| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 95.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 62 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1171 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1022 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Grove | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Circular" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to arrive from no particular direction, as if the air itself had decided to confide in her" | | 1 | "as if studying her, then dipped twice, almost a bow, and rejoined the others" | | 2 | "felt like calling the sea a puddle" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.854 | | wordCount | 1171 | | matches | | 0 | "not stone at all, she realized as she came closer, but timber so ancient" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 36.59 | | std | 39.3 | | cv | 1.074 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 97 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 106 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 91 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 114 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 129 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 101 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 19 |
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| 88.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been recognized" | | 2 | "been built" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "were already forgetting" | | 1 | "were holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came up out of the bracken without warning, the way teeth break the gum line — sudden, pale, and older than anything had a right to be." | | 1 | "One step she'd been walking Richmond Park in the ordinary grey of a London afternoon, the distant grumble of the South Circular threading through the oaks, and the next the sound had simply — stopped." | | 2 | "The stones were oak — not stone at all, she realized as she came closer, but timber so ancient and weathered it had taken on the grey hardness of granite." | | 3 | "It was the first thing she noticed — that the grey was gone, and in its place was a low golden warmth that came from no sun she could find." | | 4 | "She glanced back at the line of her own steps and found nothing — no flattened blades, no marks at all, as if the Grove were already forgetting she'd passed." | | 5 | "Half the stories she'd heard about the seer ran through her head at once; she pushed them down." | | 6 | "Water, somewhere — a thin silver trickle she couldn't see." | | 7 | "Wind moving through leaves, except there was no wind; the air sat warm and still against her face while the canopy stirred overhead in a breeze that belonged to a different evening." | | 8 | "A cluster of luminous things drifted up from the flowers as she passed — she took them for fireflies until one paused in the air a hand's breadth from her face." | | 9 | "The clearing opened ahead into a hollow where a single tree grew — though calling it a tree felt like calling the sea a puddle." | | 10 | "But the cold weight at Rory's hip — the dagger Isolde had pressed into her hands the last time, moonsilver and always frigid against her thigh — had begun, faintly, to sing." | | 11 | "A wind that wasn't there moved through the blue leaves, and they rang — actually rang, a sound like distant bells underwater — and the single held note swelled to meet it, and for one dizzying moment the whole hollow seemed to lean inward, toward the empty chair, as if the Grove itself were holding its breath in anticipation of someone about to arrive." |
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| 97.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1012 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.042490118577075096 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008893280632411068 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 16.26 | | std | 12.91 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 86.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5416666666666666 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the light lifted away" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice was the thing" | | 1 | "She withdrew her hand and" | | 2 | "It was the first thing" | | 3 | "She gave up" | | 4 | "She glanced back at the" | | 5 | "It didn't rise or fall." | | 6 | "It simply held, and the" | | 7 | "It had no body." | | 8 | "It was a small clean" | | 9 | "They swirled around her in" | | 10 | "Its trunk was silver-barked and" | | 11 | "It was empty." |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 87.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came up" | | 1 | "Rory stopped so abruptly that" | | 2 | "Their voice was the thing" | | 3 | "The stones were oak —" | | 4 | "She withdrew her hand and" | | 5 | "The light changed." | | 6 | "It was the first thing" | | 7 | "The canopy overhead was thick" | | 8 | "Wildflowers grew everywhere, and they" | | 9 | "Things that should never share" | | 10 | "She gave up" | | 11 | "Nyx had taken solid form," | | 12 | "The faint violet of their" | | 13 | "A pause that felt deliberate" | | 14 | "Rory moved further in, and" | | 15 | "That was the second wrongness," | | 16 | "She glanced back at the" | | 17 | "The pendant against her sternum" | | 18 | "Whatever this place was, it" | | 19 | "That was something." |
| | ratio | 0.745 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "As though someone had closed" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The canopy overhead was thick and unbroken, yet the clearing beyond the stones glowed as though lit from somewhere just below the grass." | | 1 | "She glanced back at the line of her own steps and found nothing — no flattened blades, no marks at all, as if the Grove were already forgetting she'd passed." | | 2 | "Wind moving through leaves, except there was no wind; the air sat warm and still against her face while the canopy stirred overhead in a breeze that belonged to…" | | 3 | "Then the light lifted away and the chill came back, and she was left with the absurd feeling that she had just been recognized by something that had no eyes." | | 4 | "Its trunk was silver-barked and split into a dozen boles that wove together and apart like braided rope, and its leaves were the deep impossible blue of a sky j…" | | 5 | "Beneath it the year-round flowers fell away to bare, swept earth, pale as bone, and at the foot of the trunk sat a chair that had grown rather than been built, …" | | 6 | "A wind that wasn't there moved through the blue leaves, and they rang — actually rang, a sound like distant bells underwater — and the single held note swelled …" |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's whisper had, wary" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |