Run: 2026-05-29-01KSSJKX3GB648JXSTY7JNNXGN

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came again, sharper this time. Three quick raps that meant whoever stood on the other side wasn't leaving. Aurora pressed her eye to the peephole and her stomach dropped. Lucien Moreau. Charcoal suit immaculate as ever, ivory cane balanced against the doorframe, that infuriating half-smile already in place before she'd even unlatched a single bolt. She slid the first deadbolt back. Then the second. Her fingers hovered over the third. "I can hear you breathing, Rory." "That's Aurora to you." She opened the door but kept it wedged against her hip, body filling the gap. "You don't get to use the nickname." "My mistake." His mismatched eyes, one amber, one black as spilled ink, dropped to the tea towel slung over her shoulder, then climbed back to her face. "May I come in, or shall we conduct business where Eva's neighbours can enjoy it?" Behind her, Ptolemy wound figure-eights around her ankles, purring at a man he'd never met. Traitor. "There's no business between us. You made that clear in Marseille." "Marseille was complicated." "Marseille was you leaving me on a dock with a forged passport and a head full of questions." She kept her voice level. Years of watching her father in a courtroom had taught her that much: never let them see the wound. "So whatever you've come to sell, I'm not buying." He didn't push the door. That was the thing about Lucien. He never pushed. He waited, patient as rot, until you opened the way yourself. "I'm not selling anything." A pause. The cane tapped once against the worn step. "I came to warn you." She studied him. Looked for the tell, the flick of the eyes, the practised softening of the mouth that meant a lie was loading. She found none. That frightened her more than a hundred lies would have. She stepped back and let the door swing wide. The flat swallowed him whole. Eva's books rose in unsteady towers on every surface, scrolls spilling from a wicker basket by the radiator, sticky notes fringing the bookshelves like yellow moss. Lucien took it in with one slow sweep, and for a moment she saw the place through his eyes. Cramped. Cluttered. Hers, almost, in the way borrowed things become yours. "Charming," he said. "The curry downstairs lends it a certain... atmosphere." "You hated my old flat too." "I never hated it." He set his cane against the table, and she noticed he'd moved it from his right hand to his left. The hand that didn't favour the blade inside. A courtesy, or a calculation. With him you never knew. "I hated what kept you there." "Don't." The word came out before she could stop it. "You don't get to talk about Evan. You lost that right." Something crossed his face then, quick as a shadow over water. He lowered himself into Eva's reading chair, uninvited, and folded his hands over his knee. "Someone's asking after you in the lower markets," he said. "A buyer. Discreet. Deep pockets. Using a name I didn't recognise at first." His amber eye caught the lamplight. "Malphora." The tea towel slipped from her shoulder. She caught it against her thigh. "That name died in Avaros." "Names don't die. They get inherited. Sold. Worn like borrowed coats." He leaned forward. "Someone knows what you did down there, Aurora. Someone with enough coin to make the underworld interested in answering." She crossed the room, putting the table between them, the way she'd put the door between them moments ago. Habit. Self-defence dressed up as movement. "And you rode in to save me. How gallant." "I rode in because the last time I left you alone with a problem this size, it cost us both more than coin." His voice dropped, and the practised polish thinned to something rawer underneath. "I don't intend to make that error twice." The kettle clicked off in the kitchenette. Neither of them moved towards it. Ptolemy leapt onto the table and sat between them like a small striped referee. "You expect me to trust you," she said. "No." He almost smiled. "I expect you to be too clever not to use me." There it was. The Lucien she knew. Not asking for forgiveness, never that, but offering himself as a tool while pretending it was a gift. She hated how well it worked. Hated more the way her pulse had quickened the second she'd seen him through the glass, before her brain caught up to remind her what he'd done. "Why does it matter to you?" she asked. "Truly. Strip the theatre away and tell me." He was quiet long enough that she thought he wouldn't answer. His thumb moved over a chip in the chair's wooden arm, back and forth, the only restless thing about him. "Because in Marseille," he said, "I told myself leaving you was the clean thing. The professional thing. A fixer doesn't keep what he can't protect." His mismatched gaze lifted to hers and held. "I've found that lie harder to maintain than I expected." The air in the cramped room seemed to thicken. She gripped the table's edge. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight, pale against her skin, and she watched his eyes find it the way they always had, like it was a thing he'd memorised. "Don't," she said again, softer now. "You can't show up after eight months and say something like that and expect me to-" "I expect nothing." He rose. Slow. Careful, as though she were something that might startle and bolt. "I came to warn you. The rest is yours to do with as you please." He was close now. Too close. She could smell cedar and cold metal, the particular scent of him that her body remembered before her mind gave it permission. He reached past her, not for her, for his cane, and the brush of his sleeve against her arm sent a current through her she despised. "Lucien." He stilled. "Who's the buyer?" A pause. His mouth curved, but his eyes stayed serious. "That," he murmured, "is the question that will keep you alive. And the reason you're going to let me stay." Three sharp blows landed on the door behind them. Not knocks. Fists. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Lucien's hand closed around the ivory handle, and steel whispered free of the cane.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.049
95.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1067
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount727
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Years1
Lucien5
Eva2
Slow1
Three2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Slow"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.937
wordCount1067
matches
0"Not asking for forgiveness, never that, but offering himself as a tool while pretending it was a gift"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.2
std16.07
cv0.693
sampleLengths
020
111
226
315
46
526
642
716
811
93
1051
1125
1219
1337
149
1561
1611
176
1848
1921
2026
2130
2213
235
2433
2525
269
2743
2827
298
3015
3158
3216
3331
3443
3546
3622
3732
3854
391
402
413
4230
4312
445
4514
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs136
matches
0"wasn't leaving"
1"was loading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.031506849315068496
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013698630136986301
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.16
std7.85
cv0.772
sampleLengths
07
113
211
32
424
56
63
76
86
919
107
1127
1215
1315
141
1511
163
1723
1819
199
205
216
223
2311
246
258
265
273
2821
293
3010
319
325
3326
3419
351
361
379
383
398
406
4124
428
435
445
456
4610
4711
4811
4915
76.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners50
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.016
32.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences64
matches
0"She slid the first deadbolt"
1"Her fingers hovered over the"
2"She opened the door but"
3"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
4"She kept her voice level"
5"He didn't push the door."
6"He never pushed."
7"He waited, patient as rot,"
8"She studied him."
9"She found none."
10"She stepped back and let"
11"Hers, almost, in the way"
12"He set his cane against"
13"He lowered himself into Eva's"
14"His amber eye caught the"
15"She caught it against her"
16"He leaned forward"
17"She crossed the room, putting"
18"His voice dropped, and the"
19"He almost smiled"
ratio0.469
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"The knock came again, sharper"
1"Aurora pressed her eye to"
2"Charcoal suit immaculate as ever,"
3"She slid the first deadbolt"
4"Her fingers hovered over the"
5"She opened the door but"
6"His mismatched eyes, one amber,"
7"She kept her voice level"
8"Years of watching her father"
9"He didn't push the door."
10"That was the thing about"
11"He never pushed."
12"He waited, patient as rot,"
13"The cane tapped once against"
14"She studied him."
15"She found none."
16"That frightened her more than"
17"She stepped back and let"
18"The flat swallowed him whole."
19"Eva's books rose in unsteady"
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Looked for the tell, the flick of the eyes, the practised softening of the mouth that meant a lie was loading."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She opened, body filling the gap"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.341
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.049
89.0713%