Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF1RGGXW43VPZC37CFEJTJ

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34.2s
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest pulsed softly against the Soho night. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed through the heavy door, the scent of polished wood and aged whiskey washing over her. She'd moved into the flat above just three months ago, and already the bar had become her sanctuary—a place of familiar anonymity where no one asked questions and silence wasn't awkward. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with deliberate precision. His hazel eyes glanced up as the bell above the door announced her arrival. A faint smile touched his lips. "You're late," Silas said, not unkindly. "Traffic was hell," Rory replied, sliding onto a stool and running her fingers along the worn countertop. "Late delivery to the other side of the city. Sometimes I think Yu-Fei times these deliveries on purpose just to make me suffer." Silas chuckled, a low rumble that seemed to resonate through the space between them. He was older now, still carrying himself with that same quiet authority that had amazed Rory when she'd first met him, but the lines around his eyes had deepened, and there was a slight hitch in his step as he moved around the bar. "She probably does. Keeps the delivery people honest." As he set a 25th anniversary of Scotch whiskey before her—her regular—Rory noted the silver signet ring on his right hand gleaming under the dim lighting. She'd always wondered about that ring, what it represented, but had never asked. "Something different today," Silas commented, nodding toward her wrist. Rory glanced at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She rarely thought about it anymore, the childhood accident that had left her with a permanent reminder of a moment's carelessness. But lately, she'd found herself touching it more often, a nervous tic when her mind wandered to troublesome thoughts. "It's always been there, Si," she replied with a slight smile. "No, I mean... something's different about it." He leaned against the bar, his gaze fixed on her wrist. "It used to be more... shiny. Like scarring tends to be when you're younger." Rory followed his gaze, tilting her wrist to catch the light. "I had it looked at," she said finally. "Last week. The dermatologist said something about keloids not being as prominent with age. Or maybe it's just the London weather. Doesn't matter. It's just a scar." Silas nodded thoughtfully, knowing better than to press the point. "How have you been settling in?" "Pretty well, actually.Yu-Fei's not a bad boss. Pays on time. And the flat's not bad for what I'm paying." "But something's bothering you." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Always the perceptive one, aren't you?" "We've known each other long enough, haven't we?" A familiar warmth spread through her at his words. It had been three years since she'd seen Silas in person. They'd exchanged emails, the occasional video call, but never more than surface-level updates. Not since she'd left Cardiff abruptly. "I ran into Evan yesterday," she said, the words leaving her mouth before she could stop them. The glass in Silas's hand paused mid-motion. His eyes widened slightly behind their spectacles. "At the coffee shop?" "At the canal. He was walking his dog. Just happened to be there reading a book on quantum physics when I was jogging." She gave a humourless laugh. "Funny how that works." Silas placed the glass carefully on the bar. "That must have been... unexpected." "Understatement of the year." Rory lifted the whiskey, swirling it before taking a sip. "He looked good. He'd cut his hair. Dressed sharply. Not at all like the... well, the way he was when we were together." "He's done all right for himself," Silas said, picking up another glass to polish. "Heard through the grapevine he got that promotion at his firm. Something about corporate law now." Rory nodded, staring at her reflection in the mirrored wall behind the bar. She still looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes that held their usual intelligent sharpness. But something in her reflection seemed changed, subtly altered by the years and evictions from Cardiff. "I never told you why I left him," she said suddenly. Silas set down the glass, his attention completely on her now. "You didn't have to, Rory. Some things don't bear repeating." "Maybe," she conceded. "But it's not just that. It's... everything that came after. I left Cardiff without so much as a forwarding address. Cut ties with everyone. Even you for a while, didn't I?" "Temporarily." "I never told you I got a job here at the restaurant before I even found the flat. Or that I crashed on Eva's sofa for a month while I looked for a place. Or that I couldn't sleep for the first year after I moved, waking up at 3 a.m. every night, thinking I heard him coming up the stairs." A shadow crossed Silas's face. His left leg twitched slightly, a muscle spasm from his old injury. "You never struck me as the type to run" "I do, actually. It's one of my better qualities." She drained her glass, holding it out for another. "What about you? Always the quiet veteran, always watching behind the curtain. Still catching bad guys from your soapbox?" Silas's lips quirked into a small smile. "Some things never change. Though lately I've been spending more time on historical research than... fieldwork." "Prague again?" He froze, his signet ring catching the light as he set down the freshly poured whiskey. For a moment, the air seemed charged with something unspoken. Then his usual composure returned. "Among other things," he replied, his voice carefully even. "Always keeping abreast of history." Rory shrugged, deciding not to press. Some questions weren't meant to be answered. "I should get going. Early delivery tomorrow, apparently right before rush hour. Yu-Fei's idea of a joke." Silas