| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "shattered" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "managed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1305 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1245 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Rory | 14 | | Aurora | 2 | | Evan | 3 | | Theentity | 1 | | Evan-laughsadvanced | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Theentity" | | 8 | "Evan-laughsadvanced" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.938 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something between a chuckle and a sigh" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.299 | | wordCount | 1305 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just observed, but studied" | | 1 | "Not the usual Rory, but Aurora" | | 2 | "Not the vague sense of movement of before, but definitive" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "persisted that she" | | 1 | "chose that moment" |
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| 96.28% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.27 | | std | 17.18 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was deciding" | | 2 | "was happening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove carried a scent both familiar and alien—from the freshness of earth and blooming flowers to something metallic and old." | | 1 | "Beyond the normal sounds of the park at night—crickets chirping, the rustle of small animals in the undergrowth—lay another sound." | | 2 | "The strange sounds resumed, now accompanied by something else—a sense, a feeling that dissolved the boundaries between sight and hearing." | | 3 | "Not an animal, not a wind—something that didn't behave like anything natural." | | 4 | "Then—a flicker of movement, between the ancient oaks." | | 5 | "Not just observed, but studied—as if the grove itself was aware of her presence and was deciding what to do with her." | | 6 | "At the edge of her hearing, a voice—too faint to be human, too indistinct to make out words—whispered her name." | | 7 | "Not the vague sense of movement of before, but definitive—something with form and substance." | | 8 | "Her breath hitched as a clear, liquid sound echoed through the grove—something between a chuckle and a sigh." | | 9 | "Not fully, just enough for her to see a face—an outline of features that shapdifted constantly, never settling." | | 10 | "And within that shapdift, somehow, she recognized an image that froze her blood—Evan's smirk." | | 11 | "She'd seen some strange things since receiving the pendant, but this—this was new." | | 12 | "The creature—evil mock-warping her past—stopped its advance, tilting its head again in what Rory recognized unmistakably as confusion." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1266 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "eerie, muted blue light" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.038704581358609796 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009478672985781991 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.55 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 63.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Too many things didn't add" | | 1 | "Then—a flicker of movement, between" | | 2 | "Instead, it coalesced around her," |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 1 | "She was used to nighttime" | | 2 | "She swallowed hard and stepped" | | 3 | "She tapped the pendant with" | | 4 | "she murmured to herself" | | 5 | "It would have brightened, flared." | | 6 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 7 | "Her years of running deliveries" | | 8 | "Her heart thudded against her" | | 9 | "It was a part she'd" | | 10 | "It swayed slightly, back and" | | 11 | "Her hand shook as she" | | 12 | "It never had been." | | 13 | "Her voice came out stronger" | | 14 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched as a" | | 16 | "she whispered, taking a step" | | 17 | "She'd seen some strange things" | | 18 | "Her mind raced, searching for" | | 19 | "she said, her voice now" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 1 | "The cobblestones of the path" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 3 | "She was used to nighttime" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath" | | 5 | "That was why she'd come." | | 6 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 7 | "The pendant's rhythm against her" | | 8 | "She swallowed hard and stepped" | | 9 | "The first thing that struck" | | 10 | "The air in the grove" | | 11 | "Wildflowers, as described, glowed faintly" | | 12 | "The silence was deceptive." | | 13 | "A whisper of movement." | | 14 | "Rory unfastened her helmet and" | | 15 | "She tapped the pendant with" | | 16 | "she murmured to herself" | | 17 | "It would have brightened, flared." | | 18 | "A twig snapped, impossible to" | | 19 | "Rory froze, her breath catching" |
| | ratio | 0.711 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Because if there was, the" | | 1 | "If she had only seen" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers seemed to have dimmed, and for a moment, the grove grew darker, lighter only by the pale sliver of moon that managed to penetrate the thick over…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone chose that moment to reveal its true purpose, flaring bright red with light that spilled across the grove in a sudden, sharp pulse." | | 2 | "Not fully, just enough for her to see a face—an outline of features that shapdifted constantly, never settling." | | 3 | "And within that shapdift, somehow, she recognized an image that froze her blood—Evan's smirk." | | 4 | "The pendant blazed brighter, its warmth spreading through her clothes, racing up her neck and flushing her cheeks." | | 5 | "The entity of Evan-laughsadvanced, but slowly, as if time itself struggled against its progression." | | 6 | "Her mind raced, searching for anything Yu-Fei had mentioned, anything that could explain what was happening." | | 7 | "Rory stumbled back, her pulse pounding in her ears, the pendant pulsing in time with her heart." | | 8 | "Rory stepped back through the standing stones without looking back, her mind racing with impossible revelations, the pulse of the Heartstone joining beat with h…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |