Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF3J37WCTMQFCEZ8PKMWTS

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.001004
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's boots echoed in the hollow chamber of the disused Tube station, each step deliberate despite the urgency in her chest. The beam from her flashlight carved a path through the darkness, illuminating decades of accumulated dust and the occasional glint of something discarded. At 16:47, according to the worn leather watch on her left wrist, the previous call from SPI had reported an "unusual occurrence." Unusual for SPI typically meant illegal supernatural activity, which now fell under her purview—unofficially, at least. Military precision had been drilled into Quinn from her years in the force, and she didn't deviate from it now. Her sharp jaw was set as she surveyed the scene, brown eyes missing nothing. The shaft was eerily silent, the usual damp London Underground atmosphere contaminated by something else—a faint metallic tang in the air that had nothing to do with stale water. Her partner—for the duration of this case, at least—stood near the partially collapsed tunnel wall. Eva Kowalski, with her curly red hair escaping from a practical bun and round glasses reflecting the harsh police lighting, was examining a series of symbols etched into the crumbling bricks. She looked up as Quinn approached, tucking a strand of hair nervously behind her left ear. "Detective Quinn," Eva said, her voice containing the academic precision Quinn had come to expect but still found unnerving. "I've completed my preliminary examination." Quinn nodded, her bearing straight as she considered the crime scene. Or what she assumed was a crime scene. The Veil Market had been reported to be meeting here tonight, according to an anonymous tip. This was the first time Quinn had had the opportunity to examine the legendary market in person, though she'd documented too many petty supernatural crimes to count that had originated from it. The chamber was larger than typical Tube stations, with arched ceilings caught in the dark shadows. Steel support beams were visible where the market's organizers had clearly reinforced parts of the structure. MV72 was stenciled on a wall, but Quinn knew this station had been decommissioned for decades. Not just abandoned, but hidden—like so many things that operated outside normal human awareness. "Walk me through it, Kowalski," Quinn said, her voice cutting through the silence. "What are we looking at?" Eva adjusted her glasses before gesturing toward the wall. "These symbols appear to be protective wards, designed to prevent entry by creatures of shadow. They're relatively crude but effective. Beneath that archway"—she pointed—"there's evidence of recent commerce. Considerable evidence, in fact." Quinn moved forward, her boots crunching on debris. Eva was right. The floor near the archway was unusually clean, despite the surrounding grime. Scuff marks surrounded a fairly large clear area, as if something had been set up and taken down recently. "There should be more blood," Quinn said, kneeling to examine a faint discoloration on the cement. "The report mentioned injuries. At least three people reported needing medical attention before fleeing the scene." Eva nodded, crouching beside her. "That's the inconsistency I noted in my preliminary report. The wounds were superficial based on witness accounts, yet an enormous amount of blood residue was found in multiple locations throughout this chamber. The inconsistencies between evidence and testimony are statistically improbable." Quinn's mind worked methodically, filing away the details. She pulled out evidence bags and began collecting samples—not from where the blood was most visible, but from the perimeter. "They're trying to mislead us. Intentionally. That much blood in this distribution pattern would be impossible unless they were bleeding out from multiple, major injuries while mobile. And we have only minor injuries reported." "Exactly," Eva agreed, her curiosity evident in her intense green eyes. "Which suggests either the witnesses are lying, which is unlikely given their credibility profiles, or the injuries occurred differently than described." As they moved through the main chamber, Quinn observed something else: footprints leading to and from the supposedly "main" part of the market, following the blood trail. But here, in this side alcove, were different prints—small, deliberately placed, as if someone had been watching. A map fragment lay half-buried under years of dust, weathered but legible. It showed tunnels extending beyond the map of London that Quinn knew. Her fingers, calloused from handling evidence bags, traced the lines. This wasn't just a market—they were accessing something deeper, something older, beneath the city. "Detective Quinn," Eva said, drawing near, "there's something else you should see." Following Eva to the far end of the chamber, Quinn shined her light on an indentation in the floor, about two feet square. It looked recently disturbed. Nearby was a small metal object, partially covered by debris. As Quinn knelt, her flashlight beam revealed a small brass compass with verdigris patina and sigils etched on its face. "I know this," Quinn said, recognizing the object from SPI's surveillance photos. "A Veil Compass. Used to locate supernatural rifts or portals. But what's it doing here?" "It