| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned back [back]" | | 1 | "she said carefully [carefully]" | | 2 | "Rory said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.552 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 62.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1202 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1202 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 920 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Rory | 16 | | Eva | 7 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | October | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.63 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.824 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | | 0 | "not the fog of Richmond Park but a darkness studded with distant points of light, as if the d" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 43.32 | | std | 31.48 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 106 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 116 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 82 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 94 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 12 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't blowing" | | 1 | "was like surfacing" | | 2 | "was carrying" | | 3 | "was learning" | | 4 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks here were old in a way the others weren't — gnarled, immense, their bark furrowed deep enough to lose a hand in." | | 1 | "Eva — practical, fierce Eva, who'd dragged Rory out of Cardiff and into a new life with nothing but a duffel bag and a phone full of train times — stood with her arms crossed tight over her chest, staring at the stones." | | 2 | "It was like surfacing from underwater — a pressure she hadn't known she was carrying simply lifted off her skull, and the world bloomed into colour." | | 3 | "She stood at the edge of a clearing bathed in light that came from no sun she could find; it fell soft and golden and seemed to rise as much from the grass as descend from the sky." | | 4 | "And the grass — it wasn't grass." | | 5 | "Insects — or things shaped roughly like insects — drifted above the flowers on wings of glass, throwing tiny rainbows wherever the light caught them." | | 6 | "They had gone solid, or nearly — a tall figure of smoke-dark substance, their violet eyes the only constant in a body that drank the golden light without reflecting it." | | 7 | "She noticed, with a small cold prickle, that Nyx left no track at all — but neither, when she glanced back, did the air itself seem disturbed where they'd passed." |
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| 95.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 915 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04480874316939891 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008743169398907104 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 15.75 | | std | 11.98 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 68.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.44155844155844154 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Eva's footprints filled and" | | 1 | "Then a woman was standing" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath ghosted out in" | | 1 | "they said, and the words" | | 2 | "It had been quiet for" | | 3 | "She'd been doing that a" | | 4 | "It was like surfacing from" | | 5 | "She stood at the edge" | | 6 | "It was a carpet of" | | 7 | "Their scent rolled over her," | | 8 | "They had gone solid, or" | | 9 | "She started across the clearing," | | 10 | "She noticed, with a small" | | 11 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 12 | "It simply stopped, swallowed by" | | 13 | "She was small, slighter than" | | 14 | "Her eyes were pale lavender," | | 15 | "She wore no shoes." | | 16 | "She turned back to Rory," | | 17 | "she said carefully" | | 18 | "She lifted one pale hand" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came out" | | 1 | "Rory had walked Richmond Park" | | 2 | "The oaks here were old" | | 3 | "Her breath ghosted out in" | | 4 | "they said, and the words" | | 5 | "Rory's hand went, without her" | | 6 | "The crimson stone sat warm" | | 7 | "It had been quiet for" | | 8 | "The third member of their" | | 9 | "Eva — practical, fierce Eva," | | 10 | "Eva flicked her eyes toward" | | 11 | "She'd been doing that a" | | 12 | "Rory said, and stepped between" | | 13 | "The change was instant and" | | 14 | "It was like surfacing from" | | 15 | "The fog was gone." | | 16 | "She stood at the edge" | | 17 | "It was a carpet of" | | 18 | "Their scent rolled over her," | | 19 | "Eva breathed, coming through behind" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it throbbed like something" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson stone sat warm against her sternum, pulsing in a slow rhythm that didn't match her heartbeat." | | 1 | "Eva — practical, fierce Eva, who'd dragged Rory out of Cardiff and into a new life with nothing but a duffel bag and a phone full of train times — stood with he…" | | 2 | "The standing stones were still there, but through the gap between them she saw not the fog of Richmond Park but a darkness studded with distant points of light,…" | | 3 | "They had gone solid, or nearly — a tall figure of smoke-dark substance, their violet eyes the only constant in a body that drank the golden light without reflec…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, and the words arrived less as sound than as a draft against her ear, a whisper carried on wind that wasn't blowing" | | 1 | "Isolde tilted, and the wildflowers leaned toward her like an audience" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |