Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF2E1WQ8J5QTWE4AKN9SFG

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Duration:
28.1s
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$0.001953
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Parasail

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The four of them stepped through the boundary into the Fae Grove, as if crossing an invisible threshold into another world. The air was immediately different—crisp and electric, charged with an otherworldly energy that prickled Aurora's skin. Long grasses swayed in a breeze that didn't seem to exist in the mortal world, moving of their own accord. Looming over everything were the ancient standing stones, their bark-like surface etched with wispy symbols only visible from certain angles or in the dappled, shifting light that permeated the grove. A secluded, glowing emerald blossomed from the boot print of one of the four as they stepped, and slowly wilted when they lifted their foot. Aurora smiled up at Nyx, her eyes sparkling in the ethereal light‐a dance of lavenders and blues canopying the grove. "Nyx, you said something about this place being magical. When you said it, I kind of laughed inside. But now, I see that 'magical' doesn't even begin to describe it. It's like stepping into another world." The Shade glanced down at her, confusion washing through their violet depths. "Rory, that's precisely what this is - another world. You're in the Fae Realm." She gasped. "The Fae realm? Why are we..." "Here?" Nyx's expression darkened. "The Grove is a place of classical Fae power – it's tightly controlled. The energy, this experience – someone invited you here. Isolde most likely. Though we won't find out why until we talk to her." "Mate, I'll believe it when I see it," Silas said, with a deep, placating exhale. "This shit is mad..." "But we're here, either way. We're going to see the last dead Fae," Billy chimed in. "What about that, yeh?" "Follow me; she's within." The Seer appeared at the far end of the clearing, her lavender eyes glowing as the last traces of the natural world faded from the group's vision. Walking a few steps, she marked the outer ring of the Grove. Granite boulders, dwarfed by the towering oak, marked the concentric circle they continued to walk. The small group split the uncanny silence. Nothing moved amidst the gigantic oak save for the steady ticking of the Seer's footfalls. "Aurora..." Nyx whispered, "follow her. Talk to her." Aurora reached out for the Shade's hand, only to find it made of nothingness before she could hold it. Footfalls trailing Nyx's chase, she quickened her pace - equal to all the wind in the Shepherd's speech. "That moonbeam's got too much to give to deary middle-aged folk, Aury. Leave it to me, love." Aurora shot a look across the grassy plain, spotting Billy - in toe-to-toe posturing - at the end of Isolde's crooked finger. Their source of magic. The Shade. Aurora shook her head, biting back the neem and flushing it out in a pitiless scream. "Demon!" Isolde screeched, erupting in rows of razor-sharp teeth... Nyx coalesced. Tawny hand bolted in the mortal's direction, wracked with silly insults and potslang... Billy panted with waking nightmares - that same volume feeling like floating through a mystic dream in his veins. "Why would you think I am going to call you Billy? Your soul is black, even for a human..." "Yeh, really?" Billy's high-pitched scoff wore into a baritone cough. "And you're- you're- you're a v-vampire, innit?" The runny voice gave way - lugging itself across an intensive gap between them. "Illa na na!" Flashing crack and spark. A headless torso, once.Name -- Billy McKinsey. "There, Billy. Leave them - we won't go further." "What did he do to me, Isolde?" Her tone raised then lowered as she moved, affirming the new connection. Isolde tensed, feeling someone look at her with great intensity and force. Unsettling for someone who measured time by it running still. "As oracles see the ever‐changing future. Seeing you, I see... two lines." The Seer's violet eyes sealed themselves, before sliding open. Hypnotized by a glimpse of the future, her lashes fluttered as though a moth escaped. "Isolde, what do you see?" Nyx asked, tilting his head. Knowing what that silence meant - but asking anyway. She inhaled a needy, nauseous gulp of air. Her eyes locking with hers as she stepped back. "The realm of men is dying. But you, Aurora... keep on." "I-what?..." Her lips sealed tightly, further explanation withheld with a sharp exhale. "Your future is brighter than that." She turned, padding off into the farthest side of the grove. Her hair, snagging on an oak tree's branches. "Where are we?" Aurora murmured, when they were finally able to leave the odd spells of the place behind and reach out to some of the odd trinkets there. "What else," Isolde breathed, unfamiliar with it, really. Talking to an oracle really. It's a bonkers experience. Nyx was quiet, only helping Aurora lift a thick book she found amongst the other rubble. Aurora gasped - the text changed. It shifted, danced. "What- you can read that?" Isolde asked, studying her. "Aye-yea did nae now." Nyx cracked a smile - imbuing the same kind light in their eyes. Isolde felt it as well, before she turned back. "Keep following and you'll find your way..." A juniper flickered and spat ancient spells through the trailers of their breath. The kind musk of some male generates from Isolde's garden of skin, fills her with shame and anger at the absence of home. She shook her head, watching the mortals walk ahead. Into the darkness. "I'd know you by palanquin and your bloody tenacity, keeper." "Why-eh-?" "For the tail. Midnight-revealing," Rinrig waved a hand between the mortal's cascades of sweats. Like an aura, you'd've to place your hand in it before noticing. "I've heard about you." "Billy... Brus-" Aurora panted, ready to throw. Her eyes were rimmed with bags of grief and tantrums. "Brus-one." Rinrig inhaled. So suspicious. So incurious. "For some reason!" Billy reprimanded. Except it was in Scottish English. Rinrig laughed, clapping and rubbing his hands together. "Cute! Oi like ye, Billy Brus...? communicating with ya is like blowing out candles on me cake, ehitis."