was left behind," Eva replied, examining it with professional curiosity. "The question is whether it was dropped or placed deliberately." Quinn's mind raced, connecting threads. The compass, the strange blood distribution, the protective wards that were active—it all suggested something wasn't right at the market tonight. Something unexpected had happened. She stood, her military bearing straightening as she took command of the scene. "We have two semimained no one is informing of every change, which works well here." "Yes," Eva nodded, slightly hesitant. "The reports suggest otherwise. It appears something went wrong tonight—something the organizers didn't anticipate." Quinn's expression hardened. "They've been operating with impunity for far too long. Tonight was our chance to get inside, and they've made a mess of it." As she looked around the abandoned station, Quinn realized something else—the veiled market had been compromised, and whatever was happening here was more than just commerce. This was about control, access to something deeper, something ancient that lay beneath London's streets. And whoever was behind it had made mistakes—which was the only reason Quinn and Eva were here at all. "We need to process everything," Quinn said, her voice low but heads. "Every footprint, every sample. We need to know who was here, what happened, and what they were trying to access before we were interrupted." Eva nodded, returning to her work with professional determination. Quinn watched her for a moment, the curvy red-haired researcher with her leather satchel full of books and her perpetual nervous habit of tucking her hair behind her ear. They made an unlikely pair, the decorated detective with eighteen years on the force and the academic specializing in anomalous histories, but she couldn't deny the value of having expertise in both aspects of this world. Something important was buried in these ruins, something that would lead to answers about the Veil Market and its operations. The inconsistencies in the evidence, the strange placement of items, the strangely distributed blood—it all told a story, and Quinn was determined to read it correctly. Her watch showed 17:23. She needed to expedite this operation before whoever ran this operation returned, cleaned up, or simply moved to their next location, as was their custom. In the shadows of the abandoned station, another mystery was unfolding, and this time, Quinn intended to see it through—regardless of what it revealed or whom it threatened.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:18:56.498Z" 5/27/2026, 10:18:56 AM
model"thedrummer/cydonia-24b-v4.1"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency232
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time33548
tokens_prompt923
tokens_completion2021
native_tokens_prompt875
native_tokens_completion1584
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached336
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier(null)
usage0.0010041
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"4d46db86-63fe-47eb-85f1-6a7567af190c"
id"chatcmpl-617dd5fbdfd240fa89c1e4d6eae9ae2a"
is_byokfalse
latency232
model_permaslug"thedrummer/cydonia-24b-v4.1"
provider_name"Parasail"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.15.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1779877136-bmt6z1ZTYHp0qRBsSnXM"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1779877136-IIGGIlT631obMgWEiYGV"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-617dd5fbdfd240fa89c1e4d6eae9ae2a"
total_cost0.0010041
cache_discount0.0000504
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Parasail"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva nodded slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.083
83.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"structure"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"glint"
2"etched"
3"structure"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"raced"
7"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount937
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn24
Tube2
Unusual1
London3
Underground1
Kowalski1
Veil2
Market2
Eva12
Following1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
5"Following"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.219
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
36.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.639
wordCount1220
matches
0"Not just abandoned, but hidden"
1"not from where the blood was most visible, but from the perimeter"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
82.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean42.07
std18.45
cv0.438
sampleLengths
084
163
262
324
467
562
618
741
842
932
1046
1162
1232
1344
1448
1512
1657
1727
1821
1930
2028
2119
2226
2360
2436
2574
2646
2729
2828
70.75% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences61
matches
0"been drilled"
1"been reported"
2"was stenciled"
3"been decommissioned"
4"been compromised"
5"was buried"
6"was determined"
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was examining"
1"were accessing"
2"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences73
ratio0.178
matches
0"At 16:47, according to the worn leather watch on her left wrist, the previous call from SPI had reported an \"unusual occurrence.\" Unusual for SPI typically meant illegal supernatural activity, which now fell under her purview—unofficially, at least."
