Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF7RRQW0BQASNJY3NCXKA4

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32.8s
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$0.001736
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory found herself staring at the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest, its jazzy music spilling out onto the London street in a swirl of smoke and laughter. It had been years since she last visited Silas' bar - too many, a fact she felt keenly as she pushed open the heavy wooden door and stepped inside. The scent of whiskey and cigar smoke hit her like a distant memory. Rory breathed it in deeply, letting it wash over her. She scanned the dimly lit room, her eyes flicking from face to dimly lit face. Her gaze landed on a man hunched over the mahogany bar, hazel eyes focused intently on the glass he was turning in his Palm. A startled laugh burst from her chest. "Silas!" His head jerked up, lock jaw going slack. A flash of surprise crossed his craggy features as his gaze met hers. "Rory?" The familiar husk of Silas' voice was the same, but there was a weariness in his eyes that hadn't been there before. Rory moved to intercept him as he came around the bar. He looked older, the grey flecking his auburn hair more pronounced. Too many damn years, Silas thought as he watched Rory approach, the remembered "Whiskey-Jack" detonating his senses before she even opened her mouth. But she appeared womanly, in both body and bearing- threads of worry and weather had left their mark, yet retained a glacial allure that made his heart constrict. Making quick work of the space between them, he pulled her into a tight embrace, feeling the familiar warmth of her body against his. "Jesus, girl. It's been too bloody long," he murmured into her hair. Rory stepped back, looking up at him with a wry smile. "You're telling me. Last time I saw you, I was still a stick-in-the-mud pre-law student." Silas chuckled, the sound rumbling in his chest. "And now look at you. A walking contradiction, much like myself." He gestured to the seat beside him at the bar. "Sit. Drink?" Aurora nodded, sliding onto the worn wooden stool. Silas poured her a generosity whiskey and settled back beside her, one elbow braced on the bar. She sipped the amber liquid, savoring the familiar burn. "So, you're a bar owner now? Retirement suits you, Silas. Though, I must admit, I expected something more...polished." "Ah, Rory." Silas' lips quirked upward. "I've never been a man for polish. Just ask your father." He raised his own glass in a silent toast. Rory snorted, finishing her whiskey in one bold gulp. "If you must know, he almost discharged me from his firm after I followed you into the world of grey Morocco." "Almost," Silas emphasized, arching a brow. "But not quite. You've always been tenacious, Rory. Like a feral badger at times." "Oi! Bears!" Aurora laughed, raising her now empty glass. "But, fine, badgers it is." Silas chuckled, signaling for another round. The bartender obliged, fresh drinks appearing before them in a flash. "So, what brings you to the Nest, roy? I promise the delivery notes of a Chinese takeaway owner isn't the heart-pounding drama I'm used to." Aurora described her "glamorous" day job with a heavy dose of sardonic wit, her story punctuated by Silas's booming laughter. As the night wore on, the conversation shifted, growing more serious. "Tell me, Silas...do you ever wonder what would have happened if I hadn't torn myself from the web of my ex and fled to London?" She pushed the last of her drink aside, fingers tracing the worn edge of the bar. Silas stilled. The old wound flared, and a pang of guilt lanced his gut. "Variety strikes him in the aching joints." He paused, chewing on his lip as he struggled to find the right words. "Sometimes." "Sometimes," she echoed. She tapped her fingers on the counter, her look faraway. "Even more than that, I think about what my life would've looked like if I'd never left Welsh Hills." "Welsh Hills." Silas tested the weight of the words on his tongue, as if they were something rare. A bitter ache filled Rory as the weight of all those years, those silent heartbeats, mashed together. "I'll never forget the way the sun would set over the rolling green hills, Silas. How I'd wake up each morning with a sense of tangibility, like the whole world was stretched out before me. Everything is so...more here. Saturated colors, pounding music, late nights in bars with too much whiskey and too little light." "I get it Rory, I really do," Silas said, his voice rough as he squeezed his eyes shut at the thought of Rory's smile. "But there's a different kind of beauty in the calm, in the moments when everything is still and quiet." She smiled, just barely. She was one foot out the door into the world of Michael Channings, but there was still the slightest flicker of hope. "We're all searching for something, aren't we? Trying to find our place in a world that's constantly moving, constantly changing." "Round and round we go," Silas said. "But we never quite come out where we started." Rory shrugged, the strain of autumn caught in her throat. She hadn't meant to linger so, lost in the past, but she couldn't help herself. There was a strange beauty in the way everything had come full circle, in the way her story had taken her back to where she began. Silas straightened, eyeing her over the rim of his glass. "Cheers to that." Their glasses clinked, a medley of clashing truths and forgotten dreams. As the whiskey slid down their throats, Rory looked at Silas, really looked at him, for the first time in years. "I'm glad I found you again, Silas. It feels like coming home in a way." Something raw flashed in Silas' eyes, there and gone so fast she almost missed it. He reached