Run: 2026-05-29-01KSSKBAZ7XQN608F2175MWB2Z

Run Details

Duration:
41.1s
Cost:
$0.060695
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in sheets across Camden High Street, turning the pavement into a black mirror that fractured under every footfall. Quinn ran with her coat plastered to her back, her breath sawing in time with the slap of her boots. Forty yards ahead, the man she'd been watching for three weeks ducked between a kebab shop and a shuttered tattoo parlour. "Herrera!" Her voice cut through the hiss of the downpour. "Police! Stop where you are!" He didn't stop. Of course he didn't. She'd clocked him outside The Raven's Nest an hour ago, the green neon bleeding across his shoulders as he slipped out the side door with a canvas bag tucked under one arm. Former paramedic. Struck off the register. The sort of man who turned up at the edges of every case she couldn't close, who knew faces she couldn't name and went places her warrant card meant nothing. Tonight she meant to find out where. He vaulted a low railing without breaking stride, and Quinn followed, her palm scraping wet iron. Eighteen years on the job had taught her how a guilty man moved—the panic in the shoulders, the wasted energy of someone who'd never trained to run. Herrera didn't move like that. He ran clean, economical, like he knew exactly where the next corner went and she didn't. That bothered her more than the chase. "You're only making this worse for yourself," she called. A glance over his shoulder. Olive skin, dark curls flattened to his scalp, water sheeting off a chin set with something that wasn't quite fear. He looked at her the way a man looks at a problem he hasn't decided how to solve. Then he was gone, swallowed by the mouth of a pedestrian tunnel beneath the canal bridge. Quinn hit the tunnel at full speed. Sodium light buzzed overhead, painting the tiles a sickly amber, and her shadow stretched long and warped on the curved walls. Ahead, his footsteps echoed and split, multiplied by the acoustics until she couldn't tell if he was ten feet away or thirty. Graffiti crawled across every surface. Somewhere water dripped with the patience of a clock. She came out the far end into a service yard hemmed by hoarding boards. Dead end. Brick on three sides, a chain-link fence sagging on the fourth, and beyond it the rusted gate of an Underground station that had been bricked up since before she'd joined the force. CAMDEN ROAD — CLOSED. The signage hung by one bolt, swinging in the wind. No Herrera. Quinn slowed, drew her breath, and let her eyes do the work. Her hand found the small torch on her belt and the cone of light swept the yard. Puddles. A skip. The fence—and there, at the base of it, a panel of chain-link peeled back like the lid of a tin, the cut edges bright where the rust had been sheared away. She crouched and put the beam through the gap. A flight of stairs descended into the dark, the tiles white once, now grey, the air rolling up to meet her carrying a smell that didn't belong to a dead station. Tallow smoke. Something herbal and bitter underneath it. And further down, faint as a rumour, the murmur of voices. A lot of voices. For a station that had been shut for sixty years. Quinn stayed where she was, water running off the end of her nose, and weighed it. Procedure said call it in. Wait for backup. Don't pursue a suspect into a confined space alone, at night, without a clear picture of what lay below. Every line of her training stacked up against the hole in the fence, neat as a charge sheet. But she'd called things in before. Three years ago she'd called it in, done everything by the book, and DS Morris had gone through a door she hadn't followed him through and never come out the other side. No body. No explanation. A file marked OPEN that nobody touched anymore, a coffin they'd buried empty while his wife pretended not to know it was empty. Quinn had spent three years learning what the book didn't cover. This was the edge of it. She could feel it the way you feel the cold off an open window in a dark room. She slipped through the gap. The stairs took her down past a landing where a poster for a film from 1962 still clung to the wall, a woman's painted smile half-eaten by damp. The voices grew. Light flickered up from below—not electric, but the restless orange of open flame. Quinn killed her torch and let her eyes adjust, one hand trailing the tiled wall, the other resting on the empty space where, on another job, a firearm might have sat. She had a baton and a warrant card and stubbornness. She'd worked with less. The stairwell opened out, and Quinn stopped. The platform below had become something she had no word for. Stalls crowded the length of it, draped in dark cloth, lit by lanterns that burned without any wick she could see. Figures moved between them—too many, too still in the wrong moments, their shadows falling at angles that didn't match the light. A woman weighed teeth on a brass scale. A man in a butcher's apron sold jars that glowed faintly green. The track bed had been boarded over and turned into an aisle, and at the far end a tunnel mouth exhaled cold air and the suggestion of more. Quinn's mind, the part trained on eighteen years of high streets and interview rooms, reached for an explanation and found nothing it could hold. And there—threading the crowd with that same clean, unhurried stride—Herrera. The canvas bag still under his arm. He hadn't looked back since the tunnel. He thought he'd lost her. A hand closed on Quinn's sleeve. She turned fast, baton half-drawn, and found a thin figure in a hood holding out an open palm. In it lay a small pale disc, yellowed, carved with a symbol she didn't recognise. "Token," the figure said, the voice dry as turned pages. "Everyone pays the token. No token, no Market." Quinn looked at the bone in the stranger's hand. Looked past it, to Herrera's back disappearing between the stalls toward that black mouth of tunnel. She had maybe ten seconds before she lost him for good.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1076
