| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.581 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 64.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
| | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "deliberately" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1114 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "remarkable" | | 3 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 849 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 5 | | Eva | 5 | | Lucien | 7 | | Moreau | 2 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Whitechapel" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the closest thing to a confes" | | 1 | "quite sitting right" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.47 | | std | 27.22 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 117 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 83 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 71 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 5 |
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| 80.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was lined" | | 3 | "got refused" |
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| 75.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "wasn't resting" | | 2 | "wasn't quite sitting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her the flat smelled of old paper and the lavender tea Eva insisted helped her concentrate, and Rory was suddenly, absurdly aware of how she must look — one of Eva's oversized jumpers, hair shoved behind her ears, a smudge of biro on her wrist where she'd been taking notes for three hours on something that was supposed to keep her too busy to think about precisely this man." | | 1 | "The last time she'd seen him, it had been on a rain-slicked rooftop in Whitechapel, and he had looked at her like she was a problem he genuinely didn't know how to solve — which, from a man who solved problems for a living, had felt like the closest thing to a confession she was ever going to get." | | 2 | "He moved past her into the cramped front room, and the flat seemed to shrink around him — all those books and scrolls and Eva's chaos of research, and Lucien in the middle of it, immaculate, out of place, like a blade laid down on a kitchen table." | | 3 | "He turned to face her, and the easy fixer's mask he wore — the one she'd watched him deploy on dock bosses and witches and once a very angry vampire — wasn't quite sitting right." | | 4 | "\"The kind I make my living staying off of.\" He set the cane against the bookshelf — deliberately, both hands free now, which was its own kind of language from him." | | 5 | "\"I sent you away because I do. Which makes you a liability I cannot afford and apparently\"—he exhaled, something raw cracking through the polish—\"cannot stay away from. So you'll forgive me, cara, if I came in person to keep you alive. I find I rather can't tolerate the alternative.\"" | | 6 | "And he didn't move toward her, didn't reach — just stood there in the ruin of Eva's research with his hands open at his sides, waiting, for once in his careful life, to be the one who got refused." |
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| 94.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 771 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04669260700389105 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018158236057068743 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 16.47 | | std | 15.09 | | cv | 0.916 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 90.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5882352941176471 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she got Lucien Moreau," | | 1 | "Then he'd told her to" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 8.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't move from the" | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes moved over" | | 2 | "She crossed her arms" | | 3 | "She did mean to ask" | | 4 | "She didn't, because asking it" | | 5 | "He'd said it was for" | | 6 | "She had not begged." | | 7 | "She was proud of that," | | 8 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 9 | "He held them, lightly, the" | | 10 | "She should say no." | | 11 | "She stepped back and let" | | 12 | "He moved past her into" | | 13 | "He didn't, not right away." | | 14 | "He turned to face her," | | 15 | "He'd been somewhere unpleasant, or" | | 16 | "She heard her own voice" | | 17 | "he said quietly" | | 18 | "He set the cane against" | | 19 | "She'd stopped breathing somewhere in" |
| | ratio | 0.529 | |
| 67.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt gave with" | | 1 | "Ptolemy, traitorous beast, slipped between" | | 2 | "She didn't move from the" | | 3 | "His mismatched eyes moved over" | | 4 | "She crossed her arms" | | 5 | "A faint smile, there and" | | 6 | "She did mean to ask" | | 7 | "She didn't, because asking it" | | 8 | "The last time she'd seen" | | 9 | "He'd said it was for" | | 10 | "She had not begged." | | 11 | "She was proud of that," | | 12 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 13 | "Lucien Moreau did not grip" | | 14 | "He held them, lightly, the" | | 15 | "She should say no." | | 16 | "Every sensible cell in her" | | 17 | "She stepped back and let" | | 18 | "He moved past her into" | | 19 | "Ptolemy followed him in and" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "To stay out of it." | | 1 | "Even Ptolemy stopped washing his" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, traitorous beast, slipped between her ankles and wound himself around the polished toe of Lucien's shoe, purring like he'd been waiting weeks for exact…" | | 1 | "Behind her the flat smelled of old paper and the lavender tea Eva insisted helped her concentrate, and Rory was suddenly, absurdly aware of how she must look — …" | | 2 | "The last time she'd seen him, it had been on a rain-slicked rooftop in Whitechapel, and he had looked at her like she was a problem he genuinely didn't know how…" | | 3 | "Every sensible cell in her body, all the cool-headed quick-thinking machinery that had gotten her this far, was lined up and voting no." | | 4 | "He'd been somewhere unpleasant, or done something he didn't like, and she despised the small soft thing in her chest that wanted to know which." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |