Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF06C0MB92J4JPXW3S4DVC

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31.5s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain pounded on the pavement, cold and merciless, soaking through to Harlow's skin in seconds. She didn't slow her pace, pumping her legs harder to close the distance. There, a flash of dark hair ahead as Tomás dove around a corner and vanished from view. Harlow cursed under her breath, adrenaline pumping. She burst onto the next street just as Tomás skidded to a halt. They'd reached a dead end, a crumbling brick wall with its climax rising from the attackers, a chain-link fence torn in places, but still an obstacle. Tomás's eyes darted left and right, looking for an escape. Harlow closed in, perspiring, weapon drawn. "Don't move," she called over the pounding rain. Tomás held up his hands, backing away. His gaze suddenly widened and he plunged into the shadows of an alley. Harlow cursed and followed, looking up to catch a flash of fear crossing his face. She stumbled and fell to the ground, fast as she could. Her head cracked against the pavement and a searing pain shot through her skull. She reached up and felt warm blood oozing from a gash on her forehead. Blearily, she looked around. The alley yawned before her, dark and dank. Tomàs was gone, vanished into the night. Harlow tried to stand, but the world spun dizzyingly. Taking deep breaths to steady herself, she fumbled for her maps of torch in her coat. Suddenly, a hand clamped over her mouth. She smelled alcohol, unmarrried chocolate, stale cigarette smoke. "This way," a deep voice growled in her ear. Before she could protest, she was dragged into the dark. Tomás raced through the winding tunnels, breath rasping in his throat, the sound of Detective Quinn's pounding footsteps right behind him. He knew these passageways like the back of his hand - he'd seen it all. The Veil Market. The glowing green sign of The Raven's Nest flashed above him, a beacon in the darkness. Tomás skidded to a halt and pounded on the crooked wooden door. "How do you know The Raven knows?" Silas' barman called gruffly, peering through the small window beside the door. "Harlow Quinn," Tomás panted, stumbling back. "She's coming. You know she's been digging." The barman cursed and unlatched the door, dragging Tomás inside. "You've brought them down on us now, you fool!" he spat. Tomás ignored the man, bracing himself against the bar as he struggled to catch his breath. The Raven's Nest was deserted at this late hour, save for a few scruffy characters huddled in dark corners, of drinking and playing cards. "Out the back," Silas, a burly man with a scarred eye commanded, nodding his head towards a hidden door half-hidden behind a bookshelf. Tomás stumbled down the stairs, his hand gripping the banister for support, his leg aching from the long chase. The narrow corridor ended at a low, rounded archway. Warm air and the buzz of conversation washed over him as he stepped into the Veil Market. The cavernous space was lit by flickering lanterns, casting dancing shadows across the packed dirt floor. Merkat stalls lined the walls, displaying all manner of strange and wonderful goods. "Ouch!" Tomás yowled as someone's elbow connected with his ribs. He spun around to see a red-skinned imp glaring at him. "Watch it, meatbag," the creature snarled, flashing razor-sharp teeth. Tomás pressed on, ducking and weaving through the throng of creatures on all sides - fantastical beings who would have once stayed, rattled his stomach. A familiar voice caught his ear and Tomás paused in his tracks. He spun around, his heart pounding. Detective Quinn stood a few feet away, waterlogging off her trench coat, her brown eyes alert, taking in the scene around her with keen interest. "What the hell is this place?" She wondered aloud. "I need your help," Tomás blurted out. The words were out before he could stop them. He'd never wanted to see this, watch her take in the sight, but here they were. "But why?" Quinn stared at him without flinching. "I'm a cop, for God's sake... You'd think I'd know if the brother fantastic was right under my nose for so long. Yet here you are, right in front of me, asking for my help." Quinn narrowed her gaze on Tomás. "And who put you up to this, hm? Who are you working for?" Tomás shook his head. "No one. It's me. I need your help to stop a killer, Detective. A killer of coppers. Your coppers. And I need to get out of here." Quinn's eyes widened. She glanced around the market, as if expecting a threat to jump out at any moment. "This is above my pay grade, Herrera. This is deep magic..." Tomás grabbed her arm, pulling her close. He could feel the warmth of her breath on his face as he spoke. "Please, Detective. It's a cop killer. You can't just walk away from this, harm. It's me." Quinn recoiled as if stung, twisting her arm from Tomás's grip. She took a step back, her hand moving to her hip where she normally kept her gun. But in this strange, lawless place, she was unarmed. Vulnerable. "You have some nerve, Tomás. Crashing into this den, dragging me into your crazy after life, asking me to help. And for what? To save your own skin?" Tomás hung his head, the weight of his shame settling over him like a heavy cloak. "That's just it, Detective. I'm not asking for me. I'm asking for Carrie. For Morris. For the brotherhood. How would you have dealt with it if you had known?" Quinn reeled back, her brow furrowed. "Is that why you really brought me here? Because you think there's something supernatural woven in this?" "What if it is?" Tomás retorted. "What if I told you that what happened to Morris, to Carrie, to all of them ... it wasn't random. It wasn't human. It was a sacrifice. A murderous mass murderer, and holy vapors." The air hung heavy with unsaid truths. Detective Quinn's eyes shrewdly studied Tomás's face, searching for any sign of deception. After a long moment, she gave a clipped nod. "Alright, Tomás. You have my attention.... Tomás steeled himself, knowing that what he was about to reveal would shatter the very foundations of her world. He took a deep breath and plunged ahead. "It's Theondon, Detective. There's something evil in this world and it's a snake at the very heart of the brotherhood, a very evil, worshipping god in Theondon. We've got to shut it down, you and I." Quinn's jaw tightened, a ghost of her late husband's pain flickering across her face. "That's base. It's bullshit." "I'm not lying!" Tomás protested. "I know because she told me. Carrie did when she came to me for help. It's all tied up with some kind of demon cult. But if you don't believe me, I get it. I was thinking the same thing until..." "Until what?" "Until the dead started talking. I'm talking about tongues turning into big boys with coiling eyelids. Ghosts appearances with voices rattling. Nothing you put in a report, never explained it, just don't. What would you have done next, Detective, to understand what's haunting you?"
