Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF5N1XN0WKN06CCW2Q4TGK

Run Details

Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.001931
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to the flat on Brick Lane swung open. Aurora stood in the doorway, keys jangling from her hand. Her wavy black hair was mussed, flopping in her bright blue eyes. At the age of 25, she had a youthful energy about her, enhanced by the pivot from studying Pre-Law at Cardiff University to day work as a delivery person for a Chinese restaurant in London. "Eva?" Aurora called out, stepping inside the cramped one-bedroom flat. She scanned the room, noticing the extensive clutter of books and scrolls scattered across every surface. A card table was tucked in the corner near the wall, littered with loose paper and a half-empty cup of tea. Aurora's childhood friend and current roommate, Eva, was nowhere to be seen. Instead, a figure emerged from the bedroom, tall and slender with sharply angled features. Ametrine sensation feels itchy in her skin. Platinum blonde hair fell across one eye, and heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locked onto her. "Lucien," Aurora said, stunned. She felt the full weight of history between them. Their last encounter, years ago, had ended messy and raw. Painful words exchanged that couldn't be taken back. Lucien's charcoal gray suit fit like a second skin, and a faint hint of vetiver cologne reached her, familiar and intoxicating. He leaned on an ivory-handled cane, a smirk playing at his lips. "What brings you here, Rory? You could have knocked," he said, his voice raspier than she remembered. Aurora crossed her arms, feeling exposed and vulnerable. "Eva let me have a spare key. I didn't realize I'd run into you here." "Eva couldn't resist giving me the creeps," he said, shaking his head. "Creeps?" "The cat. She named it Ptolemy after some dead philosopher." "Don't tell me he's scared of you now," Aurora said with a chuckle, relaxing at the memory. "Not a fan of demons, apparently. Can't blame him really, I'm stunning." "How long are you in town for, Lucien?" Aurora asked. He shrugged one shoulder. "Couple of months. A job." "Of course. The mysterious international fixer," Aurora said. "Still speaking seven languages and flitting between dimensions, I presume?" Lucien let out a soft laugh, a warm sound that carried a faint accent. "Four, but who's counting? Does it bother you, my work?" "I don't know," Aurora said quietly. "That's not what bothers me." Lucien watched her, his black and amber eyes intense and unknowable. "I got the sense our last chat left a bad taste in your mouth." "A bad taste?" Indignation flared through her, banked down by a whirlwind of conflicting emotions. "You broke my heart, Lucien. We were happy, were we not? I loved you, and you streed me like yesterday's mmcarb." "You were 19," Lucien said, his jaw tightening. "I was 27. Too old for tumbling, for dancing, for joking. Too tired, and so weary of life." "How naive of you to think I wasn't either," Aurora protested. "You didn't know yourself. You didn't need to go chasing famous and sexy. It only looked that way when you ran back to your rich and famous gaming party with your own socks"- "...eval." "You didn't push me to say anything more than an apartment-mate think." "That's who - you wish you're just a foot out of college. You didn't push me to say anything more than an apartment-mate think." "That's who - you didn't actually believe you'd actually thought about huhu mentorship?" "It wasn't a mentorship," Aurora said, feeling heat flood her cheeks. "Not that kind." Lucien strode over to her, the span of the room disappearing in a few steps. He stood close, and even after all these years, she felt the heat of his body. "Another bad decision in a string of many," he said, his voice low. "I should have stayed the night, woken up next to you in the morning, plotting to convince you to get drunk with me to skip even more classes. Conceptualize face-to-face-chat; You needed a break, Rory. Not another curse." Aurora didn't know what to say. Tears pricked her eyes, but she blinked them away. She'd cried enough over Lucien. "I needed you," she whispered. "But you weren't there. So I threw myself into work, buried myself in any distraction I could find. I'm not that girl anymore, Lucien. I know what I want." "And what is it you think you want, ma belle?" Lucien murmured, leaning closer. His breath warmed her lips. Aurora's heart hammered in her chest. Familiar need swelled, along with painful longing. She ignored everything he said. "I still miss you. Every day. Even after all this time." Lucien's eyes flared, a flash of something fierce and hungry in their depths. Then he closed the distance, his lips claiming hers in a kiss that tasted of alchemy. Liquid fire burned through her veins, setting every nerve alive. She clenched her fingers in his crisp black button-down, drawing him impossibly closer. Lucien's hands slid into her hair, tilting her head as he deepened the kiss. He nipped at her lower lip, drawing it into his mouth and soothing it with his tongue before delving inside, tasting and teasing. Aurora lost herself in him, in the strength of his arms around her, the press of his lips, the heat of need unspoken between them. She wanted to crawl inside his skin. Wanted to lose every sharp memory and replace it with touch. They separated only for her to draw her shirt up, toss it to the ground. Lucien made quick work of his own shirt, revealing the lean, chiseled planes of his chest. Stars shone along his spine, an array of constellations she remembered tracing with her fingers. Aurora's breath caught when his gaze raked over her, taking in her curves. The panties she wore clung to her figure like a film of light, and gradually he lowered his head. Hot breath ghosted across her navel, and she shivered. "Lucien, please," Aurora whispered. He gazed up at her, eyes glittering with malice. "Please what, ma chérie? Please what?" His lips brushed her belly, her ribs. He darted his tongue in her navel, tugging at her waistband before drawing them down her legs. Aurora stepped out of them, then reached for his belt, freeing him from his trousers. He snaked an arm around her waist, pulling her flush against him. Auroraspotted the plush carpet of the living room in a haze of darkness and skin. She gasped as Lucien rolled them over. He slid her body forward, the blunt head of his cock nudging her entrance as she dulled in. He filled her in one slow, powerful thrust. Aurora gasped, arching her back as he stretched her tight channel. His fingers long and lithe, his amber, black