| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 70.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1012 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1012 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 58 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1024 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 958 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.31 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 2 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.977 | | wordCount | 1024 | | matches | | 0 | "not from in front or behind but from inside the hush itself, close as her own pulse, a voice" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 31.03 | | std | 25.01 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 78 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 13 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "been delighted " | | 1 | "been open" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd noticed it before she'd named it — a stillness pressed against her skin, the air dead and close as a held breath, and yet the petals around her ankles swayed." | | 1 | "No signal, which she'd expected — Eva had warned her the Grove ate signals — but the time read 11:47, then she blinked and it read 11:47 still, and then the numbers weren't numbers at all but a smear of light she couldn't focus on." | | 2 | "It had been delighted — a child's laugh, high and bright and quickly bitten off, the sound of someone hiding who couldn't quite hold it in." | | 3 | "Her heel met something soft and she nearly fell — looked down — a fox, dead, curled neat as a sleeping cat in the flowers." | | 4 | "But the dark between them, which had been a way out, was simply not a way out anymore — it was the same flat black as everywhere else, and when she put her hand toward it her fingers met cold, smooth bark where there had been open air." | | 5 | "It went on, that bright giggling sound, climbing, and other voices joined it — more children, a whole ring of them, circling, and under the laughter ran a wet clicking she felt in her back teeth more than heard." | | 6 | "It pressed on her ears like depth, like the bottom of a lake, and into it a voice spoke — not from in front or behind but from inside the hush itself, close as her own pulse, a voice that knew the shape of her name before she'd given it." | | 7 | "She gasped and clutched it through her shirt, the crimson light bleeding red between her fingers, and in that red glow she saw — for one half of one second, before the moon guttered out entirely — exactly how many of them stood in the ring of trees, watching her, smiling, and exactly how close the nearest one had come." |
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| 92.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 621 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.04186795491143317 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008051529790660225 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 12.49 | | std | 12.45 | | cv | 0.997 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4024390243902439 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Just black, and the standing" | | 1 | "Then it turned." | | 2 | "Then continued around it, giving" | | 3 | "Then the dark took the" |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 47.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd noticed it before she'd" | | 1 | "They bent in unison, then" | | 2 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 3 | "It fell from her mouth" | | 4 | "She tried again, louder, and" | | 5 | "She checked her phone." | | 6 | "She shoved it back in" | | 7 | "It hadn't moved." | | 8 | "She was fairly sure it" | | 9 | "she announced, to the trees," | | 10 | "It had been delighted —" | | 11 | "she said again, and hated" | | 12 | "She watched the grass flatten" | | 13 | "she whispered to it" | | 14 | "She stepped back." | | 15 | "Her heel met something soft" | | 16 | "Its eyes were open and" | | 17 | "She hadn't trodden there a" | | 18 | "She was certain she hadn't." | | 19 | "She backed toward the stones" |
| | ratio | 0.431 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones caught the" | | 1 | "Rory ducked between two of" | | 2 | "The pendant lay cool against" | | 3 | "Whatever the woman at the" | | 4 | "The wildflowers nodded in a" | | 5 | "That was the first wrong" | | 6 | "She'd noticed it before she'd" | | 7 | "Bluebells, foxglove, something pale that" | | 8 | "They bent in unison, then" | | 9 | "Rory stood very still." | | 10 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 11 | "It fell from her mouth" | | 12 | "She tried again, louder, and" | | 13 | "The clearing took the sound" | | 14 | "She checked her phone." | | 15 | "She shoved it back in" | | 16 | "The moon sat directly overhead." | | 17 | "It hadn't moved." | | 18 | "She was fairly sure it" | | 19 | "The thought slid through her" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "They bent in unison, then righted themselves, then bent again, as though something walked among them that she could not see." | | 1 | "But the dark between them, which had been a way out, was simply not a way out anymore — it was the same flat black as everywhere else, and when she put her hand…" | | 2 | "It pressed on her ears like depth, like the bottom of a lake, and into it a voice spoke — not from in front or behind but from inside the hush itself, close as …" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She backed, eyes fixed on the moving grass" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she announced (announce)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.462 | |