created_at"2026-05-27T10:17:06.188Z" 5/27/2026, 10:17:06 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She wondered aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.938
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.063
75.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pumping"
count2
1
word"pounding"
count3
2
word"searing"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"steeled"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"pounding"
2"searing"
3"raced"
4"footsteps"
5"beacon"
6"dancing"
7"stomach"
8"familiar"
9"could feel"
10"warmth"
11"weight"
12"furrowed"
13"steeled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a flash of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount901
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.55
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Harlow5
Tomás23
Detective4
Quinn9
Veil2
Market2
Raven2
Nest2
Theondon1
Carrie1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Tomás"
2"Detective"
3"Quinn"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Carrie"
places
0"Veil"
1"Theondon"
globalScore0.224
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if expecting a threat to jump out at any moment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
92.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.05
std13.25
cv0.473
sampleLengths
029
137
226
316
48
535
639
719
825
915
1019
1139
1228
1319
1413
1521
1640
1723
1828
1946
2021
219
2225
2318
2425
259
2632
2762
2861
2937
3038
3128
3245
3323
3440
3520
3615
3727
3836
3918
4046
412
4244
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"was gone"
1"was dragged"
2"was deserted"
3"was lit"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was thinking"
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"He knew these passageways like the back of his hand - he'd seen it all."
1"Tomás pressed on, ducking and weaving through the throng of creatures on all sides - fantastical beings who would have once stayed, rattled his stomach."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount592
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02533783783783784
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010135135135135136
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.43
std7.08
cv0.57
sampleLengths
016
113
217
37
413
526
610
76
88
97
1013
1115
1211
1314
1414
154
168
177
189
1916
207
218
229
2310
2421
2515
263
2716
2812
2919
306
317
3210
3311
3416
3524
3623
3719
389
3917
4016
4113
4210
4311
449
4525
4612
476
4825
499
69.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4329896907216495
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners42
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Blearily, she looked around."
1"Suddenly, a hand clamped over"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences77
matches
0"She didn't slow her pace,"
1"She burst onto the next"
2"They'd reached a dead end,"
3"she called over the pounding"
4"His gaze suddenly widened and"
5"She stumbled and fell to"
6"Her head cracked against the"
7"She reached up and felt"
8"She smelled alcohol, unmarrried chocolate,"
9"He knew these passageways like"
10"He spun around to see"
11"He spun around, his heart"
12"She wondered aloud"
13"He'd never wanted to see"
14"She glanced around the market,"
15"He could feel the warmth"
16"She took a step back,"
17"We've got to shut it"
18"It's all tied up with"
19"I was thinking the same"
ratio0.273
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences77
matches
0"The rain pounded on the"
1"She didn't slow her pace,"
2"There, a flash of dark"
3"Harlow cursed under her breath,"
4"She burst onto the next"
5"They'd reached a dead end,"
6"Tomás's eyes darted left and"
7"Harlow closed in, perspiring, weapon"
8"she called over the pounding"
9"Tomás held up his hands,"
10"His gaze suddenly widened and"
11"Harlow cursed and followed, looking"
12"She stumbled and fell to"
13"Her head cracked against the"
14"She reached up and felt"
15"The alley yawned before her,"
16"Tomàs was gone, vanished into"
17"Harlow tried to stand, but"
18"She smelled alcohol, unmarrried chocolate,"
19"a deep voice growled in"
ratio0.87
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Before she could protest, she"
ratio0.013
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Tomás stumbled down the stairs, his hand gripping the banister for support, his leg aching from the long chase."
1"Tomás pressed on, ducking and weaving through the throng of creatures on all sides - fantastical beings who would have once stayed, rattled his stomach."
2"Quinn recoiled as if stung, twisting her arm from Tomás's grip."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"a deep voice growled (growl)"
1"Tomás panted (pant)"
2"he spat (spit)"
3"the creature snarled (snarl)"
4"Tomás retorted (retort)"
5"Tomás protested (protest)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.375
82.8929%