Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF1JD2SNN26KCXYMG7ZS84

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Duration:
17.7s
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$0.001164
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora paused mid-step, her grip tightening on the handle of her delivery satchel as she stared through the dimly lit bar. The Raven's Nest was a familiar haven, a Canadian breakfast skyline lit up the black-and-white photos and faded maps that covered the space's brick walls— but those walls felt different now, much like the man at the end of the bar. Sitting hunched over his glass, his eyes downcast and reeling, was the man she had known for over a decade, a mentor and carefree force in her life— Silas. The weight of years had been etched in the furrows of his face and the spindly grey threads in his beard, but more than that, the way he slumped told her he was tired, exhausted from his life. "Another," Silas murmured. A barmaid slid an amber drink and a vague smile his way. Silas nodded in return, taking a sip. He didn't look up, not when she pushed through the door, or when footsteps crossed the room behind him, a new presence amidst the quiet murmurs of the other patrons. Walking to the end of the bar, she slid onto the seat next to Silas, the leather creaking underneath her. Silas blinked, his eyes focusing on the red-headed bartender before drifting lazily to the side and down to the stranger next to him as if studying an insect— something unintriguing, mundane, and fleeting. Finally, his eyes found her face, but his gaze was blank, recognizing but unseeing. "Spying on me are we,encrypt?" He said, not nearly as heartfelt as she might have expected. "How's life treating you these days?" She swallowed back any immediate impulse to/httpwww.shove him for calling her, his old nickname for her, her skilled ability to stay up above public eyes while delivering information. It had been her name, the one she had lived in for so long, deliverance from eyes... but now, it felt like a knife, an accusation. "Aurora." Something eased off him, it wasn't quite a leave, but he breathed a little easier. "Let's keep it that way." Aurora put one hand on his arm, her other holding a press change. "Like everyone in this world, and they still aren't leaving it." She looked at her watch, three-thirty in the afternoon, likely nearly empty come closing time like most of in this world, tellingly absent come closing were she and Silas. And the other patrons. "You ever think of just writing a novel, Si? Throw all the letters together, express yourself." She muttered, glancing at the bartender who was still looking between the two. A subtle head tilt acknowledging an unspoken understanding. "Artistic." Silas slurred into his glass, the glass empty save a few remaining fumes. The bartender inclined his head and Silas sighed, before returning back to silence with the next one. Drinking with deliberate intent, staring into nothing. Of course anyone who passed Natalia's way—she searched his face, Shaker. He had been called that so long, she sometimes wondered if even he remembered his shakenage or past anymore. Silas shook his head. Not looking at her. "No," he said finally, softly, "I don't." Suddenly a soft laugh from the bar-'s direction spoke unexpectedly. "Raven's." She said, voice sober and clear, "I don't know why you're here-" "You know what I am," Silas said, the words directed at the place above her head, not really focused on her, "I know what you're here for, and it ain't because you care." "And if it were?" It sounded too much like a challenge, though she tried her best to sound even and kept her tone neutral, trying to keep this whole situation simple and easy. He sloshed his drink down in one big gulp, slamming the glass down. Sliding off his stool, he stood, a bit wobbly. Looking at Natalia down, she hated the loss in his eyes, something she felt sure she had seen way too often around her own flat. "Play your game with me all you want, kid. Just know, I never want to play." He slumped off in the direction of the door, leaving Natalia with a s-shaped hold on her heart, wondering if she would see him again, if anyone would- She watched as he went, realizing she had been so stupid, so foolish, thinking she could just pick up the threads of her old life
created_at"2026-05-27T10:17:51.279Z" 5/27/2026, 10:17:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"It sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.692
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
72.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount728
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount728
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"amidst"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"etched"
3"footsteps"
4"amidst"
5"fleeting"
6"unspoken"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences38
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords727
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount634
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Canadian1
Silas10
Aurora2
Natalia3
Shaker1
Suddenly1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Aurora"
3"Natalia"
places(empty)
globalScore0.711
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if studying an insect— something unintriguing, mundane, and fleeting"
1"felt like a knife, an accusation"
2"quite a leave, but he breathed a little easier"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount727
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean27.96
std15.07
cv0.539
sampleLengths
062
167
23
319
430
520
647
722
854
921
1024
1133
1237
1314
1424
1530
1615
1723
1833
1933
2013
219
2225
2316
2428
2525
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences38
matches
0"been etched"
1"been called"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs106
matches
0"was still looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences42
ratio0.095
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was a familiar haven, a Canadian breakfast skyline lit up the black-and-white photos and faded maps that covered the space's brick walls— but those walls felt different now, much like the man at the end of the bar."
1"Sitting hunched over his glass, his eyes downcast and reeling, was the man she had known for over a decade, a mentor and carefree force in her life— Silas."
2"Silas blinked, his eyes focusing on the red-headed bartender before drifting lazily to the side and down to the stranger next to him as if studying an insect— something unintriguing, mundane, and fleeting."
3"Of course anyone who passed Natalia's way—she searched his face, Shaker."
89.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount640
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.05
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.021875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean17.31
std10.32
cv0.596
sampleLengths
021
141
229
338
43
512
67
730
820
933
1014
1116
126
1328
1417
159
1616
175
1813
1911
2029
214
2229
238
2414
2517
267
2711
2819
294
304
317
3210
3313
3433
3533
3613
379
3825
3916
4028
4125
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6666666666666666
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences37
matches
0"Finally, his eyes found her"
1"Of course anyone who passed"
2"Suddenly a soft laugh from"
ratio0.081
79.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences37
matches
0"He didn't look up, not"
1"He said, not nearly as"
2"She swallowed back any immediate"
3"It had been her name,"
4"She looked at her watch,"
5"She muttered, glancing at the"
6"He had been called that"
7"he said finally, softly"
8"She said, voice sober and"
9"It sounded too much like"
10"He sloshed his drink down"
11"He slumped off in the"
12"She watched as he went,"
ratio0.351
95.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences37
matches
0"Aurora paused mid-step, her grip"
1"The Raven's Nest was a"
2"Sitting hunched over his glass,"
3"The weight of years had"
4"A barmaid slid an amber"
5"Silas nodded in return, taking"
6"He didn't look up, not"
7"Silas blinked, his eyes focusing"
8"He said, not nearly as"
9"She swallowed back any immediate"
10"It had been her name,"
11"Something eased off him, it"
12"Aurora put one hand on"
13"She looked at her watch,"
14"She muttered, glancing at the"
15"A subtle head tilt acknowledging"
16"Silas slurred into his glass,"
17"The bartender inclined his head"
18"He had been called that"
19"Silas shook his head."
ratio0.73
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was a familiar haven, a Canadian breakfast skyline lit up the black-and-white photos and faded maps that covered the space's brick walls— but t…"
1"Silas blinked, his eyes focusing on the red-headed bartender before drifting lazily to the side and down to the stranger next to him as if studying an insect— s…"
2"Of course anyone who passed Natalia's way—she searched his face, Shaker."
3"He slumped off in the direction of the door, leaving Natalia with a s-shaped hold on her heart, wondering if she would see him again, if anyone would-"
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He said, not nearly as heartfelt as she might have expected"
1"he said finally, softly,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"She muttered (mutter)"
2"Silas slurred (slur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.429
72.0163%