Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF2ESEHE1C16AR56ZWHA62

Run Details

Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.001064
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her bicycle helmet as she pushed her way through the dense foliage at the edge of Richmond Park. The cobblestones of the path gave way to thick, damp earth. Her bright blue eyes scanned the darkness, adjusting to the limited light of the half moon above. She was used to nighttime deliveries, having bounced from one late-night job to another since leaving Cardiff, but this was different. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath her shirt, pulsed with a faint warmth against her chest. That was why she'd come. After Yu-Fei had mentioned the strange messages he'd received about the Richmond grove, Rory had felt compelled to investigate. Too many things didn't add up, and her unusual gift for solving puzzles made this personal somehow. The ancient oak standing stones rose before her, ancient and twisted, marking the boundary she sought. Beyond them lay the grove. The pendant's rhythm against her skin grew more pronounced, almost frantic. She swallowed hard and stepped between the stones. The first thing that struck her was the smell. The air in the grove carried a scent both familiar and alien—from the freshness of earth and blooming flowers to something metallic and old. Wildflowers, as described, glowed faintly in the darkness, casting an eerie, muted blue light across her path. The silence was deceptive. Beyond the normal sounds of the park at night—crickets chirping, the rustle of small animals in the undergrowth—lay another sound. A whisper of movement. Small at first, like the brush of leaves against bark or the scurry of something small. But each step forward seemed to amplify it. Leaning against rustling got faster, more insistent. Rory unfastened her helmet and stuffed it into her bag, her movements precise despite the creeping sense of dread. She tapped the pendant with her finger where it lay against her collarbone. Felt its gentle pulse like a second, smaller heartbeat. "There's nothing here," she murmured to herself. Because if there was, the Heartstone would have done more than warm up. It would have brightened, flared. A twig snapped, impossible to ignore in the sudden unnatural silence that fell over the grove. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. The strange sounds resumed, now accompanied by something else—a sense, a feeling that dissolved the boundaries between sight and hearing. Something moved in the corner of her vision. Not an animal, not a wind—something that didn't behave like anything natural. Then—a flicker of movement, between the ancient oaks. She turned her head slowly, but whatever it was had vanished. The foliage didn't disturb. Nothing had brushed past the ferns. The pulse of the pendant grew warm enough to be noticeable through her shirt. Rory took another step forward, her sneakers making no sound as they pressed into the soft earth. Her years of running deliveries had honed her ability to move silently when needed. Yet despite this skill, the feeling persisted that she was being watched. Not just observed, but studied—as if the grove itself was aware of her presence and was deciding what to do with her. The wildflowers seemed to have dimmed, and for a moment, the grove grew darker, lighter only by the pale sliver of moon that managed to penetrate the thick overhead branches. In this relative dark, the sense of movement intensified. At the edge of her hearing, a voice—too faint to be human, too indistinct to make out words—whispered her name. Not the usual Rory, but Aurora. Malphora. That was not in her codex farmed. That name only came out in her deepest nightmares, the ones she couldn't remember upon waking. Her heart thudded against her ribs as she passed another stone, this one carved with strange, spiraling patterns that hadn't been there before. If she had only seen it with her eyes. An undercurrent of power emanated from it, cool and ancient. The pendant pulsed again, that warm, insistent beat against her chest. The grove had changed around her. The path she'd been following seemed to have shifted, the wildflowers now brighter and somehow more piercing. It was a part she'd crept into. Ahead, near the oldest oak in the grove, something stirred. Not the vague sense of movement of before, but definitive—something with form and substance. tall and thin with arms too long for its body. It swayed slightly, back and forth, keeping its head turned from her. Rory stopped moving. Her hand shook as she unfastened the clasp of her bag, slipping her hand inside to retrieve the direita. The one Evan had shattered when he'd found her with a male friend. Not that that was the case. It never had been. "Who's there?" Her voice came out stronger than she felt. Theentity tilted its head, but still did not face her. She caught a glimpse of skin pale and translucent through the