| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "she said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 65.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1153 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1153 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "sanctuary" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1149 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.1 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Silas | 15 | | Scotch | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Alfred | 1 | | Edgar | 1 | | Glenside | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Alfred" | | 6 | "Edgar" | | 7 | "Glenside" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.45 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "rumble that seemed to resonate through the space between them" | | 1 | "looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes" | | 2 | "seemed changed subtly altered by the years and evictions from Cardiff" | | 3 | "seemed charged with something unspoken" | | 4 | "quite reach her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 28.73 | | std | 19.44 | | cv | 0.677 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 90 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd moved into the flat above just three months ago, and already the bar had become her sanctuary—a place of familiar anonymity where no one asked questions and silence wasn't awkward." | | 1 | "As he set a 25th anniversary of Scotch whiskey before her—her regular—Rory noted the silver signet ring on his right hand gleaming under the dim lighting." | | 2 | "She still looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes that held their usual intelligent sharpness." |
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| 97.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 721 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.04160887656033287 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020804438280166437 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.01 | | std | 10.02 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 80.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Then his usual composure returned." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 67.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd moved into the flat" | | 1 | "His hazel eyes glanced up" | | 2 | "He was older now, still" | | 3 | "She'd always wondered about that" | | 4 | "She rarely thought about it" | | 5 | "she replied with a slight" | | 6 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 7 | "she said finally" | | 8 | "It had been three years" | | 9 | "They'd exchanged emails, the occasional" | | 10 | "she said, the words leaving" | | 11 | "His eyes widened slightly behind" | | 12 | "She gave a humourless laugh" | | 13 | "She still looked like herself—black" | | 14 | "she said suddenly" | | 15 | "His left leg twitched slightly," | | 16 | "She drained her glass, holding" | | 17 | "He froze, his signet ring" | | 18 | "he replied, his voice carefully" | | 19 | "she replied, throwing him a" |
| | ratio | 0.382 | |
| 32.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "She'd moved into the flat" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 4 | "His hazel eyes glanced up" | | 5 | "A faint smile touched his" | | 6 | "Silas said, not unkindly" | | 7 | "Rory replied, sliding onto a" | | 8 | "Silas chuckled, a low rumble" | | 9 | "He was older now, still" | | 10 | "She'd always wondered about that" | | 11 | "Silas commented, nodding toward her" | | 12 | "Rory glanced at the crescent-shaped" | | 13 | "She rarely thought about it" | | 14 | "she replied with a slight" | | 15 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 16 | "Rory followed his gaze, tilting" | | 17 | "she said finally" | | 18 | "Silas nodded thoughtfully, knowing better" | | 19 | "Rory raised an eyebrow." |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He was older now, still carrying himself with that same quiet authority that had amazed Rory when she'd first met him, but the lines around his eyes had deepene…" | | 1 | "She rarely thought about it anymore, the childhood accident that had left her with a permanent reminder of a moment's carelessness." | | 2 | "She still looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes that held their usual intelligent sharpness." | | 3 | "He touched his knee and wondered about his country, brought into a new dimension by a transitional device that wasn't Alfred Edgar Glenside's, about the woman w…" |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas said, not unkindly" | | 1 | "she said, the words leaving her mouth before she could stop them" | | 2 | "he replied, his voice carefully even" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas commented (comment)" | | 1 | "she conceded (concede)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |