| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 694 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 694 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "footfall" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "sinister" | | 15 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 697 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 590 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Standing | 1 | | Stones | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 3 | | Tracery | 1 | | Time | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Smoke | 1 | | Leshen | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Stones" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Time" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Smoke" | | 5 | "Leshen" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 697 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.68% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 26.81 | | std | 12.25 | | cv | 0.457 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "At first, the differences were slight - a vividness to the color, a crystalline clarity to the air." | | 1 | "Pluck a berry, red and ripe, and it crumbles between the fingers - never more than a phantom image." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 591 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.01692047377326565 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011844331641285956 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 9.17 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.706 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 75.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.5394736842105263 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the flicker, almost imperceptible." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "They descended into a hidden" | | 1 | "You don't look back." | | 2 | "She pressed on with increasing" | | 3 | "They had to move faster." | | 4 | "You soar becoming." |
| | ratio | 0.078 | |
| 77.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The Standing Stones loomed ominously," | | 1 | "Aurora murmured, gripping her Fae-forged" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized from the shadows," | | 3 | "Isolde glided between the weathered" | | 4 | "The space-time continuum blurred as" | | 5 | "Frontiers diffusing bewteen sight and" | | 6 | "Fey and Tracery of the" | | 7 | "Rory's heart pounded in a" | | 8 | "The trees towered, branches reaching" | | 9 | "Pluck a berry, red and" | | 10 | "Isolde tilted her head, listening" | | 11 | "A musical ghost." | | 12 | "The sense of peace was" | | 13 | "Hearts buried in husks of" | | 14 | "Tributes and the witching moon." | | 15 | "The glow of twilight." | | 16 | "Time has no common measure." | | 17 | "They descended into a hidden" | | 18 | "Rory felt the power, ancient" | | 19 | "Isolde smiled knowingly." |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde glided between the weathered oaks as if in a trance, her corn-silk hair rippling though there was no wind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Beautiful birdsong trilled, never more than ashes of sound" | | 1 | "Isolde spoke, voice crackling with power:" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Beautiful birdsong trilled (trill)" | | 2 | "Isolde spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |