flat. Some of the history agreed with them now. "Afterballs last summer before the commune. Lost message on situation resolved. Finding you not much changed." A swear word shushed through her teeth like she accidentally cursed a nun. Or a ghost. "You blocked me!" "No response was hardly a block." Lucien stopped beside her narrow kitchen table, the goldenHandle cane drawing circles in empty space. "Three unlocked brands index finished crashing. Colossal error. Consolidation was necessary." The word consolidation made her tense like a coiled spring. "So you're Consolidating? Is Britain suddenly surrounded by immobile barricades?" She wiggled her hands. "Consolidate away all my resources and matches then Kiss me." For a heartbeat, he studied her with unnerving intensity, the amber and black eyes performing some kind of alchemy. "I kissed you once last night," he admitted, "several times during our wine appointment in barracks location. Exchanging relationship upon relationship please return to what previous once grew unrequested." "Don't mistake the time." Aurora took a step closer, her scar on her wrist catching the light. "The billing for our drinks previously reckoned paid." "Nothing remains unpaid—" Lucien adjusted his shirt cuff, seemingly fascinated by the limited folds "-- except the conversation that never started before abandoning me to face the Grayscales alone. Did Brenden never tell the truth?"" Hearing him useing her father's first name caused Aurora to tense all over again. "My father and I don't exactly exchange holiday cards." "The Urbacenscales action," Ivan shifted, hurried toward me when young Aurora crisps during manipulation, before leaving for Cannes international film fest before Burning thing."" They had separate living arrangements." Lucien ran a hand along the bladed weapon Thickness. "A mistake. Wasted relationship." Aurora straightened, suddenly her five-foot-six frame seemed occupying whole space in the flat. "Hindsight's always twenty-twenty, isn't it? Obviously, crafting underworld settling bushfire efficient. But stop conveniently half*mummery* his voice scratchy. "You left first with mere texts canceling." "The Grayscales pressured unexpected—" Lucien tossed aside the wooden blade-hiding cane and gave her full attention, his plaza shoulder and tie following where eyes were trailing heavenly blues. "Comparison life with filament humans contains limitations. Ball of Wraths shadowing. Finding fairness mistimed our agreed urgent afterlife principles." But "Balls of Wrath" was no afterlife. The little awareness areas once separated had grown smaller and waning recently. Aurora's face drifted from his now... "About the basics." She grabbed tea blanket from sofa, avoiding the hidden witchcraft awareness unfamiliar yesterday. "Here's my honesty of true hour. News announcement final. My move." "Yes." He ran his hand through slicked-back hair, features relaxing into something resembling a smile. "My sincere apologies if interference unwanted during your conversion." He was just passing through, prepared to smug deep bowl of Ben cheap. "Project requirements barely fitting incense essential powers. Noted problem radiating temporarily resolve presently." The insulting cheerful went round and round cynosure from him, the separating themselves now remained on Aurora's shoulders. But bitterness grows opportunity. She hesitated, not then approaching but wishing invisible ghost smoke collector主义 her. The balance had barely tipped lately... "Updates," Lucien murmured as she watched narrow path for end negative affections now stirred forth creature indifferent. Light dust danced within washing dusk-shaped evening light upon East End faded building. "Sometimes fragile outcomes involving nothing. Improper relationships solve themselves minimally. Recent?” Aurora froze. Her personal truth-self now started going steadily back and forth uneeven between flipping and exhaustanding. But third bolt remained stubbornly widening inaccurate, extra sixth becoming thirty-five. time. Words weren't enough on Brick Lane, ball holding witness the dust still shifting. The history in her narrow head dozed off hours ago. "Recent?" she echoed, voice dropping after crinkle in space made her his equals. "Let's say the smoke alarm hasn't gone off yet." She stepped finally nearer, closer to unacceptable bespelling her unwillingly. "Ry checking in?" Relief visibly flooded Lucien's features like water burst from dams after surprisingly Swift tornadic winds transformed abrupt east. Because lovely them, personified couples stored looked. Perfection finally got surrounding Rosey silver lining. Aurora just caught the golden tip of his eyelashes as he looked away shy again. "I've only changed four temporary locks," he admitted. "Needs situation solved within schedule."同年,用状态文字“:确实”字不要消去代码和不三和意思。用:“:"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Pushing back [back]"
1"Lucien tossed aside [aside]"
2"Noted problem radiating temporarily [temporarily]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.107
78.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"loosely"
2"tightly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1177
