| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Morrison's brow furrowed almost [almost]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 75.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glistening" | | 1 | "predator" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "constructed" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "furrowed" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" |
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| 77.42% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 58 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Runoff tricked in intermittent streams from above, glistening under emergency fairy lights strung haphazardly along the يعتمدaneled walls." | | 1 | "\"Forget晨e basics, Morrison,\" Harlow called back, voice drifting through the station's hollows." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 996 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 649 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 9 | | Quinn | 1 | | Met | 1 | | Special | 1 | | Investigations | 1 | | Unit | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Mornington | 1 | | Crescent | 1 | | Morrison | 6 | | Evidence | 1 | | Thorne | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Met" | | 3 | "Morrison" | | 4 | "Thorne" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.807 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 996 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 52.42 | | std | 29.08 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 114 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 93 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 89 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station of Mornington Crescent—or what little remained of its original infrastructure—spread before her like a forgotten nightmare." | | 1 | "Yet anything blood splatter anemic—could be supernatural, could be crafty misdirection from the local arranged crime order." | | 2 | "The verdigris-crusted brass caught the light, spinning first frantically, then settling with purity in the direction of the body, then deviating north and slightly east—toward the stairs down which they'd descended." | | 3 | "The circle within which Thorne had died wasn't made of chalk and filings as Morrison had supposed—now she saw the etched runes pulsing faintly along the concrete, the filings themselves glowing with cold fire." |
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| 81.61% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 662 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04984894259818731 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.03172205438066465 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 18.79 | | std | 9.93 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 92.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.660377358490566 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Her leather-watch glanced the time:" | | 1 | "She moved with the quiet" | | 2 | "His clothes were untouched but" | | 3 | "She ran fingers slowly along" | | 4 | "She gestured to the fairy" | | 5 | "She moved now with purpose," | | 6 | "she spoke into her comms," | | 7 | "She bent, retrieving it, watching" | | 8 | "She snapped her fingers, and" | | 9 | "he murmured, gripping his briefcase" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 18.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The service elevator groaned as" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn held herself" | | 2 | "Her leather-watch glanced the time:" | | 3 | "Another night for the Met's" | | 4 | "Another puzzle in the ever-growing" | | 5 | "The abandoned Tube station of" | | 6 | "The air hung heavy with" | | 7 | "The concrete path crumbled underfoot," | | 8 | "Runoff tricked in intermittent streams" | | 9 | "DS Morrison did what he" | | 10 | "Harlow didn't miss a beat." | | 11 | "She moved with the quiet" | | 12 | "Evidence never lied, but sometimes" | | 13 | "Morrison continued without prompting" | | 14 | "Harlow paused, turning her head" | | 15 | "Harlow's expression softened by the" | | 16 | "The crime scene unfolded before" | | 17 | "Thorne lay sprawled near what" | | 18 | "His clothes were untouched but" | | 19 | "Morrison supplied, his tone factual" |
| | ratio | 0.884 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The concrete path crumbled underfoot, but the path itself had been recently smoothed, as if traveled frequently despite the station's apparent abandonment." | | 1 | "DS Morrison did what he could to keep up, juggling a battered leather briefcase containing half-finished reports and coffee that had long since turned cold." | | 2 | "His clothes were untouched but stiff as parchment with blood that glistened unnaturally, seeming to absorb the light rather than reflect it." | | 3 | "She moved now with purpose, following the compass's direction along the smudged path, past stalls of what seemed to be carefully arranged merchandise that hadn'…" | | 4 | "She snapped her fingers, and Morrison instinctively fought through the spell that'd drawn his attention away." | | 5 | "The compass directed upward now, pulling insistently as if the needle itself were spring-loaded and impatient." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved, her brown eyes scanning every inch of the surroundings" | | 1 | "she spoke, the sudden command cracking through the silence" | | 2 | "Harlow called back, voice drifting through the station's hollows" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Morrison continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Harlow interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "she spoke (speak)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Harlow called back (call back)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.476 | |