Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF6BVQGAVSQ465YS17FMKH

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Duration:
17.9s
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$0.000994
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora opened the door to her flat, not expecting the tall, platinum-blond figure standing there in a perfectly tailored charcoal suit. For a moment, she almost closed the door again, overwhelmed by the encounter. But then his heterochromatic eyes— one amber, one black—met hers, and she knew she couldn't run from this. "Lucien?" she said, disbelief lacing her voice. "What are you doing here?" He smiled, a charming but slightly predatory smile. "Aurora. It's been awhile." She stepped aside reluctantly, motioning for him to enter. As he did, she caught a whiff of his distinctive scent—leather, smoke, and some spicy note she couldn't quite place. It sparked memories, both good and bad. Ptolemy, her fluffy tabby cat, slinked over to investigate the newcomer. Lucien crouched down and held out a hand for the cat to sniff. Ptolemy obligingly rubbed against his legs, a traitorous purr rumbling in his chest. "I wasn't expecting company," Aurora said, eyeing Lucien's immaculate appearance. Her own black hair was a tangled mess, and she'd thrown on the first set of ratty sweats and t-shirt she could find when the doorbell rang. He straightened up, amber eye sparkling with amusement. "No harm in a little spontaneous visit, is there? Especially between old...friends." The way he emphasized the last word made her shoulders tense. They were nothing close to friends, hadn't been for years. Naming themselves was a mistake, gotten too close, and now... "Well, I'm not your friend," she snapped, crossing her arms. "I was expecting someone else. Not you." He shrugged. "I'm here now. Guess the gods had other plans." Aurora studied him for a long moment, trying to read the unreadable expression on his face. That same damned unreadable expression that used to drive her up the wall. Lucien took a step closer, invading her space, filling it. "You look...good, Rory. Very good." She swallowed, hating the way her name felt on his tongue. How it made her remember... "Don't call me that," she said sharply. "Only my true friends get to use that name, and you...you aren't one of those." "Fair enough." He raised his hands in surrender, but the predatory smile never left his face. "I find myself in a bit of a bind, Aurora. And you're the only one I thought I could turn to." She looked away, jaw tight. "I doubt that very much. Not based on what went down last time." Later that day, he followed through on his request, opening up about the state of being. The difficult situations he'd been in. As the night dimmed to a bloody red end, Lucien leaned in close, inches from her face. She could smell brandy on his breath, see the golden flecks in his amber eye. "I told you, you're my end game, Rory," he murmured, running a finger along her jaw. "You think I'm fooling around? With anyone else? Not a chance. It's only you for me. You and only you." Her heart stuttered in her chest. She wanted to believe him so badly. Wanted to melt into his touch, to give in to the painful history binding them together. But she couldn't forget. Couldn't move past the way he'd hurt her, had made her feel used and disposable. How she'd spent the past four years kicking herself for ever trusting a half-demon like him. Slowly, she turned her head away. "I think you should go, Mr. Moreau," she said quietly. Ptolemy meowed in agreement, almost as if he could sense the icy tension in the room. Lucien sighed, and when he spoke again, all traces of seduction were gone, his voice cold and flat and flat. "As you wish. But know this, Aurora," he replied, his voice was cold and emotionless. "We're not done. Not while Avaros still seethes in the abyss, not while the faerie queens' magic bleeds into the mortal realm. I'll see you again, one way or another. And next time, you won't be pushing me out your door. That's a promise."
created_at"2026-05-27T10:20:28.419Z" 5/27/2026, 10:20:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said sharply [sharply]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.211
47.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount669
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"reluctantly"
3"very"
4"sharply"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount669
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"encounter"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"encounter"
1"unreadable"
2"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches
0"see"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords667
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount474
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien5
Ptolemy3
Aurora3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.973
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount667
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean30.32
std15.98
cv0.527
sampleLengths
052
112
212
336
437
537
620
731
817
911
1029
1115
1216
1322
1437
1518
1654
1736
1829
1935
2032
2179
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs92
matches(empty)
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences54
ratio0.037
matches
0"But then his heterochromatic eyes— one amber, one black—met hers, and she knew she couldn't run from this."
1"As he did, she caught a whiff of his distinctive scent—leather, smoke, and some spicy note she couldn't quite place."
84.56% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount478
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"tall, platinum-blond figure"
1"same damned unreadable expression"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.043933054393305436
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.016736401673640166
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean12.35
std6.86
cv0.556
sampleLengths
021
113
218
37
45
58
64
79
820
97
1011
1113
1213
1310
1427
158
1612
1711
1810
1910
2010
217
222
239
2416
2513
2610
275
2811
295
307
3115
3216
3321
345
3513
3616
376
3817
3915
4016
4120
426
437
4416
454
4615
4716
486
4910
86.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5185185185185185
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners28
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Slowly, she turned her head"
ratio0.024
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences42
matches
0"she said, disbelief lacing her"
1"He smiled, a charming but"
2"She stepped aside reluctantly, motioning"
3"It sparked memories, both good"
4"Her own black hair was"
5"He straightened up, amber eye"
6"They were nothing close to"
7"she snapped, crossing her arms"
8"She swallowed, hating the way"
9"she said sharply"
10"He raised his hands in"
11"She looked away, jaw tight."
12"She could smell brandy on"
13"he murmured, running a finger"
14"Her heart stuttered in her"
15"She wanted to believe him"
16"she said quietly"
17"he replied, his voice was"
ratio0.429
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences42
matches
0"Aurora opened the door to"
1"she said, disbelief lacing her"
2"He smiled, a charming but"
3"She stepped aside reluctantly, motioning"
4"It sparked memories, both good"
5"Ptolemy, her fluffy tabby cat,"
6"Lucien crouched down and held"
7"Ptolemy obligingly rubbed against his"
8"Aurora said, eyeing Lucien's immaculate"
9"Her own black hair was"
10"He straightened up, amber eye"
11"The way he emphasized the"
12"They were nothing close to"
13"she snapped, crossing her arms"
14"Aurora studied him for a"
15"That same damned unreadable expression"
16"Lucien took a step closer,"
17"She swallowed, hating the way"
18"she said sharply"
19"He raised his hands in"
ratio0.714
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"That same damned unreadable expression that used to drive her up the wall."
1"Later that day, he followed through on his request, opening up about the state of being."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, disbelief lacing her voice"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.211
79.7683%