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1076
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"footfall"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"could feel"
5"flickered"
6"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1071
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1049
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Quinn11
Underground1
Herrera4
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
globalScore0.976
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite fear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.934
wordCount1071
matches
0"not electric, but the restless orange of open flame"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"OPEN that nobody"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.55
std27.91
cv0.808
sampleLengths
062
115
27
368
47
564
67
79
843
916
1064
1162
122
1363
1459
1514
1616
1745
1876
1924
205
2189
227
23101
2424
2529
266
2733
2818
2925
3011
84.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences83
matches
0"was gone"
1"been bricked"
2"been sheared"
3"been shut"
4"been boarded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences85
ratio0.071
matches
0"Eighteen years on the job had taught her how a guilty man moved—the panic in the shoulders, the wasted energy of someone who'd never trained to run."
1"CAMDEN ROAD — CLOSED."
2"The fence—and there, at the base of it, a panel of chain-link peeled back like the lid of a tin, the cut edges bright where the rust had been sheared away."
3"Light flickered up from below—not electric, but the restless orange of open flame."
4"Figures moved between them—too many, too still in the wrong moments, their shadows falling at angles that didn't match the light."
5"And there—threading the crowd with that same clean, unhurried stride—Herrera."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1058
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.026465028355387523
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002835538752362949
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean12.6
std8.84
cv0.701
sampleLengths
021
120
221
310
45
53
64
732
82
94
1030
117
1216
1327
145
1516
167
179
185
1920
2018
2116
227
2321
2422
255
269
2714
282
2932
304
3110
322
3312
3417
351
362
3731
389
3931
402
416
4211
434
4410
4516
465
473
4819
4918
81.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5411764705882353
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"Of course he didn't."
1"Then he was gone, swallowed"
2"Somewhere water dripped with the"
3"A lot of voices."
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her voice cut through the"
1"He didn't stop."
2"She'd clocked him outside The"
3"He vaulted a low railing"
4"He ran clean, economical, like"
5"He looked at her the"
6"She came out the far"
7"Her hand found the small"
8"She crouched and put the"
9"She could feel it the"
10"She slipped through the gap."
11"She had a baton and"
12"She'd worked with less."
13"He hadn't looked back since"
14"He thought he'd lost her."
15"She turned fast, baton half-drawn,"
16"She had maybe ten seconds"
ratio0.23
74.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rain came down in sheets"
1"Quinn ran with her coat"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"He didn't stop."
4"She'd clocked him outside The"
5"The sort of man who"
6"Tonight she meant to find"
7"He vaulted a low railing"
8"Herrera didn't move like that."
9"He ran clean, economical, like"
10"That bothered her more than"
11"A glance over his shoulder."
12"Olive skin, dark curls flattened"
13"He looked at her the"
14"Quinn hit the tunnel at"
15"Sodium light buzzed overhead, painting"
16"Graffiti crawled across every surface."
17"She came out the far"
18"Brick on three sides, a"
19"CAMDEN ROAD — CLOSED."
ratio0.77
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He vaulted a low railing without breaking stride, and Quinn followed, her palm scraping wet iron."
1"Olive skin, dark curls flattened to his scalp, water sheeting off a chin set with something that wasn't quite fear."
2"Brick on three sides, a chain-link fence sagging on the fourth, and beyond it the rusted gate of an Underground station that had been bricked up since before sh…"
3"A flight of stairs descended into the dark, the tiles white once, now grey, the air rolling up to meet her carrying a smell that didn't belong to a dead station…"
4"Figures moved between them—too many, too still in the wrong moments, their shadows falling at angles that didn't match the light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.9227%