swirling foliage. Her breath hitched as a clear, liquid sound echoed through the grove—something between a chuckle and a sigh. Rory knew she should run. Instinct screamed at her to turn and flee back the way she'd come, through the standing stones and far into the normal park where logic and reason still reigned. But her feet remained rooted. The Heartstone chose that moment to reveal its true purpose, flaring bright red with light that spilled across the grove in a sudden, sharp pulse. The entity turned. Not fully, just enough for her to see a face—an outline of features that shapdifted constantly, never settling. And within that shapdift, somehow, she recognized an image that froze her blood—Evan's smirk. The liquid sound came again, closer now, calling her name. "No," she whispered, taking a step back. The pendant blazed brighter, its warmth spreading through her clothes, racing up her neck and flushing her cheeks. The grove seemed to spin around her, the stones, the trees, the creature. The entity of Evan-laughsadvanced, but slowly, as if time itself struggled against its progression. Rory reached for the edges of her knowledge. She'd seen some strange things since receiving the pendant, but this—this was new. Her mind raced, searching for anything Yu-Fei had mentioned, anything that could explain what was happening. "Back off," she said, her voice now stern as she slid the necklace out from beneath her shirt. The loose ruby glowed in the darkness. "Whatever you are, I'm not staying." The creature—evil mock-warping her past—stopped its advance, tilting its head again in what Rory recognized unmistakably as confusion. As its feaue blurred, she caught a glimpse of another face beneath. "We've been watching," it whispered, words that seemed both internal and external. "Waiting." Rory's hands clenched into fists. "Waiting for what?" "For one who remembers. One whose blood knows the old ways. Carter." The hair on Rory's arms stood on end at the sound of her last name coming from this shapdift horror. "What do you want from me?" The creature began to dissolve, its form becoming mist that slithered through the air around her. Rory stumbled back, her pulse pounding in her ears, the pendant pulsing in time with her heart. But the mist didn't attack. Instead, it coalesced around her, whispering secrets she couldn't understand but somehow, impossibly, seemed to know. "Run now," it seemed to whisper through her thoughts. "But know this—Aurora—you cannot leave what is yours. The Grove has claimed you. The stones remember. You are home." The mist parted, and Rory found herself alone in the ancient grove once more, the clear night air surrounding her, the wildflowers glimmering, the standing stones indicating the way back to the normal world. But nothing would ever be normal again. Rory stepped back through the standing stones without looking back, her mind racing with impossible revelations, the pulse of the Heartstone joining beat with her frantic heartbeat as she rode home in the darkness.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:18:20.346Z" 5/27/2026, 10:18:20 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"sense of"
count3
7
word"pulse"
count5
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"racing"
count2
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"familiar"
4"silence"
5"whisper"
6"sense of"
7"pulse"
8"flicker"
9"shattered"
10"echoed"
11"racing"
12"raced"
13"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
26.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1245
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park1
Cardiff1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Yu-Fei2
Rory14
Aurora2
Evan3
Theentity1
Evan-laughsadvanced1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Rory"
5"Aurora"
6"Evan"
7"Theentity"
8"Evan-laughsadvanced"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.938
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something between a chuckle and a sigh"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.299
wordCount1305
matches
0"Not just observed, but studied"
1"Not the usual Rory, but Aurora"
2"Not the vague sense of movement of before, but definitive"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"persisted that she"
1"chose that moment"
96.28% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.27
std17.18
cv0.487
sampleLengths
073
156
232
38
450
559
641
725
816
948
1029
1114
1265
1339
1427
1523
1642
1741
1846
1945
2051
2164
2235
2310
247
2545
2637
2731
2830
2913
308
3112
3226
3354
3428
3541
3634
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was being"
1"was deciding"
2"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences104
ratio0.125
matches
0"The air in the grove carried a scent both familiar and alien—from the freshness of earth and blooming flowers to something metallic and old."
1"Beyond the normal sounds of the park at night—crickets chirping, the rustle of small animals in the undergrowth—lay another sound."
2"The strange sounds resumed, now accompanied by something else—a sense, a feeling that dissolved the boundaries between sight and hearing."
3"Not an animal, not a wind—something that didn't behave like anything natural."
4"Then—a flicker of movement, between the ancient oaks."
5"Not just observed, but studied—as if the grove itself was aware of her presence and was deciding what to do with her."
6"At the edge of her hearing, a voice—too faint to be human, too indistinct to make out words—whispered her name."
7"Not the vague sense of movement of before, but definitive—something with form and substance."
8"Her breath hitched as a clear, liquid sound echoed through the grove—something between a chuckle and a sigh."
9"Not fully, just enough for her to see a face—an outline of features that shapdifted constantly, never settling."
10"And within that shapdift, somehow, she recognized an image that froze her blood—Evan's smirk."
11"She'd seen some strange things since receiving the pendant, but this—this was new."
12"The creature—evil mock-warping her past—stopped its advance, tilting its head again in what Rory recognized unmistakably as confusion."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1266
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"eerie, muted blue light"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.038704581358609796
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009478672985781991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.55
std6.85
cv0.546
sampleLengths
024
111
217
321
415
55
619
717
816
95
1011
118
129
1324
1417
154
1620
174
1816
198
207
2119
2213
239
247
2513
265
2716
288
2920
308
3112
328
3311
344
356
3614
3717
3814
3912
4022
4130
429
4320
446
451
467
4716
4823
499
63.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4230769230769231
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Too many things didn't add"
1"Then—a flicker of movement, between"
2"Instead, it coalesced around her,"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences97
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1"She was used to nighttime"
2"She swallowed hard and stepped"
3"She tapped the pendant with"
4"she murmured to herself"
5"It would have brightened, flared."
6"She turned her head slowly,"
7"Her years of running deliveries"
8"Her heart thudded against her"
9"It was a part she'd"
10"It swayed slightly, back and"
11"Her hand shook as she"
12"It never had been."
13"Her voice came out stronger"
14"She caught a glimpse of"
15"Her breath hitched as a"
16"she whispered, taking a step"
17"She'd seen some strange things"
18"Her mind raced, searching for"
19"she said, her voice now"
ratio0.227
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences97
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
1"The cobblestones of the path"
2"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3"She was used to nighttime"
4"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath"
5"That was why she'd come."
6"The ancient oak standing stones"
7"The pendant's rhythm against her"
8"She swallowed hard and stepped"
9"The first thing that struck"
10"The air in the grove"
11"Wildflowers, as described, glowed faintly"
12"The silence was deceptive."
13"A whisper of movement."
14"Rory unfastened her helmet and"
15"She tapped the pendant with"
16"she murmured to herself"
17"It would have brightened, flared."
18"A twig snapped, impossible to"
19"Rory froze, her breath catching"
ratio0.711
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Because if there was, the"
1"If she had only seen"
ratio0.021
33.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The wildflowers seemed to have dimmed, and for a moment, the grove grew darker, lighter only by the pale sliver of moon that managed to penetrate the thick over…"
1"The Heartstone chose that moment to reveal its true purpose, flaring bright red with light that spilled across the grove in a sudden, sharp pulse."
2"Not fully, just enough for her to see a face—an outline of features that shapdifted constantly, never settling."
3"And within that shapdift, somehow, she recognized an image that froze her blood—Evan's smirk."
4"The pendant blazed brighter, its warmth spreading through her clothes, racing up her neck and flushing her cheeks."
5"The entity of Evan-laughsadvanced, but slowly, as if time itself struggled against its progression."
6"Her mind raced, searching for anything Yu-Fei had mentioned, anything that could explain what was happening."
7"Rory stumbled back, her pulse pounding in her ears, the pendant pulsing in time with her heart."
8"Rory stepped back through the standing stones without looking back, her mind racing with impossible revelations, the pulse of the Heartstone joining beat with h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.5
79.1682%