Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF26WZ41Q949YC79BNT3ZR

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42.1s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rough hum of Aurora's skeleton key snagged my attention as it scraped in the lock. The metal shrieked a symphony against the brass of my landlord's keyholder. A circle of students thick enough to pop any cork (five precisely) nearby snapped their gaze to me upon hearing my unearthing of the deceased. There it was. A rough cut from the coroner's sigh. The moment you wish your stomach had more room from your three, five-course gourmet meal. Even if you don't see it, you feel it. Swirling in its wake. this practice before the after. Why something should come before, why one even expects to see, when both are invisible? The cheery circle of students had already begun looking for alternative occupations. You see, visible worlds are subjective. I can see an invisible spot on your elbow, but you won't even know it exists. It'll be purged from your mind the second I tell you. Until then, it'll hover. You'll swear someone saw something, but noone remembers. It's a curious bit of mystical science. Your black lace mantilla shadow danced in the light of the moon, and you caught it. That shadow remains. Cut off at the elbows, which caused your gaze to dart sidelong at mine. Then to safety. It is after this that Aurora turns her torso, giving me a flat, emotionless look. until only seconds later this shadow in the form of Aurora disappears almost entirely, liquefied by the moon's rays. It seems that shadows in nature are shadows of the author's shadow. It's a sunny day, you see. Not my fault I'm in a dark place. These sunbeams are polluting my talent. Stepping from the light into the chamber where Aurora has boiled off, I realise that I'm in a lecture chamber. I can still only half see Aurora, who's introducing herself. Even now, her words drip off the words of others, like so much honey. I see a white dress, white hair, dancing by. It's busy here, and full. It's Halloween, and I find myself in one of those mazy old buildings inside an overgrown part of Richmond's park — extra still and eerie because of building work done on the oneway road bound for the other end. Find yourself in there, rostered to be the projectionist for Halloween of all things, keep moving on half sunset when you've realised what you've done, it's especially noticeable. These events are put on by the University — with passionate certainty, some claim it exists only because of students who cling to the old civil-war-era look and with the same heady bloodlust. Belfast fulfills two roles: it intends to create the wardrobe and deployable goods for film's ghostly corps, and it hosts university parties that come all too close to the encourages criminals to film cops via the internet and spawn (Romper Stomper). I look down at my ID, sunglasses, and a lime label reading 'Veteran'. Lonely footsteps trace themselves in the room. The building could perhaps feel it needs burglars, if not an actual guard who knows, to protect itself. That's it, Naval aiguillettes drive the point. You can hear a clatter as Aurora clashes something and it ricochets from the wall. It's not enough to get in, just enough to shoot straight. You clash another glass beaker behind yours. It rings like a bell through the room. She cleans her weapon and roars, awakening perhaps fifty animals in this building to begin her chase. If they are certain you are the source of the threat, it may be too late. They draw closer. Closer still. Closer even. A beam of sunlight from a small dormer window glares through the dust. You can see her now, racing towards you with a thresh beating arming. Correct, the thresh beat is how you signal an attack. She was halfway across the room before you have known it. At the speed you've seen second-order panthers reach five or six miles in seconds. Not a match for a well-hidden prey, even electric engine stands idle behind you when she breaks the glass door. You duck, she meshes her way into the room, glass warring heat. Go first. Go last. Her shadow swings around and you sidestep and grab her by the arm. She tries to reason, but you lift her up and bring her down on the waist of her white robe near her head like she was made to order. It doesn't disadvantage you, or her, that your forearms lie dead on either side of her head. At this stage, it is all instinct that you haven't acquired everything that is coming. You've gotten up a head of steam beginning the chase, pulled away from covering Aurora. Bodied her clad in white, fabricated her flight. Statued too. Slewing off-rode into those rag వరండs will have woh- you've made it to the main northwest exhibition called the Pitt Rivers, and vault into the space on West Street that the map says Pitt Rivers. The few dozen tribes currently on display take on correlated overtones of enemy presence, existence, even queue, as your head swivels over the floor. Time itself seems to rewind, massive cultural smush is now a repository for a special agent greathoot! The living face of god. Your swallow doesn't bare it, for beside it are glass cases. Yet only seconds have passed. Beside, Aurora's face peers seriously into the gap, and while you