Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF531F2JNGNM239BE8NE31

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27.6s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed through the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest, the warmth from the interior enveloping her as she stepped from the London drizzle. The bar was exactly as she remembered—a sanctuary of shadows and history, with its worn leather booths, oak woodwalnut bar top, and the faint smell of aged whiskey and polished brass. Her eyes scanned the room instinctively, taking in the familiar chaos of Soho nightlife mixed with the quiet dignity that Silas imbued in every corner of his establishment. "Well, look what the cat dragged in." The voice stopped her cold. Thoroughly. In her tracks. Not from its sound, but from the weight it carried. Twenty years dropped away as she turned, her bright blue eyes fixing on the man sitting in the corner booth, shadows playing across his angular features. He looked different—harder, somehow. The softness of youth had been honed into sharp edges of experience and something else, something unreadable in the way his dark eyes held hers. "Aiden." His name left her lips without conscious thought, like a breath held too long finally escaping. She hadn't spoken his name in more than five years, not since the call, not since the funeral. Not since he had disappeared without so much as a goodbye. "You've changed," he said, his eyes drinking her in slowly, deliberately. She knew what he was seeing—shoulder-length black hair where she'd once had frizzy, spiraled curls; the confident set of her shoulders where she'd been hunched and scared. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, gleaming in the low light, was the only constant between then and now. "And you haven't," she replied, moving toward him with measured steps. Her heart thrummed against her ribs, but her expression remained carefully neutral. So much for coming to the Raven's Nest for a break from the Yu-Fei Cheung delivery route. So much for a quiet drink before climbing up to her flat above the bar. "I did, actually," he said, a hint of the old sarcasm flickering across his mouth. He leaned back in the booth, stretching his arm along the back in a way that instantly set her nerves on edge. "Just not in ways you can see." She slid into the booth across from him, the worn leather cradling her awkwardly. Silas was nowhere to be seen, but she caught the flicker of recognition in the eyes of the bartender—new, probably a university student saving money through the semester. "He's in the back," Aiden said, following her gaze. "Always with the books, that one. Same old, same old." Aurora clasped her hands together on the table, the cool surface belying the warmth of her skin beneath. "So you've been keeping an eye on me, then?" Aiden's smile was slow, dangerous. "Would that surprise you, Rory?" She hated the way her stomach tightened at the nickname. Back in Cardiff, in another life entirely, that's what he'd called her. Always Rory, like she was precious, like she was his. Now it felt like an accusation. "What brings you to London?" she asked, the professional mask firmly in place now. "Thought you were living it up in Dubai or something?" "Developments," he said, leaning forward and steering her empty glass away from her fingertips. "Lots of them. In many areas." The subtext was deafening. Her job, her life, her choices. Everything he was with himself and hadn't been with her. "You mean with the oil business?" "Aurora." He shook his head slowly. "Still playing the part, aren't you? Little Rory, just a delivery driver now, isn't that right? Must be fulfilling." Her fingers curled around the edge of the table, her nails biting into the leather. The thing about Aiden had always been that he could see right through her, the way no one else could. Not even Silas, who thought he knew everything. "I'm running a freelance logistics operation," she said finally, choosing her words carefully. "Major clients, including Yu-Fei's Golden Empress. It pays well." "And it keeps you busy," he finished for her. "So you don't have time for old friends to pop back into your life." The rally boy crossed one leg over the other, his thigh brushing against the table between them with the casual intimacy of someone who still believed he had the right to such familiarities. Twenty years in Prague, he'd said, working with the petroleum companies, traveling, living. She'd heard the stories piecemeal over the years through mutual acquaintances who'd been distant enough that they didn't know just how strained things had become toward the end. "Some lives take unexpected turns," she said, her voice going soft. "Some people make choices that change things." Like you, her unspoken words hung in the air between them. Like me. Aiden's eyes darkened, the irises disappearing into shadow as he contemplated her. He reached across the table, his fingers skimming over the scar on her wrist—tracing it, as he had once traced everything about her. The contact sent a jolt through her that went straight to her bones, a current of the past rushing back in all at once. "I'm sorry," he said suddenly, his rough thumb brushing against the crescent moon of raised skin. "About everything. About leaving like that." Aurora exhaled slowly, watching their skin touch—his dark against her pale. So much had changed, and yet the simple fact of his presence, of him in London in Silas's bar, feeling startlingly right. "That was a long time ago, Aiden." "Not so long," he corrected gently. She looked up into his face, saw the years etched around his eyes, the lines at the corners of his mouth that hadn't been there before. Fifty-year-old grief and regret stared back at her, filled with the things they'd never said, the paths they'd never taken. And between them sat everything they had lost, and could never get back.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:19:46.618Z" 5/27/2026, 10:19:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"he corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.222
