Run: 2026-05-29-01KSSJQ0Z4DEJ5KR8KDKEFRS94

Run Details

Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.072190
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed above the door, throwing its sickly light across the wet pavement. Rory shouldered through, shaking rain from her jacket, expecting the usual half-empty Tuesday crowd. What she got instead was a voice she hadn't heard in seven years. "Aurora? God, no. It can't be." She stopped. The woman at the bar had turned on her stool, drink halfway to her lips, and for a moment Rory's mind refused to match the face to the name buried somewhere beneath all the years she'd left in Cardiff. "Eva." But it wasn't Eva. The woman laughed, a sharp little sound, and Rory felt the ground shift. "Close. Sinead. You always did mix us up at parties." She set the glass down. "Sit. You look like you've seen a corpse." Rory crossed the room slow, peeling off her jacket, hanging it on the back of the stool. Silas, behind the bar, caught her eye and said nothing, just slid a clean glass forward and let her be. He had a way of disappearing into the woodwork when something needed room to breathe. "Sinead Brennan." Rory sat. "You cut your hair." "I cut a lot of things." She wore it short now, bleached white-blonde at the tips, nothing like the long red braid she used to chew on during lectures. There was a tattoo creeping up the side of her neck, ink that hadn't been there when they shared a flat off Crwys Road, when they were nineteen and certain of everything. "You're in London." "I'm in London." "Doing what?" Rory turned the glass in her fingers. "Deliveries. Restaurant work. Bit of this and that." Sinead's eyebrow climbed. "Pre-Law's finest. Top of the seminar. Brendan Carter's daughter, carrying takeaway across Soho." "You sound like my father." "I sound surprised." She drank. "You were going to be somebody. We had it all worked out. You'd take silk, I'd be your instructing solicitor, we'd terrorise the Cardiff bench until they begged us to stop." "Plans change." "Do they." It wasn't a question. Sinead studied her with the kind of attention Rory had forgotten people could give, the slow inventory of someone cataloguing the differences. "You've got a scar I don't recognise. No—I do. The wrist. You've always had that." "Childhood thing. Fell off a wall." "Right. The wall." Sinead nodded, then her eyes moved up Rory's arm, to her shoulder, to her face, and something in them softened and hardened at the same time. "You disappeared, Rory. One day you were there and the next your number was dead and Eva was telling everyone you'd gone travelling. Travelling." She made the word sound absurd. "You. Who wouldn't leave the flat without checking the locks twice." Rory looked at the bottles behind the bar, the neat regiment of them. "It wasn't travelling." "I know it wasn't." The honesty of it landed between them like a dropped plate. Rory turned her head. "You know." "Evan made sure everyone knew, eventually. After you'd gone." Sinead's jaw tightened. "Stood in the union bar telling anyone who'd listen that you were unstable. That you'd made things up. He cried, Rory. He actually managed tears, and there were people—people we knew—who put their arms around him." "And you?" "I broke his nose." Rory turned back. Sinead wasn't smiling. "They suspended me. My disciplinary, two weeks before finals." She shrugged, a movement that cost more than it pretended to. "I told the panel he'd put his hands on you. They asked if I'd witnessed it. I hadn't. You weren't there to say it either. So." She finished her drink and tapped the rim for Silas, who poured without comment. "I didn't sit my finals. Didn't qualify. Funny how one swing can rearrange a whole life." The bar seemed very quiet. Somewhere a fridge motor cycled on. "I didn't know," Rory said. "Course you didn't. You were busy surviving. I'm not—" She stopped, pressed two fingers to the bridge of her nose. "I'm not laying it at your door. That's not why I'm telling you. I just want you to know there was a cost on this side too. That you didn't vanish into clean air. You left a hole and people fell into it." Rory's hands had gone cold around the glass. "I should have called." "Yes." "I couldn't. For a long time I couldn't. Every number I dialled, I thought he'd somehow be on the other end of it." Sinead's anger drained, and what was left underneath looked worse, looked like grief gone stale. "I know that too. I read about it. Coercive control, they call it now. Wasn't even a crime when he was doing it. We had a name for everything except the thing that mattered." She laughed again, but it had no bottom to it. "Look at us. Two cautionary tales propping up a bar in Soho." "Speak for yourself. I'm gainfully employed." "You're a courier." "It pays the rent." Rory tipped her head toward the ceiling. "Flat upstairs. The man who poured your drink owns the place. He's—" she searched for the word "—a decent sort. Looks out for people." Sinead glanced at Silas, who had retreated to the far end and was studying a ledger that needed no studying. "He's listening." "He's always listening. You get used to it." "And you trust him." "I'm learning to." Sinead absorbed that, turned it over. "That's new. The Rory I knew didn't trust the weather forecast." "The Rory you knew got things wrong about who was safe and who wasn't. Cost her four years. So she's rebuilding the instrument from scratch." She drank, finally, the whisky burning a clean line down. "Some days the readings are better than others." For a while neither spoke. The rain ticked against the