| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "he said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.349 | | leniency | 0.698 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |
| 88.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "charm" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "practiced ease" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1330 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 851 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 4 | | Rory | 7 | | Lucien | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Breathed | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite but the loosening of a held breath three years deep" |
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| 49.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.504 | | wordCount | 1330 | | matches | | 0 | "not relief, not quite, but the loosening of a held breath three years deep" | | 1 | "not quite, but the loosening of a held breath three years deep" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 30.23 | | std | 25.84 | | cv | 0.855 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 82 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 67 | | 28 | 77 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 88 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 75 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 56 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "was knocking" | | 1 | "was doing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "It always was — a heavy iron clunk that Eva swore could be heard from the curry house downstairs — and Rory had only just thrown it back when she remembered she hadn't asked who was knocking." | | 1 | "The other eye — the black one, the one that drank light rather than reflected it — flicked down the corridor, then back to her." | | 2 | "He stepped inside the way he stepped into every room — as though it had been waiting for him." | | 3 | "Up close she could see the things the hallway light had hidden — a fresh nick along his jaw, the faint grey shadow of exhaustion under his eyes." | | 4 | "\"And I have kept it in confidence. Three years, Aurora. I have not so much as whispered it.\" His voice came nearer; she heard the soft tap of the cane on the floorboards." | | 5 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the kitchen light — pale and old, the one mark on her she'd never tried to hide." | | 6 | "He was closer than she'd thought — close enough that she could smell cedar and cold night air and the faint metallic something that clung to him after he'd used the blade in the cane." | | 7 | "\"No. It isn't.\" He didn't move closer; if anything he held himself rigid, as though stillness were the only honesty he had left to offer." | | 8 | "Rory looked at him — at the tired eyes, the fresh cut, the cane, the careful, terrible stillness of a man bracing to be sent away." | | 9 | "Something eased in his shoulders — not relief, not quite, but the loosening of a held breath three years deep." |
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| 90.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 843 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.051008303677342826 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010676156583629894 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 11.56 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 68.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.44565217391304346 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he'd found the" | | 1 | "Then she slid the chain" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 41.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It always was — a" | | 1 | "She pulled the door open" | | 2 | "Her stomach dropped clean through" | | 3 | "His voice hadn't changed" | | 4 | "It still curled around her" | | 5 | "She didn't move." | | 6 | "He stepped inside the way" | | 7 | "He took in the towers" | | 8 | "He set the tip of" | | 9 | "She heard herself say, very" | | 10 | "She filled the kettle she" | | 11 | "His voice came nearer; she" | | 12 | "She set the kettle on" | | 13 | "She felt him notice it." | | 14 | "He always noticed everything." | | 15 | "He was closer than she'd" | | 16 | "His mismatched eyes held hers," | | 17 | "he said quietly, His jaw" | | 18 | "He didn't move closer; if" | | 19 | "It came out smaller than" |
| | ratio | 0.446 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt was the" | | 1 | "It always was — a" | | 2 | "She pulled the door open" | | 3 | "Her stomach dropped clean through" | | 4 | "His voice hadn't changed" | | 5 | "It still curled around her" | | 6 | "She didn't move." | | 7 | "Ptolemy wound figure-eights around her" | | 8 | "The other eye — the" | | 9 | "That was what he did." | | 10 | "That was what he'd always" | | 11 | "Rory shut the door." | | 12 | "He stepped inside the way" | | 13 | "The cramped flat seemed to" | | 14 | "He took in the towers" | | 15 | "Rory crossed her arms" | | 16 | "He set the tip of" | | 17 | "Lucien did not get tired." | | 18 | "Lucien did not bleed where" | | 19 | "The fact that he'd let" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He was closer than she'd thought — close enough that she could smell cedar and cold night air and the faint metallic something that clung to him after he'd used…" | | 1 | "Downstairs, someone laughed in the curry house, a warm ordinary sound from a warm ordinary world that had nothing to do with realms or true names or half-demons…" |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't, as though stillness were the only honesty he had left to offer" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She heard (hear)" | | 1 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.209 | | leniency | 0.419 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.093 | |