Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF32HJZQ1H0Z4ZYJEXABE2

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.001374
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The steel-toed boots crunched on dried leaves as Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stepped through the archway of standing stones, entering the Fae Grove. Rory's heart pounded, her stomach churned at what they were about to uncover. The headquarters of the Wardens of the Veil. "There." Isolde's pale hand gestured, silver hair swaying, her lavender eyes fixed on a path winding through the trees to the clearing's center. "The heart of the grove." Unease crept up Rory's spine. An ancient oak turned skeletal and shriveled, branches like twisted candles, stood surrounded by a ring of smaller trees in dried and dying states. Flowers petals wrinkled and dried. Moss clung to the trees in gray blotches. The air hung heavy, stagnant with decay. Rory swallowed hard, throat dry. "This... this looks wrong. Diseased." Her fingers tightened around the fae-forged moonstone blade at her hip. Nyx with eyes that glowed faintly violet in their hollow sockets, nodded. "As if all its life force has been sucked out." Isolde frowned, silver brows furrowing. "Yes. This is my concern. A sinister force here, ancient and evil, grown too strong." She gasped, head snapping up, eyes sharpening. Rory tensed. "What is it? What do you see?" " rip in the Veil. Here, deep in the heart of the Grove... " Isolde's voice drifted off before Regaining focus. "Show us." Rory's voice, razor-edged and flat, cut the pallid stillness of the glade. The trees groaned as a breeze picked up in power, dead leaves swirling and aiding about the hikers. A faint, shimmering distortion hung in the air, pulsing gently. Fascinated, Rory stepped closer. She reached a hesitant hand towards the anomaly. Felt a tingling warmth. Suddenly, the shimmer burst with light and a freezing blast of wind, hurling Rory back! She stumbled, gasping. The distortion closed and Kennedy and Nyx rushed to her side. "Are you alright?" Her friend asked. "I'm...I think so." As they helped Rory to her feet, there came a guttural groan, drawing their eyes. The ring of dead trees began to crumble inward, splintering and withering as tiny tendrils of shadow inched outward. In the center, shadows pooled and coalesced. A burgundy stone set in a silver chain pulsed and glowed, floating mid-air, before settling on Rory's chest. The shadows rose and spread, shaping into a form like a whirlwind of smoke. The face of it showed… nothing human. Hollow eye sockets, a lipless maw filled with thorny teeth, and an aura that meant nothing so much as intelligent evil. It turned to Rory. "We have been waiting..." "I'm done running." Rory declared, voice with a quaver but steel-strong, accepting the Heartstone. "Enough." She unsheathed the fae blade, violet eyes met the creature's void-stare in challenge. "Let's see what you've got." The shadow creature lunged.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:18:40.574Z" 5/27/2026, 10:18:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
78.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount461
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount461
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"churned"
count1
2
word"furrowing"
count1
3
word"sinister"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"maw"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"churned"
2"furrowing"
3"sinister"
4"warmth"
5"pulsed"
6"maw"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords463
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount385
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Nyx3
Isolde4
Fae1
Grove1
Wardens1
Veil1
Unease1
Regaining1
Kennedy1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Unease"
4"Kennedy"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount463
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean21.05
std12.53
cv0.595
sampleLengths
044
128
249
321
422
527
69
721
814
928
1016
1118
1211
136
143
1534
1625
1742
188
1915
2018
214
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs74
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount391
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.01278772378516624
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.010230179028132993
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean10.29
std6.67
cv0.648
sampleLengths
023
113
28
323
45
55
624
75
88
97
105
1116
1212
1310
145
1522
162
177
1821
1914
2018
2110
224
238
244
2515
263
2711
286
293
3015
3119
327
3318
3414
355
362
3721
384
394
4014
411
4213
435
444
97.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6444444444444445
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners29
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"Suddenly, the shimmer burst with"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences36
matches
0"Her fingers tightened around the"
1"She gasped, head snapping up,"
2"She reached a hesitant hand"
3"She stumbled, gasping."
4"Her friend asked"
5"It turned to Rory."
6"She unsheathed the fae blade,"
ratio0.194
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences36
matches
0"The steel-toed boots crunched on"
1"Rory's heart pounded, her stomach"
2"The headquarters of the Wardens"
3"Isolde's pale hand gestured, silver"
4"Unease crept up Rory's spine."
5"An ancient oak turned skeletal"
6"Flowers petals wrinkled and dried."
7"Moss clung to the trees"
8"The air hung heavy, stagnant"
9"Rory swallowed hard, throat dry."
10"Her fingers tightened around the"
11"Nyx with eyes that glowed"
12"Isolde frowned, silver brows furrowing."
13"She gasped, head snapping up,"
14"Isolde's voice drifted off before"
15"Rory's voice, razor-edged and flat,"
16"The trees groaned as a"
17"A faint, shimmering distortion hung"
18"She reached a hesitant hand"
19"She stumbled, gasping."
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Hollow eye sockets, a lipless maw filled with thorny teeth, and an aura that meant nothing so much as intelligent evil."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She gasped (gasp)"
1"Rory declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.286
81.9626%