window. The neon buzzed. "I named my daughter after you," Sinead said. Rory set the glass down very carefully. "Aurora. She's three." Sinead pulled out her phone, swiped, held it up—a gap-toothed grin, a smear of jam, eyes screwed shut with laughter. "I told myself it was because I liked the name. But it wasn't. It was so I'd have to say it out loud. So you wouldn't just become a thing I used to know." Rory looked at the photo for a long time. The pub, the years, the broken nose, the suspension, all of it pressing down at once, and underneath it the small impossible fact of a child carrying her name across a city she'd never set foot in. "She's beautiful," Rory said, and meant it, and hated how thin the words were against the size of what had been given to her. "She is." Sinead pocketed the phone. "Don't make it weird." "I'm not." "You're about to." "I'm not." Rory wiped her eyes with the heel of her hand, quick, before it could become anything. "I'm just—glad. That something good came out of all that. That you got out the other side of it carrying something instead of nothing." Sinead's mouth twisted, almost a smile. "Took me long enough. Took me longer than it should've to stop being angry at the people who got hurt instead of the ones who did it. You included." "You're allowed." "I know I'm allowed. Doesn't make it right." She reached out and, after a hesitation that held seven years inside it, put her hand over Rory's on the bar. Her fingers were cold too. "You should call. When you've finished rebuilding your instrument, or before. Doesn't matter. Aurora the younger should meet Aurora the elder. It'd ruin her for life and I think she'd love it." Rory turned her hand over and held on.
created_at"2026-05-29T09:58:12.206Z" 5/29/2026, 9:58:12 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Sinead nodded then [then]"
1"She laughed again [again]"
2"She drank finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.646
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.092
88.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1276
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount628
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Rory20
Cardiff1
Eva1
Crwys1
Road1
Sinead12
Silas3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Sinead"
3"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Crwys"
2"Road"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like grief gone stale"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1276
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean22
std21.94
cv0.997
sampleLengths
042
16
241
31
417
523
652
78
864
93
102
1115
1216
135
1436
152
1643
176
1870
1916
204
2115
222
2348
242
254
266
2776
2811
295
3063
3112
321
3323
3471
356
363
3735
3822
398
404
413
4217
4343
4414
458
467
4757
4846
4924
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was studying"
85.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences99
ratio0.02
matches
0"\"Flat upstairs. The man who poured your drink owns the place. He's—\" she searched for the word \"—a decent sort. Looks out for people.\""
1"\"Aurora. She's three.\" Sinead pulled out her phone, swiped, held it up—a gap-toothed grin, a smear of jam, eyes screwed shut with laughter."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount597
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"usual half-empty Tuesday"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03015075376884422
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016750418760469012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.89
std11.31
cv0.877
sampleLengths
015
114
213
36
42
539
61
74
813
915
108
1117
1220
1315
144
154
1629
1732
183
193
202
217
228
233
2413
255
265
2731
282
296
3022
3115
326
3329
3430
3511
3613
373
384
3911
404
412
4212
4336
442
454
463
473
4820
4940
59.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3939393939393939
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners39
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Somewhere a fridge motor cycled"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences51
matches
0"She set the glass down"
1"He had a way of"
2"She wore it short now,"
3"It wasn't a question"
4"She made the word sound"
5"She shrugged, a movement that"
6"She finished her drink and"
7"She stopped, pressed two fingers"
8"She laughed again, but it"
9"she searched for the word"
10"She drank, finally, the whisky"
11"She reached out and, after"
12"Her fingers were cold too."
ratio0.255
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences51
matches
0"The green neon hummed above"
1"Rory shouldered through, shaking rain"
2"The woman at the bar"
3"The woman laughed, a sharp"
4"She set the glass down"
5"Rory crossed the room slow,"
6"Silas, behind the bar, caught"
7"He had a way of"
8"She wore it short now,"
9"Rory turned the glass in"
10"Sinead's eyebrow climbed."
11"It wasn't a question"
12"Sinead studied her with the"
13"Sinead nodded, then her eyes"
14"She made the word sound"
15"Rory looked at the bottles"
16"The honesty of it landed"
17"Rory turned her head."
18"Sinead's jaw tightened"
19"Rory turned back."
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory shouldered through, shaking rain from her jacket, expecting the usual half-empty Tuesday crowd."
1"Sinead glanced at Silas, who had retreated to the far end and was studying a ledger that needed no studying."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed again (laugh)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.062
leniency0.123
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.031
84.1479%