Run: 2026-05-29-01KSSJRZ08NF9RMN0MQT3EH5HR

Run Details

Duration:
43.5s
Cost:
$0.064900
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairwell down to the platform smelled of wet brick and old electricity, a current that had no business flowing in a station the Underground had sealed off in 1965. Detective Harlow Quinn descended it the way she descended everything—one hand trailing the rail, weight forward, counting steps out of a habit eighteen years of policework had carved into her. Forty-two steps. She remembered that detail because it was the sort of thing that mattered later, in courtrooms, when a barrister wanted to know exactly how long it had taken her to reach the body. At the bottom, the floodlights the forensics team had rigged turned the disused platform a flat, surgical white. The tiles were the colour of old teeth. Someone had strung tarpaulin across the mouth of the tunnel, and beyond it Quinn could hear the slow drip of groundwater finding its way through a century of London clay. "Mind the chalk," said a voice she didn't recognise. A uniformed constable, young, gripping his torch like it might bolt. "We've not photographed it yet." Quinn looked down. Chalk, yes—but not the careless scrawl of trespassing kids. Concentric rings, the outer one easily three metres across, ringed with marks she couldn't read and didn't intend to pretend she could. The body lay at the centre of it, on its back, arms loose at its sides. A man, middle-aged, in a good wool coat that had cost more than the constable made in a fortnight. She crouched at the edge of the circle, careful to keep her boots off the chalk, and let her eyes do the work before her mouth did. "Quinn." Detective Sergeant Aldous Pratt came round the tarpaulin, peeling off a latex glove. He had the satisfied look of a man who'd already written the report in his head. "Wasn't expecting them to send you. Thought this one was open and shut." "Then you thought wrong, or they wouldn't have sent me." She didn't look up. "Talk me through it." "Overdose." Pratt gestured at the body with the dangling glove. "We found a kit—syringe, a burner, the lot—tucked behind that pillar. He's got fresh tracks on his left arm. The chalk's some occult nonsense, ravers or one of those cults you get down here. He came down to use in peace, took too much, and that was that. Coroner'll confirm it but I'd stake my pension." "Don't," Quinn said. "You'll lose it." She moved around the circle slowly, on the balls of her feet, the way her old partner Morris used to. *Walk the scene like it's lying to you,* he'd said once, three years before he stopped saying anything at all. *Because it is.* The man's face was slack but unmarked. No froth at the lips, no blue tinge she'd have expected from a respiratory failure. His pupils, when she leaned close, were neither pinned nor blown. She'd seen enough overdoses to know the body's grammar of them, and this wasn't it. "His sleeves," she said. Pratt frowned. "What about them?" "They're down. Buttoned at the cuff." She pointed without touching. "You said fresh tracks on his left arm. So he rolled up his sleeve, injected himself, then—what—calmly rolled it back down and buttoned the cuff while the dose was killing him?" She straightened. "Men dying of an overdose don't do their buttons up, Aldous. They claw at their collars. They vomit. They fall where they're standing and they look like they fell. This man is laid out." A muscle worked in Pratt's jaw. "Maybe he did it before he shot up." "Then where's the tourniquet? You can't raise a vein on your own arm one-handed with the cuff fastened." She crouched again. "And look at the chalk." "It's vandalism." "It's undisturbed." She traced the air above the outer ring, not touching. "Every line's intact. No smudges, no scuffs. If he stumbled in here high and collapsed, he'd have dragged a foot through it. The chalk was laid *around* him. After he was already lying still." She let that sit. "Someone arranged him." The constable had gone very quiet. Pratt crossed his arms. "You're reaching. People do strange things on drugs." "They do." She stood and walked the perimeter once more, and this time something tugged at her—not a thought, a sensation, low in the sternum, a wrongness she had no file for. The same wrongness that had been waiting in the empty warehouse the night Morris went in ahead of her and never came back out, the night the official report had used words like *gas leak* and *hallucination* and *unexplained.* She had stopped trusting official reports that night. She knelt by the dead man's right hand. The fingers were curled, loosely, around something. Pratt's team had photographed the body but not, evidently, looked beneath it. Quinn snapped on a glove and gently eased the cold fingers open. A small brass compass lay in the palm. The casing was furred with green—verdigris, decades of it, maybe more. Its face was etched not with the cardinal points but with a ring of fine, deliberate sigils, the same family of marks as the chalk, though her eye couldn't have said how she knew that. The needle inside was not still. It quivered, swung, settled—and it was not pointing north. It pointed past her shoulder, toward the tarpaulin and the black tunnel beyond, and it held there with an insistence that magnetism alone couldn't explain. The cold in Quinn's chest deepened to something with teeth. "What is that?" Pratt had come closer despite himself. "I don't know yet." She was lying. She didn't know *what* it was, but she knew its weight in her hand was wrong, knew the needle's certainty was wrong, knew that a man did not die of an overdose with his cuffs buttoned and an instrument like this cradled in his fist while someone drew careful chalk around his body. She thought of a name she'd heard whispered twice in eighteen years and dismissed both times—a market that moved with the moon, that traded in things like this. She thought of Eva Kowalski, the archive girl who'd looked at her too steadily across an interview table last spring and said *you don't have the vocabulary for what you're investigating, detective.* "Bag it," Quinn said, and her voice came out level only because she made it. "Separately. And nobody touches that chalk until I've had it photographed from above." "Quinn—" "This isn't an overdose, Aldous." She closed her gloved hand around the compass, and felt the needle strain against her grip like something alive. "This is a message. The trouble is, I don't yet know who it was meant for." Behind her, the groundwater dripped, steady as a clock, counting down to something she couldn't see.
created_at"2026-05-29T09:59:15.73Z" 5/29/2026, 9:59:15 AM
model"anthropic/claude-4.8-opus-20260528"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency3677
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time43511
tokens_prompt923
tokens_completion1783
native_tokens_prompt1285
native_tokens_completion2339
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning98
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"end_turn"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0649
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"b0d3beaa-5ff7-4666-a749-b1bb2b14c916"
id"msg_01BWyRyLraFPzjvV2sjhZqmm"
is_byokfalse
latency1464
model_permaslug"anthropic/claude-4.8-opus-20260528"
provider_name"Anthropic"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.16.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1780048755-02iXeAsDashO9eR66qJo"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1780048755-TNUeJN46XoNYyIwPaaOx"
upstream_id"msg_01BWyRyLraFPzjvV2sjhZqmm"
total_cost0.0649
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Anthropic"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
82.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"loosely"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"tinge"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tinge"
2"traced"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords27
totalWords1131
ratio0.024
matches
0"Walk the scene like it's lying to you,"
1"Because it is."
2"around"
3"gas leak"
4"hallucination"
5"unexplained."
6"what"
7"you don't have the vocabulary for what you're investigating, detective."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount832
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Pratt"
discoveredNames
Underground1
Harlow1
Quinn7
London1
Sergeant1
Aldous1
Pratt7
Morris2
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Underground"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Sergeant"
4"Pratt"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"body but not, evidently, looked beneath it"
23.17% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.768
wordCount1131
matches
0"neither pinned nor"
1"not with the cardinal points but with a ring of fine, deliberate sigils, the same family of m"
29.68% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"let that sit"
1"reports that night"
2"knew that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39
std31.45
cv0.806
sampleLengths
095
156
225
369
427
543
618
766
86
943
1048
114
125
1377
1414
1526
162
1753
1818
1979
2039
2194
2210
239
24120
2528
261
2740
2816
87.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"were curled"
1"was furred"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was not pointing"
1"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences73
ratio0.082
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended it the way she descended everything—one hand trailing the rail, weight forward, counting steps out of a habit eighteen years of policework had carved into her."
1"Chalk, yes—but not the careless scrawl of trespassing kids."
2"\"They do.\" She stood and walked the perimeter once more, and this time something tugged at her—not a thought, a sensation, low in the sternum, a wrongness she had no file for."
3"The casing was furred with green—verdigris, decades of it, maybe more."
4"It quivered, swung, settled—and it was not pointing north."
5"She thought of a name she'd heard whispered twice in eighteen years and dismissed both times—a market that moved with the moon, that traded in things like this."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount840
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02738095238095238
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010714285714285714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean15.49
std12.33
cv0.796
sampleLengths
030
130
22
333
418
58
630
79
811
95
103
119
1222
1316
1419
1527
1614
1716
1813
1914
204
2110
2256
233
243
2520
2620
273
287
2915
3011
3115
324
332
343
3510
3633
3734
386
398
4021
415
422
4312
4438
453
466
474
488
4932
77.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5068493150684932
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences53
matches
0"She remembered that detail because"
1"She crouched at the edge"
2"He had the satisfied look"
3"She didn't look up"
4"She moved around the circle"
5"His pupils, when she leaned"
6"She'd seen enough overdoses to"
7"She pointed without touching"
8"She crouched again"
9"She traced the air above"
10"She let that sit"
11"She stood and walked the"
12"She knelt by the dead"
13"Its face was etched not"
14"It quivered, swung, settled—and it"
15"It pointed past her shoulder,"
16"She was lying"
17"She didn't know *what* it"
18"She thought of a name"
19"She thought of Eva Kowalski,"
ratio0.396
26.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences53
matches
0"The stairwell down to the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended it"
2"She remembered that detail because"
3"The tiles were the colour"
4"Someone had strung tarpaulin across"
5"A uniformed constable, young, gripping"
6"Quinn looked down."
7"Chalk, yes—but not the careless"
8"The body lay at the"
9"A man, middle-aged, in a"
10"She crouched at the edge"
11"Detective Sergeant Aldous Pratt came"
12"He had the satisfied look"
13"She didn't look up"
14"Pratt gestured at the body"
15"She moved around the circle"
16"The man's face was slack"
17"His pupils, when she leaned"
18"She'd seen enough overdoses to"
19"She pointed without touching"
ratio0.868
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"*Because it is.*"
ratio0.019
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The stairwell down to the platform smelled of wet brick and old electricity, a current that had no business flowing in a station the Underground had sealed off …"
1"She remembered that detail because it was the sort of thing that mattered later, in courtrooms, when a barrister wanted to know exactly how long it had taken he…"
2"A man, middle-aged, in a good wool coat that had cost more than the constable made in a fortnight."
3"The same wrongness that had been waiting in the empty warehouse the night Morris went in ahead of her and never came back out, the night the official report had…"
4"She thought of Eva Kowalski, the archive girl who'd looked at her too steadily across an interview table last spring and said *you don't have the vocabulary for…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She traced, not touching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.1600%