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"wavered"
count1
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"resolved"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"wavered"
1"palpable"
2"tension"
3"comforting"
4"resolved"
5"intensity"
6"efficient"
7"resolve"
8"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
86.21% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences2
adjustedGibberishSentences2
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0.025
matches
0"The insulting cheerful went round and round cynosure from him, the separating themselves now remained on Aurora's shoulders. But bitterness grows opportunity. She hesitated, not th…"
1"\"I've only changed four temporary locks,\" he admitted. \"Needs situation solved within schedule.\"同年,用状态文字“:确实”字不要消去代码和不三和意思。用:“:\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1177
ratio0.001
matches
0"mummery"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount800
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Aurora15
Carter1
Enfin1
Brick2
Lane2
Ivan4
Pushing2
Lucien6
Grayscales1
Brenden1
Hearing1
Cannes1
Burning1
Thickness1
Ball1
Wraths1
News1
Ben1
Noted1
East1
End1
Improper1
Swift1
Rosey1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Ivan"
3"Pushing"
4"Lucien"
5"Burning"
6"Wraths"
7"Ben"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"End"
4"Improper"
globalScore0.563
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"he said, apparently to the musty hallwa"
1"is shirt cuff, seemingly fascinated by the l"
2"Relief visibly flooded Lucien's fe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.85
wordCount1177
matches
0"not then approaching but wishing invisible ghost smoke collector主义 her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
60.52% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean33.63
std12.17
cv0.362
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239
335
437
55
65
729
850
931
1019
1137
1232
1331
1429
1546
1619
1732
1834
1948
2025
2135
2223
2342
2438
2547
2625
2727
2850
2940
3041
3128
3259
3347
3413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
52.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was still trying"
1"were trailing"
2"was just passing"
35.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences80
ratio0.038
matches
0"His smile did not reach either of his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black."
1"The home on southeast's second-floor above a curry house that's open 24 hours, depending on shoes - Ivan's shoes."
2"\"Nothing remains unpaid—\" Lucien adjusted his shirt cuff, seemingly fascinated by the limited folds \"-- except the conversation that never started before abandoning me to face the Grayscales alone. Did Brenden never tell the truth?\"\""
83.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount754
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.05172413793103448
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.027851458885941646
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean14.71
std11.36
cv0.772
sampleLengths
09
111
212
33
411
514
614
75
813
913
1013
119
1226
1315
1416
156
164
171
185
199
204
2116
2216
234
2410
2512
268
2711
2820
2916
303
314
326
3319
348
357
3610
3715
3820
3911
4014
4115
4222
438
4416
4513
463
473
4821
4911
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners56
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Rather, he made a slow,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences58
matches
0"she breathed, her bright blue"
1"His smile did not reach"
2"he admitted, stepping forward as"
3"he said, apparently to the"
4"She blinked towards him."
5"his description did not make"
6"His eyes trailed from hers"
7"She was still trying to"
8"he nodded toward the small"
9"Her jeans provided no protection"
10"She ran a hand through"
11"She wiggled her hands"
12"She grabbed tea blanket from"
13"He ran his hand through"
ratio0.241
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences58
matches
0"The front door wavered under"
1"she breathed, her bright blue"
2"His smile did not reach"
3"he admitted, stepping forward as"
4"Aurora squeezed the door frame,"
5"The ivory-handled cane that normally"
6"he said, apparently to the"
7"She blinked towards him."
8"his description did not make"
9"Aurora held more tightly."
10"The head of the blade"
11"Ivan drew no blood."
12"His eyes trailed from hers"
13"Aurora uncrossed her fingers from"
14"She was still trying to"
15"he nodded toward the small"
16"Aurora closed her door."
17"The home on southeast's second-floor"
18"Her jeans provided no protection"
19"The welcoming sigh rattled in"
ratio0.707
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The home on southeast's second-floor above a curry house that's open 24 hours, depending on shoes - Ivan's shoes."
87.96% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora squeezed, her knuckles whitening"
1"she echoed, voice dropping after crinkle in space made her his equals"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she mentioned (mention)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
5"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.25
79.2885%