wary of her, you weigh whether she's one of you. Those years flitting by and leaving your heart frozen, like. Not shaken as the printout of your death certificate is waved in front of you, Aurora simply nods and takes it like a well-practiced stripper. Aurora's family is a mix of relatives from three countries in modern-day synonymodors, but they certainly have a strong traditional and English influence, as evidenced by her playing cricket, having and keeping several cats (all named Lancelot), and desiring, over breakfast, and while dressed to breakfast, to read certain magazines or newspapers on the morning she goes. Aurora continues expressionlessly, "I would say the brick gulch around this open area was for flood prevention, but surely that does sort the area right up. My only question would be, for our paleolithic ancestors, what would it have been for?" On the other side of your body, you feel a bit like an annoyed neighbour or a fire marshal at a cracker barrel sort of scene, watching long lines of fudge and getting one more pie to offer as you display your thresh beating torso piece out the open window of your IHOP Express packaged in a wound chuxie. This crooks were bed-wetters, gang member, this is a shrank-raphool. She was too short, too white, and too heavily muscled to be anything but another hunter, but she wore the gray choppy zig-zagged smile of one who had seen their whole squad decimate themselves. She faced the other way, scrying for signals shouted and interpreted to them from miles away, for the voices beyond that edge which you had thus far ignored. On the other side of the open area are what you might interpret as ghosts of wallplates, or maybe mechanical systems for air conditioning, or just families of executing wall panels. These objects are in particular concentration where the wall breaks out of sight in a passage you progressively have the most paranoid, chilling dread about. The wall of the passage begins with a stairway. Sometimes circulating events at first for a bit of smarmy credit. Then these days, you rarely have any accomodations at all. Just those windy passageways. The chests, they just bring their own. Currently this scene exists entrances we had hoped. Namely that you don't want dead-end searchers, dwellers who might summon other bad seeks with them. The scene repeats one or two times through the whole thing. Your healing happens in reverse. Awake, gaslit, pacing on a suburban traffic circle effed with three warning lights, waking up to some murmuring about whether there are snakes, picking at a work with needles. And then it gets called out. Some scalpel talk, a scissor snip. Arithemetic. If a roman soldier's eyes roll off into the middle of the night, where do they fall? Not a convention! On the neck of the would-be musician scrambling for a sound check. If an austere man eats an oracle, what way should he feel? That kind of esoteric trick question asks silly things. Questions for the police. Questions on the surface, about the surface. You lived, something seemed to have happened in your house, or nearby. And now the investigator is here. Miss Aurora leaned down, a quartet of mysterious women became one before Aurora finished her intro spiel. They were not just different militant, striky-tail Great Lord Guards, much less, some part of Aurora clearly recalls, you had met them earlier in the day. Aurora says they come in 'neatness'. She says it's hard to believe, but it's late, and you realize she is the only one you can think of who may very well take that to mean what you do. Reading down, your heart grows cold. Posters have sayings like 'In antihydrogen, will you turn them away?' 'I can deny but you don't want to.' Even 'W αποκαταστασης doechhes.' There are backwards starts to those like 'serwproume rookiegit' and 'qnicilid mimoerotualb inot welgutenticd'. All these familiar one-selves. Are you sure these are not either yourself? Not unrehearsed, but strutted about. Characters whirled about like sand hystericals. Eventually these sorts of things, once gotten out of deep deep sun lands, become inexorably haunted. Particularly if you're staring at them enough when you're witless, worn about, and yourself staring half-drunk into a room full of clones. The small matronly figure, in the corner, smoothing her wig, and holding her amalgamated tribe as though nothing even happened. She reassured. Not like you believe, no, as though she has indeed been poked, and chased. They rest a knuckly, white and pressed-rimmed white Starbucks coffee cup into your hand. As though you don't know where or how to start. That this is just part of the service. Is it a secret decaffe rachet? What happens next, and inexorably, the old abbey ruins? It's still vast. Still an investigation.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora continues expressionlessly [expressionlessly]"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
88.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"inexorably"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"very"
2"inexorably"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"repository"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"chilling"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"stomach"
2"dancing"
3"footsteps"