created_at"2026-05-27T10:18:19.592Z" 5/27/2026, 10:18:19 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her tone raised then [then]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.054
64.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
2"tightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"looming"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"uncanny"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"fluttered"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"charged"
2"otherworldly"
3"looming"
4"etched"
5"dance"
6"depths"
7"uncanny"
8"silence"
9"amidst"
10"quickened"
11"intensity"
12"measured"
13"fluttered"
14"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"r with shame"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1007
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount711
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Aurora9
Nyx8
Shade3
Silas1
Billy6
Seer3
Shepherd1
Isolde7
McKinsey1
Knowing1
Talking1
Like1
Except1
Scottish1
English1
Rinrig3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Silas"
4"Billy"
5"Seer"
6"Isolde"
7"McKinsey"
8"Rinrig"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Shepherd"
3"Scottish"
globalScore0.867
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if crossing an invisible threshold into another world"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1007
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean20.98
std16.06
cv0.765
sampleLengths
087
125
256
326
48
540
619
720
858
922
108
1137
1217
1344
149
1534
1619
1717
1814
1914
209
2141
2212
2324
2419
2517
2611
271
2817
2919
3029
3117
3216
339
349
354
3622
377
3836
3912
4010
411
4230
4317
447
4511
468
4718
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"were rimmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences88
ratio0.114
matches
0"The air was immediately different—crisp and electric, charged with an otherworldly energy that prickled Aurora's skin."
1"\"Follow me; she's within.\""
2"Footfalls trailing Nyx's chase, she quickened her pace - equal to all the wind in the Shepherd's speech."
3"Aurora shot a look across the grassy plain, spotting Billy - in toe-to-toe posturing - at the end of Isolde's crooked finger."
4"Billy panted with waking nightmares - that same volume feeling like floating through a mystic dream in his veins."
5"The runny voice gave way - lugging itself across an intensive gap between them."
6"A headless torso, once.Name -- Billy McKinsey."
7"Knowing what that silence meant - but asking anyway."
8"Aurora gasped - the text changed."
9"Nyx cracked a smile - imbuing the same kind light in their eyes."
96.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount670
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.026865671641791045
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.023880597014925373
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean11.44
std7.56
cv0.661
sampleLengths
021
116
220
330
425
520
636
712
814
92
106
114
1236
1315
144
1516
164
174
1827
1912
2015
217
2215
238
2419
2518
2617
2722
284
292
3016
319
322
3313
3419
3519
3610
377
3814
397
407
419
4219
4312
4410
4512
469
4715
4810
499
89.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5568181818181818
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences59
matches
0"Their source of magic."
1"Her tone raised then lowered"
2"She inhaled a needy, nauseous"
3"Her eyes locking with hers"
4"Her lips sealed tightly, further"
5"She turned, padding off into"
6"Her hair, snagging on an"
7"It's a bonkers experience."
8"It shifted, danced."
9"She shook her head, watching"
10"Her eyes were rimmed with"
ratio0.186
53.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences59
matches
0"The four of them stepped"
1"The air was immediately different—crisp"
2"A secluded, glowing emerald blossomed"
3"Aurora smiled up at Nyx,"
4"The Shade glanced down at"
5"Nyx's expression darkened"
6"Silas said, with a deep,"
7"Billy chimed in"
8"The Seer appeared at the"
9"Granite boulders, dwarfed by the"
10"The small group split the"
11"Nothing moved amidst the gigantic"
12"Aurora reached out for the"
13"Footfalls trailing Nyx's chase, she"
14"Aurora shot a look across"
15"Their source of magic."
16"Aurora shook her head, biting"
17"Isolde screeched, erupting in rows"
18"Tawny hand bolted in the"
19"Billy panted with waking nightmares"
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The four of them stepped through the boundary into the Fae Grove, as if crossing an invisible threshold into another world."
1"The air was immediately different—crisp and electric, charged with an otherworldly energy that prickled Aurora's skin."
2"Long grasses swayed in a breeze that didn't seem to exist in the mortal world, moving of their own accord."
3"Looming over everything were the ancient standing stones, their bark-like surface etched with wispy symbols only visible from certain angles or in the dappled, …"
4"Aurora smiled up at Nyx, her eyes sparkling in the ethereal light‐a dance of lavenders and blues canopying the grove."
5"Aurora shook her head, biting back the neem and flushing it out in a pitiless scream."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora panted, ready to throw"
14.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde screeched (screech)"
2"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
3"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
4"Aurora panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.432
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.27
77.1653%