59.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"carefully"
3"suddenly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"firmly"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"sanctuary"
2"scanned"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
5"unreadable"
6"gleaming"
7"measured"
8"flicker"
9"stomach"
10"firmly"
11"unspoken"
12"tracing"
13"traced"
14"etched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords978
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount815
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aiden"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London2
Soho1
Silas4
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Aurora3
Cardiff1
Rory1
Aiden4
Prague1
Like2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Aurora"
5"Rory"
6"Aiden"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an accusation"
97.75% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.022
wordCount978
matches
0"Not from its sound, but from the weight it carried"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean31.55
std22.66
cv0.718
sampleLengths
084
17
274
31
445
558
655
744
842
919
1027
1110
1238
1324
1420
1520
166
1725
1843
1922
2023
2174
2218
2311
242
2559
2622
2733
287
296
3059
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"been honed"
1"been hunched"
96.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was deafening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences73
ratio0.082
matches
0"The bar was exactly as she remembered—a sanctuary of shadows and history, with its worn leather booths, oak woodwalnut bar top, and the faint smell of aged whiskey and polished brass."
1"He looked different—harder, somehow."
2"She knew what he was seeing—shoulder-length black hair where she'd once had frizzy, spiraled curls; the confident set of her shoulders where she'd been hunched and scared."
3"Silas was nowhere to be seen, but she caught the flicker of recognition in the eyes of the bartender—new, probably a university student saving money through the semester."
4"He reached across the table, his fingers skimming over the scar on her wrist—tracing it, as he had once traced everything about her."
5"Aurora exhaled slowly, watching their skin touch—his dark against her pale."
82.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05447941888619855
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.025423728813559324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean13.4
std7.76
cv0.579
sampleLengths
025
131
228
37
45
51
63
710
826
94
1025
111
1216
1318
1411
1511
1627
1720
1811
1912
2017
2115
2215
2322
247
2514
2628
279
2810
2918
309
315
325
3310
3412
3510
366
3714
3810
3914
406
414
426
4310
446
456
4619
4715
4820
498
73.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4657534246575342
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners34
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Always Rory, like she was"
ratio0.018
41.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her eyes scanned the room"
1"He looked different—harder, somehow."
2"His name left her lips"
3"She hadn't spoken his name"
4"he said, his eyes drinking"
5"She knew what he was"
6"she replied, moving toward him"
7"Her heart thrummed against her"
8"he said, a hint of"
9"He leaned back in the"
10"She slid into the booth"
11"She hated the way her"
12"she asked, the professional mask"
13"he said, leaning forward and"
14"Her job, her life, her"
15"He shook his head slowly"
16"Her fingers curled around the"
17"she said finally, choosing her"
18"he finished for her"
19"She'd heard the stories piecemeal"
ratio0.446
93.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences56
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the green"
1"The bar was exactly as"
2"Her eyes scanned the room"
3"The voice stopped her cold."
4"He looked different—harder, somehow."
5"The softness of youth had"
6"His name left her lips"
7"She hadn't spoken his name"
8"he said, his eyes drinking"
9"She knew what he was"
10"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
11"she replied, moving toward him"
12"Her heart thrummed against her"
13"he said, a hint of"
14"He leaned back in the"
15"She slid into the booth"
16"Silas was nowhere to be"
17"Aiden said, following her gaze"
18"Aurora clasped her hands together"
19"Aiden's smile was slow, dangerous."
ratio0.732
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now it felt like an"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd heard the stories piecemeal over the years through mutual acquaintances who'd been distant enough that they didn't know just how strained things had becom…"
1"She looked up into his face, saw the years etched around his eyes, the lines at the corners of his mouth that hadn't been there before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his eyes drinking her in slowly, deliberately"
1"he said, a hint of the old sarcasm flickering across his mouth"
2"she asked, the professional mask firmly in place now"
3"she said, her voice going soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he corrected gently (correct)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.074
78.9899%