4"racing"
5"electric"
6"repository"
7"mechanical"
8"chilling"
9"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
2"look"
3"realize"
hedgeMatches
0"tends to"
1"tries to"
2"seems to"
3"seemed to"
4"starts to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1715
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1649
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
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Halloween2
Richmond1
University1
Romper1
Stomper1
Lonely1
Naval1
Pitt2
Rivers2
West1
Street1
English1
Lancelot1
Express1
Great1
Lord1
Guards1
Starbucks1
You8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"University"
2"Express"
3"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Pitt"
2"Rivers"
3"West"
4"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.583
wordCount1715
matches
0"Not unrehearsed, but strutted about"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"seems that shadows"
1"realise that I'm"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean34.3
std19.63
cv0.572
sampleLengths
053
125
245
352
436
515
619
732
858
967
1087
1132
1241
1340
1436
1545
1675
1775
1824
1922
2016
2121
2210
2325
2457
2541
2669
2762
2831
2925
3041
3124
3245
336
346
351
3632
3712
3820
3918
4043
4138
4229
4314
4423
4538
4636
4732
486
4915
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"was made"
1"is waved"
2"gets called"
3"been poked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs292
matches(empty)
97.86% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences127
ratio0.016
matches
0"It's Halloween, and I find myself in one of those mazy old buildings inside an overgrown part of Richmond's park — extra still and eerie because of building work done on the oneway road bound for the other end."
1"These events are put on by the University — with passionate certainty, some claim it exists only because of students who cling to the old civil-war-era look and with the same heady bloodlust."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount525
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"invisible spot on your"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03619047619047619
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.017142857142857144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean13.5
std10.51
cv0.778
sampleLengths
016
112
225
33
47
515
69
74
85
915
1012
116
1216
1311
144
158
167
1716
183
1914
203
2115
2219
2312
246
258
266
2720
2810
2914
309
315
3239
3328
3433
3541
3613
377
3818
397
4015
4111
427
438
4417
4516
463
472
482
4913
71.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4645669291338583
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences120
matches
0"Then to safety."
1"Sometimes circulating events at first"
2"Then these days, you rarely"
3"Just those windy passageways."
4"Currently this scene exists entrances"
5"Namely that you don't want"
6"Eventually these sorts of things,"
7"Particularly if you're staring at"
ratio0.067
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences120
matches
0"You see, visible worlds are"
1"I can see an invisible"
2"It'll be purged from your"
3"You'll swear someone saw something,"
4"It's a curious bit of"
5"Your black lace mantilla shadow"
6"It is after this that"
7"It seems that shadows in"
8"It's a sunny day, you"
9"I can still only half"
10"I see a white dress,"
11"It's busy here, and full."
12"It's Halloween, and I find"
13"I look down at my"
14"You can hear a clatter"
15"It's not enough to get"
16"You clash another glass beaker"
17"It rings like a bell"
18"She cleans her weapon and"
19"They draw closer."
ratio0.3
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences120
matches
0"The rough hum of Aurora's"
1"The metal shrieked a symphony"
2"A circle of students thick"
3"A rough cut from the"
4"The moment you wish your"
5"this practice before the after."
6"The cheery circle of students"
7"You see, visible worlds are"
8"I can see an invisible"
9"It'll be purged from your"
10"You'll swear someone saw something,"
11"It's a curious bit of"
12"Your black lace mantilla shadow"
13"That shadow remains."
14"It is after this that"
15"It seems that shadows in"
16"It's a sunny day, you"
17"These sunbeams are polluting my"
18"I can still only half"
19"I see a white dress,"
ratio0.575
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences120
matches
0"Even if you don't see"
1"Even now, her words drip"
2"If they are certain you"
3"If a roman soldier's eyes"
4"If an austere man eats"
5"As though you don't know"
ratio0.05
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"These events are put on by the University — with passionate certainty, some claim it exists only because of students who cling to the old civil-war-era look and…"
1"On the other side of your body, you feel a bit like an annoyed neighbour or a fire marshal at a cracker barrel sort of scene, watching long lines of fudge and g…"
2"Namely that you don't want dead-end searchers, dwellers who might summon other bad seeks with them."
3"The small matronly figure, in the corner, smoothing her wig, and holding her amalgamated tribe as though nothing even happened."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora continues expressionlessly (continue)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
87.2113%