out, his rough hand covering hers. "Home." He drank deep, the whiskey burning a familiar trail down his throat. "I think we both know that's a relative term, Rory." She nodded, a sad smile tugging at her lips. "Relative." She leaned back, tilting her head. "But still. It's good to be back. Even for a little while." Silas nodded, his own smile a mirror of hers. "Even for a little while." He refilled their glasses, and they clinked them together again. Rae and Alto, their drums...that ephemeral pulsing energy that always brought them back to this place, this moment. The conversation flowed easier then, the easy banter of old friends catching up on lost time. But beneath it all, there was a tension, a weight that neither could quite shake. The weight of everything left unsaid, the weight of the years that stretched out before them. Aurora looked into his eyes and saw the dark depths that haunted her own. And she knew, with a clarity that stole her breath, that this was what it was all about. Not the glossy promise of "-if onlys" or "what might-be's" but this. This moment, this man. This strange little slice of home that she had found, in the most unlikely of places. She leaned forward, pressing her forehead to his. "Thank you, Silas. For everything." He just nodded, his hand squeezing hers again. A moment lingered, stretched out, and they both knew. It didn't matter. Time slid away, sequel and look forward to future it could hear.. It was just them and the beating of hearts, standstill and euphoric.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:21:14.403Z" 5/27/2026, 10:21:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.895
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.053
92.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count2
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"pang"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count5
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"ephemeral"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"warmth"
3"pounding"
4"tracing"
5"pang"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"sense of"
9"flicker"
10"ephemeral"
11"tension"
12"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"a pang of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount833
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Palm1
Rory10
Silas13
Aurora4
Michael1
Channings1
Alto1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Michael"
5"Channings"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.72
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared womanly in both body and bearing- threads of worry and weather had left their mark, yet retained a glacial allure that made his heart constrict"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.799
wordCount1252
matches
0"Not the glossy promise of \"-if onlys\" or \"what might-be's\" but this"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean78.25
std150.67
cv1.925
sampleLengths
058
162
28
344
473
536
626
756
827
926
1030
1134
1217
1356
1441
15658
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences90
ratio0
matches(empty)
85.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount408
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.056372549019607844
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00980392156862745
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.91
std8.58
cv0.617
sampleLengths
029
129
213
310
415
524
67
71
88
913
1023
1111
1211
1323
1428
1524
1612
1711
1815
198
2021
212
228
2317
249
2518
266
2720
289
2921
306
3114
329
335
346
3511
3625
3720
3811
3941
402
4112
4221
431
443
4510
4619
4718
4817
4955
72.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4666666666666667
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners42
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Too many damn years, Silas"
ratio0.015
70.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences67
matches
0"It had been years since"
1"She scanned the dimly lit"
2"Her gaze landed on a"
3"His head jerked up, lock"
4"He looked older, the grey"
5"he murmured into her hair"
6"He gestured to the seat"
7"She sipped the amber liquid,"
8"He raised his own glass"
9"She pushed the last of"
10"He paused, chewing on his"
11"She tapped her fingers on"
12"She smiled, just barely."
13"She was one foot out"
14"She hadn't meant to linger"
15"Their glasses clinked, a medley"
16"He reached out, his rough"
17"He drank deep, the whiskey"
18"She nodded, a sad smile"
19"She leaned back, tilting her"
ratio0.373
27.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rory found herself staring at"
1"It had been years since"
2"The scent of whiskey and"
3"Rory breathed it in deeply,"
4"She scanned the dimly lit"
5"Her gaze landed on a"
6"A startled laugh burst from"
7"His head jerked up, lock"
8"A flash of surprise crossed"
9"The familiar husk of"
10"Rory moved to intercept him"
11"He looked older, the grey"
12"he murmured into her hair"
13"Rory stepped back, looking up"
14"Silas chuckled, the sound rumbling"
15"He gestured to the seat"
16"Aurora nodded, sliding onto the"
17"Silas poured her a generosity"
18"She sipped the amber liquid,"
19"He raised his own glass"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But she appeared womanly, in both body and bearing- threads of worry and weather had left their mark, yet retained a glacial allure that made his heart constric…"
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She pushed, fingers tracing the worn edge of the bar"
1"Silas tested, as if they were something rare"
2"Rory shrugged, the strain of autumn caught in her throat"
3"He drank, the whiskey burning a familiar trail down his throat"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
2"Aurora described (describe)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.158
81.4037%