| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her tone raised then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.811 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.054 | |
| 64.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 995 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 995 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "charged" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "looming" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "dance" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "uncanny" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "amidst" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1007 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 711 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | Billy | 6 | | Seer | 3 | | Shepherd | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | McKinsey | 1 | | Knowing | 1 | | Talking | 1 | | Like | 1 | | Except | 1 | | Scottish | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rinrig | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Billy" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "McKinsey" | | 8 | "Rinrig" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Shepherd" | | 3 | "Scottish" |
| | globalScore | 0.867 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if crossing an invisible threshold into another world" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1007 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 20.98 | | std | 16.06 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was immediately different—crisp and electric, charged with an otherworldly energy that prickled Aurora's skin." | | 1 | "\"Follow me; she's within.\"" | | 2 | "Footfalls trailing Nyx's chase, she quickened her pace - equal to all the wind in the Shepherd's speech." | | 3 | "Aurora shot a look across the grassy plain, spotting Billy - in toe-to-toe posturing - at the end of Isolde's crooked finger." | | 4 | "Billy panted with waking nightmares - that same volume feeling like floating through a mystic dream in his veins." | | 5 | "The runny voice gave way - lugging itself across an intensive gap between them." | | 6 | "A headless torso, once.Name -- Billy McKinsey." | | 7 | "Knowing what that silence meant - but asking anyway." | | 8 | "Aurora gasped - the text changed." | | 9 | "Nyx cracked a smile - imbuing the same kind light in their eyes." |
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| 96.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 670 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.026865671641791045 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023880597014925373 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 11.44 | | std | 7.56 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 89.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5568181818181818 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Their source of magic." | | 1 | "Her tone raised then lowered" | | 2 | "She inhaled a needy, nauseous" | | 3 | "Her eyes locking with hers" | | 4 | "Her lips sealed tightly, further" | | 5 | "She turned, padding off into" | | 6 | "Her hair, snagging on an" | | 7 | "It's a bonkers experience." | | 8 | "It shifted, danced." | | 9 | "She shook her head, watching" | | 10 | "Her eyes were rimmed with" |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 53.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The four of them stepped" | | 1 | "The air was immediately different—crisp" | | 2 | "A secluded, glowing emerald blossomed" | | 3 | "Aurora smiled up at Nyx," | | 4 | "The Shade glanced down at" | | 5 | "Nyx's expression darkened" | | 6 | "Silas said, with a deep," | | 7 | "Billy chimed in" | | 8 | "The Seer appeared at the" | | 9 | "Granite boulders, dwarfed by the" | | 10 | "The small group split the" | | 11 | "Nothing moved amidst the gigantic" | | 12 | "Aurora reached out for the" | | 13 | "Footfalls trailing Nyx's chase, she" | | 14 | "Aurora shot a look across" | | 15 | "Their source of magic." | | 16 | "Aurora shook her head, biting" | | 17 | "Isolde screeched, erupting in rows" | | 18 | "Tawny hand bolted in the" | | 19 | "Billy panted with waking nightmares" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The four of them stepped through the boundary into the Fae Grove, as if crossing an invisible threshold into another world." | | 1 | "The air was immediately different—crisp and electric, charged with an otherworldly energy that prickled Aurora's skin." | | 2 | "Long grasses swayed in a breeze that didn't seem to exist in the mortal world, moving of their own accord." | | 3 | "Looming over everything were the ancient standing stones, their bark-like surface etched with wispy symbols only visible from certain angles or in the dappled, …" | | 4 | "Aurora smiled up at Nyx, her eyes sparkling in the ethereal light‐a dance of lavenders and blues canopying the grove." | | 5 | "Aurora shook her head, biting back the neem and flushing it out in a pitiless scream." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora panted, ready to throw" |
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| 14.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde screeched (screech)" | | 2 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Aurora panted (pant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.216 | | leniency | 0.432 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.27 | |