Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF5N4JEVJKXF4K6CVKE0ZH

Run Details

Duration:
4.6s
Cost:
$0.000549
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Grove, vampires, and the Heartstone... If Rory had known, she would never have come. She was more than convinced. Her skin crawled and her heart pounded in her chest as she pushed deeper into the center of Richmond Park, even as the last blue light of the sun disappeared from the sky, taking the Avery's Grove, with it. The ancient oak standing stones rose up to her left and right, their twisted, twisted branches fencing her in like prison bars. Each tree looked like a massive, gnarled spider, bent and waiting. Eloise's Glover Cove... Hitler SwaNcock... The elderly gent was right. This was a nightmare place. At the center of the Grove, the bulbous bulges of the trees twisted, forming shapes... A woman.. "Keen." The warning pulsed in her head. Rory froze in place, her heart skittering. Eyes opened just in front of her, glowing an incandescent white. The woman's mouth split into a grin. Rory stumbled back, lifting her hands to shield herself... as if she could shield herself from whatever this was.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:20:05.153Z" 5/27/2026, 10:20:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount175
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount175
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences18
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences18
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences18
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount174
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove3
Heartstone1
Rory3
Richmond1
Park1
Avery1
Glover1
Cove1
SwaNcock1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Avery"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Glover"
3"Cove"
globalScore0.638
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences12
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a massive, gnarled spider, be"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount175
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences18
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs7
mean25
std18.83
cv0.753
sampleLengths
059
148
217
37
47
518
619
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences18
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs29
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount174
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.022988505747126436
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005747126436781609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences18
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences18
mean9.72
std8.52
cv0.877
sampleLengths
06
19
25
339
422
511
63
72
85
95
1015
112
127
137
1411
157
169
1710
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7777777777777778
totalSentences18
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences16
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount2
totalSentences16
matches
0"She was more than convinced."
1"Her skin crawled and her"
ratio0.125
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount13
totalSentences16
matches
0"The Grove, vampires, and the"
1"She was more than convinced."
2"Her skin crawled and her"
3"The ancient oak standing stones"
4"Each tree looked like a"
5"Eloise's Glover Cove..."
6"The elderly gent was right."
7"This was a nightmare place."
8"The warning pulsed in her"
9"Rory froze in place, her"
10"Eyes opened just in front"
11"The woman's mouth split into"
12"Rory stumbled back, lifting her"
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences16
matches
0"If Rory had known, she"
1"as if she could shield"
ratio0.125
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences6
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.6324%