eyes betrayed lust and something hotter, searing through her with every deep, rolling thrust. Lucien pressed swift, hard, moving them on with her thrust, stealing the breath from her lips, making it feel like a drug slipping from her skin into his. Aurora wrapped her legs around his waist, drawing him deeper. Leaning down, Lucien captured her lips in a searing kiss, swallowing her moans. His fingers sank into the meat of her thighs, nails leaving light marks. His thrusts grew harder, more urgent, driving into her sweet spot with pinpoint accuracy. Pleasure coiled tighter and tighter, a building pressure that threatened to shatter her. Aurora teetered on the brink, trembling on the edge. Lucien released her lips, his amber eye smoldering with lust. "Come for me, Rory. I want to feel you come apart in my arms." Those words pushed her over. Aurora fragmented into a thousand pieces, convulsing in ecstasy. Lucien followed a moment later, lunging his tongue deep inside her one final time before pulling out, shedding his climax across her stomach in thick, pearly ropes. They collapsed onto the cushions, gasping for air. Lucien dragged a hand over his face before pulling Aurora close, tucking her head under his chin. She inhaled the scent of him - sweat, sex, and vetiver cologne. "I didn't expect you to be scared," Aurora murmured, tracing abstract patterns across his bare chest. Lucien's fingers threaded through her hair, tugging gently. "Sometimes I forget I don't need to be. I don't know how to let anyone in, Rory. But I know I never should've left." Aurora rolled over, straddling his hips. "So don't." She leaned down, pressing a soft kiss to his lips. "Don't leave me, Lucien. Stay with me, always." Lucien's arms encircled her waist, holding tight. "No más, mi bella. No mercy." Aurora smiled against his mouth. Ten days could be a lifetime.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:20:05.067Z" 5/27/2026, 10:20:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.048
89.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"encounter"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"delving"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count2
9
word"searing"
count2
10
word"fragmented"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"encounter"
3"familiar"
4"dancing"
5"depths"
6"delving"
7"unspoken"
8"tracing"
9"searing"
10"fragmented"
11"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1443
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1006
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Pre-Law1
Cardiff1
University1
Chinese1
London1
Eva1
Aurora25
Lucien18
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.257
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1443
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean27.23
std15.44
cv0.567
sampleLengths
067
147
233
319
431
533
617
723
812
91
1010
1117
1212
1310
149
1518
1624
1711
1825
1936
2026
2111
2234
2312
2424
2513
2614
2731
2851
2920
3034
3119
3229
3339
3450
3543
3646
3741
384
3915
4039
4152
4269
4350
4422
4524
4641
4737
4816
4932
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"was mussed"
1"was tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
68.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences115
ratio0.026
matches
0"Platinum blonde hair fell across one eye, and heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locked onto her."
1"\"I should have stayed the night, woken up next to you in the morning, plotting to convince you to get drunk with me to skip even more classes. Conceptualize face-to-face-chat; You needed a break, Rory. Not another curse.\""
2"She inhaled the scent of him - sweat, sex, and vetiver cologne."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016865079365079364
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007936507936507936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.55
std6.73
cv0.537
sampleLengths
010
110
212
335
410
516
621
712
814
97
1019
114
129
1310
148
1521
1612
1717
188
1915
2012
211
2210
2317
2412
2510
264
275
288
2910
3014
3110
326
335
3411
3514
3615
3721
388
3918
4011
4134
4212
4324
4413
4511
463
4715
4816
4913
65.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4260869565217391
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners49
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Instead, a figure emerged from"
1"Then he closed the distance,"
ratio0.023
80.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her wavy black hair was"
1"She scanned the room, noticing"
2"She felt the full weight"
3"Their last encounter, years ago,"
4"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
5"he said, his voice raspier"
6"he said, shaking his head"
7"He shrugged one shoulder."
8"He stood close, and even"
9"he said, his voice low"
10"She'd cried enough over Lucien."
11"His breath warmed her lips."
12"She ignored everything he said."
13"She clenched her fingers in"
14"He nipped at her lower"
15"She wanted to crawl inside"
16"They separated only for her"
17"He gazed up at her,"
18"His lips brushed her belly,"
19"He darted his tongue in"
ratio0.349
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The door to the flat"
1"Aurora stood in the doorway,"
2"Her wavy black hair was"
3"Aurora called out, stepping inside"
4"She scanned the room, noticing"
5"A card table was tucked"
6"Aurora's childhood friend and current"
7"Ametrine sensation feels itchy in"
8"Platinum blonde hair fell across"
9"Aurora said, stunned"
10"She felt the full weight"
11"Their last encounter, years ago,"
12"Lucien's charcoal gray suit fit"
13"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
14"he said, his voice raspier"
15"Aurora crossed her arms, feeling"
16"he said, shaking his head"
17"Aurora said with a chuckle,"
18"He shrugged one shoulder."
19"Lucien let out a soft"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Then he closed the distance, his lips claiming hers in a kiss that tasted of alchemy."
1"He darted his tongue in her navel, tugging at her waistband before drawing them down her legs."
2"Lucien pressed swift, hard, moving them on with her thrust, stealing the breath from her lips, making it feel like a drug slipping from her skin into his."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora said, stunned"
1"he said, his voice raspier than she remembered"
2"Lucien said, his jaw tightening"
3"he said, his voice low"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora called out (call out)"
1"Aurora protested (protest)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
4"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
5"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.286
79.4998%