nodded, watching as she slid off the stool and grabbed her jacket from the hook by the door. "You be careful out there, Rory." "Always," she replied, throwing him a smirk that didn't quite reach her eyes. "See you tomorrow?" "Count on it," Silas said, already picking up another glass to polish as the bell above the door chimed her departure. The green neon sign fell back into a steady pulse, casting elongated shadows across the old maps on the walls. Alone at the bar, Silas stared at the spot where Rory had been sitting. He touched his knee and wondered about his country, brought into a new dimension by a transitional device that wasn't Alfred Edgar Glenside's, about the woman who carried such a weight of past, and about the crossed wires of their fates. Outside, the Soho night swallowed Rory Carter whole as she disappeared into the bustling London streets, two friends sharing a room between their hearts, forever suspended in a conversation both were too afraid to finish.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.095
65.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"sharply"
4"suddenly"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1153
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"sanctuary"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"gleaming"
5"reminder"
6"eyebrow"
7"warmth"
8"charged"
9"unspoken"
10"pulse"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount714
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Carter2
Rory12
Blackwood1
Silas15
Scotch1
Cardiff2
Alfred1
Edgar1
Glenside1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Alfred"
6"Edgar"
7"Glenside"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.45
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"rumble that seemed to resonate through the space between them"
1"looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes"
2"seemed changed subtly altered by the years and evictions from Cardiff"
3"seemed charged with something unspoken"
4"quite reach her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1149
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.73
std19.44
cv0.677
sampleLengths
069
132
26
340
466
539
69
750
811
932
1046
1116
1219
134
1410
158
1639
1717
1818
1932
2013
2137
2230
2343
2411
2521
2634
271
2861
2926
3037
3123
322
3331
3414
3530
3625
3716
3841
3990
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
38.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences82
ratio0.037
matches
0"She'd moved into the flat above just three months ago, and already the bar had become her sanctuary—a place of familiar anonymity where no one asked questions and silence wasn't awkward."
1"As he set a 25th anniversary of Scotch whiskey before her—her regular—Rory noted the silver signet ring on his right hand gleaming under the dim lighting."
2"She still looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes that held their usual intelligent sharpness."
97.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount721
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04160887656033287
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.020804438280166437
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean14.01
std10.02
cv0.715
sampleLengths
014
124
231
312
414
56
66
717
823
914
1044
118
1226
1313
149
1510
1621
1719
1811
1918
2014
2111
228
2327
2410
256
2619
274
284
296
308
319
3211
3313
346
3517
367
377
384
3928
404
418
425
4314
4423
4514
4616
4713
4814
4916
80.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners41
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then his usual composure returned."
ratio0.018
67.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences55
matches
0"She'd moved into the flat"
1"His hazel eyes glanced up"
2"He was older now, still"
3"She'd always wondered about that"
4"She rarely thought about it"
5"she replied with a slight"
6"He leaned against the bar,"
7"she said finally"
8"It had been three years"
9"They'd exchanged emails, the occasional"
10"she said, the words leaving"
11"His eyes widened slightly behind"
12"She gave a humourless laugh"
13"She still looked like herself—black"
14"she said suddenly"
15"His left leg twitched slightly,"
16"She drained her glass, holding"
17"He froze, his signet ring"
18"he replied, his voice carefully"
19"she replied, throwing him a"
ratio0.382
32.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences55
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"She'd moved into the flat"
3"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
4"His hazel eyes glanced up"
5"A faint smile touched his"
6"Silas said, not unkindly"
7"Rory replied, sliding onto a"
8"Silas chuckled, a low rumble"
9"He was older now, still"
10"She'd always wondered about that"
11"Silas commented, nodding toward her"
12"Rory glanced at the crescent-shaped"
13"She rarely thought about it"
14"she replied with a slight"
15"He leaned against the bar,"
16"Rory followed his gaze, tilting"
17"she said finally"
18"Silas nodded thoughtfully, knowing better"
19"Rory raised an eyebrow."
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He was older now, still carrying himself with that same quiet authority that had amazed Rory when she'd first met him, but the lines around his eyes had deepene…"
1"She rarely thought about it anymore, the childhood accident that had left her with a permanent reminder of a moment's carelessness."
2"She still looked like herself—black hair, blue eyes that held their usual intelligent sharpness."
3"He touched his knee and wondered about his country, brought into a new dimension by a transitional device that wasn't Alfred Edgar Glenside's, about the woman w…"
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas said, not unkindly"
1"she said, the words leaving her mouth before she could stop them"
2"he replied, his voice carefully even"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas commented (comment)"
1"she conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.095
76.4028%