1"The shaft was eerily silent, the usual damp London Underground atmosphere contaminated by something else—a faint metallic tang in the air that had nothing to do with stale water."
2"Her partner—for the duration of this case, at least—stood near the partially collapsed tunnel wall."
3"Not just abandoned, but hidden—like so many things that operated outside normal human awareness."
4"\"These symbols appear to be protective wards, designed to prevent entry by creatures of shadow. They're relatively crude but effective. Beneath that archway\"—she pointed—\"there's evidence of recent commerce. Considerable evidence, in fact.\""
5"She pulled out evidence bags and began collecting samples—not from where the blood was most visible, but from the perimeter."
6"But here, in this side alcove, were different prints—small, deliberately placed, as if someone had been watching."
7"This wasn't just a market—they were accessing something deeper, something older, beneath the city."
8"The compass, the strange blood distribution, the protective wards that were active—it all suggested something wasn't right at the market tonight."
9"As she looked around the abandoned station, Quinn realized something else—the veiled market had been compromised, and whatever was happening here was more than just commerce."
10"And whoever was behind it had made mistakes—which was the only reason Quinn and Eva were here at all."
11"The inconsistencies in the evidence, the strange placement of items, the strangely distributed blood—it all told a story, and Quinn was determined to read it correctly."
12"In the shadows of the abandoned station, another mystery was unfolding, and this time, Quinn intended to see it through—regardless of what it revealed or whom it threatened."
93.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount590
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"many petty supernatural crimes"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03728813559322034
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.020338983050847456
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean16.71
std8.91
cv0.533
sampleLengths
023
123
238
320
414
529
615
731
816
919
105
1111
128
1316
1432
1516
1616
1716
1814
1913
205
219
2232
238
243
2512
2619
2716
2816
295
3041
318
3220
3334
3411
3521
3627
3717
3812
3912
4010
4114
4212
4323
444
4510
4620
4712
4815
4911
79.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4794520547945205
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her sharp jaw was set"
1"Her partner—for the duration of"
2"She looked up as Quinn"
3"she pointed—\"there's evidence of recent"
4"She pulled out evidence bags"
5"It showed tunnels extending beyond"
6"Her fingers, calloused from handling"
7"It looked recently disturbed."
8"She stood, her military bearing"
9"They made an unlikely pair,"
10"Her watch showed 17:23."
11"She needed to expedite this"
ratio0.197
50.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences61
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots echoed"
1"The beam from her flashlight"
2"Military precision had been drilled"
3"Her sharp jaw was set"
4"The shaft was eerily silent,"
5"Her partner—for the duration of"
6"Eva Kowalski, with her curly"
7"She looked up as Quinn"
8"Eva said, her voice containing"
9"Quinn nodded, her bearing straight"
10"The Veil Market had been"
11"This was the first time"
12"The chamber was larger than"
13"Steel support beams were visible"
14"MV72 was stenciled on a"
15"Quinn said, her voice cutting"
16"Eva adjusted her glasses before"
17"she pointed—\"there's evidence of recent"
18"Quinn moved forward, her boots"
19"Eva was right."
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The shaft was eerily silent, the usual damp London Underground atmosphere contaminated by something else—a faint metallic tang in the air that had nothing to do…"
1"Not just abandoned, but hidden—like so many things that operated outside normal human awareness."
2"Scuff marks surrounded a fairly large clear area, as if something had been set up and taken down recently."
3"But here, in this side alcove, were different prints—small, deliberately placed, as if someone had been watching."
4"The compass, the strange blood distribution, the protective wards that were active—it all suggested something wasn't right at the market tonight."
5"Something important was buried in these ruins, something that would lead to answers about the Veil Market and its operations."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice cutting through the silence"
1"Quinn said, kneeling to examine a faint discoloration on the cement"
2"Eva agreed, her curiosity evident in her intense green eyes"
3"Quinn said, her voice low but heads"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.083
71.8963%