Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMF93BHVBWX984QGCG60555

Run Details

Duration:
18.3s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart skipped as she swung open the door, and there stood Lucien, taller and broader than she remembered - also too damn good-looking, with his perfectly coiffed platinum hair and tailored charcoal suit. She gripped the door frame, knuckles white. "Well, fuck me. Look what the devil dragged in." Lucien's full lips curled upward, his heterochromatic gaze - one amber, one black - appraising her from head to toe. "Aurora. A pleasure, as always. Though I had the impression you'd be happier if you never laid eyes on me again." He stepped forward, and Aurora took an involuntary step back. Suddenly, it was as if all the air had been sucked out of the cramped flat. She could feel the heat of him, smell the leather of his coat, and the dark, intoxicating cedar scent that was uniquely his. "That's because the last time I saw you, you stood me up. Again." Her voice trembled. Lucien's eyes flashed, a hint of irritation crossing his otherwise impassive face. "Business intervened, as it tends to do in my line of work. But I'm here now, aren't I?" Aurora put a hand on her hip. "So you are. Ptolemy," she called out. Her tabby sauntered in from the bedroom and wound around Lucien's tailored trousers, purring loudly. Traitors, the both of them. "I didn't expect you to come herself," he murmured, nudging the cat away gently. "I thought for sure you'd send that bartender chappy again. Silas, was it?" "Silas is busy," Aurora said shortly. He wasn't, exactly, but Aurora hadn't been ready to face Lucien and had put him off for a whole week. But here he was, in the flesh, looking good enough to eat. A spark ignited within her despite everything, as it always did. "Besides, a lady asks for a visit from her ex-fiancé, she expects her ex-fiancé to show." "Is that why you look like you're about to faint, chérie?" His gaze softened. It was the only sign he gave that he wasn't as unaffected by their reunion as he tried to appear. Aurora crossed her arms, then uncrossed them, then crossed them again. She couldn't seem to still her body. "What do you want, Lucien? If you've come here to gloat about your success, I've already heard it from Silas. First-rate fixer, Da UN CHEVAU superstar, blah blah." Lucien took another step forward. Aurora held her ground, even as her pulse began to race. They were toe to toe now, close enough that she could see the stubble shadowing his chiseled jaw. "I'm here because it's time we had a certain conversation, Rory." The nickname alone made her go weak in the knees. "One we seem to be running out of plastic from." "Not me," Aurora said defiantly, though her voice sounded small. "Some things just can't be said, no matter whose face they're snuggled up to." "Even if I'm the one who poisons you?" Lucien breathed. He brought a hand up to her face, and Aurora trembled at his touch. "Rory, I know we left things -" "I left things!" Her words came out high and waspy. "I wasn't the one to disappear five weeks ago at the altar!" Lucien's eyes darkened, and he engulfed Aurora in an iron embrace. "I know, I know. But I wasn't the one to get cold feet." The raw pain in his voice made her heart wrench. Was that what he thought? That she'd cried off? "It wasn't cold feet." Aurora's eyes glistened with unshed tears. "It was a panic attack. Do you know how many people die on their wedding day? But I didn't want to burden you with that." Lucien stroked her hair, and Aurora melted into his touch. "You silly thing," he whispered. "Is that what you thought? Rory, you're the only burden I want to bear. The only one I want to wake up to for - my whole life." Aurora couldn't hold back the tears any longer. They spilled down her cheeks as Lucien pulled her in for a kiss, his lips warm and insistent against hers. She kissed him back with equal fervour, pouring all the pent up emotion, pain, and longing into it. "I love you," she whispered between kisses. "I never stopped loving you. I just - I didn't know how to tell you." Lucien smiled, braving the warm afterglow of the kiss. "Then let me tell you, Rory. Let me tell you every day for the rest of our lives. I love you, now and forever." And so they stood, in the threshold of Eva's cluttered flat, forgetting all the hurt and toil of the past and instead letting the promises and sacrifices of hope fill their hearts.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:21:58.014Z" 5/27/2026, 10:21:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora said shortly [shortly]"
1"Aurora said defiantly [defiantly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.148
80.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount783
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount783
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"race"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"trembled"
2"pulse"
3"race"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seem to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords788
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
9.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount463
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien11
Aurora13
Eva1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.096
windowScore0.333
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"it was as if all the air had been sucked out of the cramped flat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount788
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"gave that he"
70.78% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean34.26
std13.63
cv0.398
sampleLengths
041
19
241
349
416
530
634
727
865
934
1046
1134
1231
1324
1431
1522
1624
1719
1835
1943
2068
2133
2232
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"been sucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs85
matches(empty)
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences57
ratio0.035
matches
0"Aurora's heart skipped as she swung open the door, and there stood Lucien, taller and broader than she remembered - also too damn good-looking, with his perfectly coiffed platinum hair and tailored charcoal suit."
1"Lucien's full lips curled upward, his heterochromatic gaze - one amber, one black - appraising her from head to toe."
72.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount423
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.06382978723404255
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.028368794326241134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean13.82
std6.97
cv0.504
sampleLengths
034
17
29
320
421
510
616
723
816
912
1018
117
127
1315
145
1514
1613
176
1820
1912
2011
2116
2214
2320
2411
257
2628
275
2811
2918
3021
3110
3210
3314
3410
3514
367
3710
3812
3911
4013
4110
425
434
4410
4525
4610
475
4828
498
80.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5263157894736842
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners30
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Suddenly, it was as if"
ratio0.025
50.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences40
matches
0"She gripped the door frame,"
1"He stepped forward, and Aurora"
2"She could feel the heat"
3"Her voice trembled"
4"she called out"
5"Her tabby sauntered in from"
6"he murmured, nudging the cat"
7"He wasn't, exactly, but Aurora"
8"His gaze softened"
9"It was the only sign"
10"She couldn't seem to still"
11"They were toe to toe"
12"He brought a hand up"
13"Her words came out high"
14"They spilled down her cheeks"
15"She kissed him back with"
16"she whispered between kisses"
ratio0.425
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences40
matches
0"Aurora's heart skipped as she"
1"She gripped the door frame,"
2"Lucien's full lips curled upward,"
3"He stepped forward, and Aurora"
4"She could feel the heat"
5"Her voice trembled"
6"Lucien's eyes flashed, a hint"
7"Aurora put a hand on"
8"she called out"
9"Her tabby sauntered in from"
10"Traitors, the both of them."
11"he murmured, nudging the cat"
12"Aurora said shortly"
13"He wasn't, exactly, but Aurora"
14"A spark ignited within her"
15"His gaze softened"
16"It was the only sign"
17"Aurora crossed her arms, then"
18"She couldn't seem to still"
19"Lucien took another step forward."
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She could feel the heat of him, smell the leather of his coat, and the dark, intoxicating cedar scent that was uniquely his."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora said defiantly, though her voice sounded small"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien breathed (breathe)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.296
73.7412%